Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar



Thanks

but do read the other parts that i have written


Ok. I didn't see there are many more parts as well.
Sure, I will read them all.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ZindagiCalling


Ok. I didn't see there are many more parts as well.
Sure, I will read them all.
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Index is at page 1 post no 2
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Posted: 8 years ago

Tasveer Banata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...

Tasveer Nhi Banti...


He was standing near the window and was looking outside, poundering over the thought what will he do tomorrow. He was angry, hurt and filled with the agony. This is the first time he had seen his principals getting shattered where at one side he hated her lies and other time he knew from his deep heart that whatever she did actually gives the good outcome for his family. He had just asked sometime from her and she has snatched that chance too. Now, he was here thinking over what should he do? He was thinking of that his phone rang. He picked and it was from his client asking for the statue and it is urgent too. He agreed and went from there to do his most favourite work that he always likes making statue. He was standing near the stool and taking out his equipment. He switches on the ipad and his fav ghazal started playing. As, the list goes on the one ghazal catches his attention and he was started thinking and was getting distracted too he hated this thing but no one can do anything. He just got so immersed in that ghazal.

Tasveer Banaata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Banaata Hun , Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Ik Khwaab Sa Dekha Hai Tabeer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


He was remembering his first meet where he had destroyed her shop and in taking for revenge she had run the bulldozer over his car. In the second meet to she was so cheerful and blabbered about how she would know he is Omkara then told about that she had talked to his family. He was smiling at that scene. He still knew how much Rudra had pulled his leg for it. Then, seeing Jhanvi Tahkurain killing herself, and seeing her in Kaali Tahkur's haveli, I had considered her to be home breaker just like Svetlana. He closed his eyes thinking how he imagined Svetlana standing beside her when she descended from the stairs. He felt regretted to not to see what she wanted to show when she dropped her kalira near her foot. Now, he remembered her giving hints but he ignored that in burning himself in his own fury. He still loathed himself how he think of as a characterless girl when she was dancing and I smirk at my own plight that may be it was Kaali Thakur who made her do it. He regretted being in his delusion then too when in train she said,Jarur kisi ne apka Dil dukhaya hoga. I was so astonished to react listening to the words of her whom I consider a Svetlana version 2. Then, I smiled at the scene where she pushed him out of the train and they fell in water. Then their cute banter, his getting the hit with poison dart and then her saving him. When he got conscious seeing myself at dargah I was relieved but furious too because it's because of her that I suffered and left her. I ignored the words of babaji but now I think he was right when he said. "Zindagi Ke Safar Ke Humsafar Ho Tum...Aayega Tu Zid Pe Toh Kayamat Hogi...Hai Ishq Abhi Massoom.... After that I had thought that I would never see her face but destiny still played his game. I was again in front of her people were following her to kill. I was perplexed to see the fury in the eyes, I felt bad now but that time I was little pitied her the way the whole village is after her. They were going to kill her and I was not the person who want that too happen no matter what she did was wrong but killing is not the option still I try to go away but when I heard her heart wrenching shout I just saw her getting hit by the sword and I end up beating the man of Kaali Thakur and to save from villager I end up marrying her. I left from barielly telling her that I don't believe in this marriage it was all the drama. The Omkara Singh Oberoi who thought, himself to be the one woman man had thought not to marry after this.

Tasveer Banaata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Bedard Mohabbat Ka Itna Sa Hai Afsaana...


Bedard Mohabbat Ka Itna Sa Hai Afsaana...


Nazaron Se Mili Nazarein...


Main Ho Gya Deewana...


Ab Dil Ki Behalne Ki Taqdeer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


I had thought that I won't ever meet her. But I meet her agai but not as Gauri but as chulbul. I was so happy to have a best friend like him who was there for me at every step. I always owe him everything from the start when he saved my mother from getting hurt. He was the one who always try to help me and try to uncover the truth of Svetlana. It's because of him that I came to know that why Svetlana wants to destroy the Oberoi family specially Tej and my mom. I was so infuriated that I would have killed Mr. Oberoi but he was the one to stop me telling me that my father also helped him to uncover the truth. I still not able believe that he can help us in uncovering that Svetlana. After, the closing of Svetlana Chapter I was happy I was moving forward in my life. I was glad that my buddy never left my side he was there to share but something was also changing my heart was started feeling something the current which always refer to static were increasing and the sensation was increasing I was hell confuse but why? I got to know later I avoided, I avoided him too. I came across kaali too who is here to destroy my family that I knew but how? And Mr. Oberoi is as clueless as ever he will mess up with only people who want to destroy his family I had told him and warned him too but we can't expect he will back down. He is not reacting now but I have to wait. When it became intolerable I finally decided to tell Chulbul what I feel. But before this I send a detective to know about Gauri as I wanted to end the chapter before starting the new. Irony of the life the person I want to erase from my life end up the person I love and consider best friend. I had told her to go to Oberoi Mansion. I was going insane and wandering when I got the call from detective and told everything about Kaali Thakur being famous goon and his illegal activitiy what he had done to Gauri's family and once again I was in my guilt. Feeling killing me for going this torture first time I have let down my weapon and went to dargah and listen to that baba what he said I thought may be I should take time and decide. But, why would she listen to me she always does what she want she never care what I want when I told her to leave she was there sometime as Gauri and sometime as chulbul. Why the heck she makes everything so, difficult for me? I was not able to concentrate on my work and I was highly irritated.

Tasveer Banaata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Dum Bhar Ke Liye Meri Duniya Mein Chale Aao...


Dum Bhar Ke Liye Meri Duniya Mein Chale Aao...


Tarsi Huyi Aankhon Ko...


Phir Shakal Dikha Jao...


Mujhse Toh Meri Bigdi Taqdir Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Suddenly, I remember that I had told her to leave this place. I was worried what if she left now. I closed my eyes in foolishness to tell her to go from here and not caring about her security. I ran instantly from there and I met with my brothers. Shivaay was worried seeing me like this and asked, "Hey What Happened Om? Itni raat ko tum aise kaha jaa rhe ho. Hum tujhe tere room gye the dhundhne fir pata chala ki tum apne is studio mein ho kya baat hai? I was firstly hell worried and told, "Shivaay! Hum baad mein baat karenge filhaal mujhe jaane de vrna bhut der ho jaayegi... Rudra was analysing the behaviour may be he had got the idea and wiggling his eyebrows said with tinge of tease, "Mujhe pata hai O ko kaha jaane ki jaldi hai... Shivaay rolled his eyes seeing his most intelligent protein shake lover brother saying and told him to shut up. I was getting frustrated and told him, "Shivaay Main bahar jaa rha hun Gauri ko maine bola tha ki chali jaaye yahan se.. Itni raat ko voh kaha jaayegi aur it is not safe. Shivaay raised his eyebrows getting the point and looked at smirking Rudra and Rudra with mischevious voice told Shivaay, "Shivaay bhyia! Maine kaha tha naa bhabhi ko mat jaaye kyuki Kuch time baad hum O ko unke peeche bhaagte huye dekhenge... I was getting angry and scolded him, "Mere paas tumhri fisool ki baat k liye time nhi hai... aur ab mujhe jaane do... Rudra smirking told, "Humaare paas bhi nhi hai waste time voh tumhri fikar thi isiliye tumhre paas aa rhe the. Vaise agr bhaabhi k paas jaana hai voh buama ke saath vaale kamre mein hai I was relieved and saw my two brothers laughing at my plight and shrugged them and told them to leave as I have to complete my work and I left for my studio.

Tasveer Banaata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Ik Khwaab Sa Dekha Hai...


Tabeer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Banaata Hun, Tasveer Nhi Banti...


Tasveer Nhi Banti...


I was making and thinking about the lies she had told I was pondering over my believes and the Daadi's word, "Beta! Teri problem hi yhi hai ki tujhe milawat pasand nhi... Mere papa ji kaha krte the... Jaise sunaar sone ko jevar bnaane k liye todhi milawat krta hai theekh vaise hi zindagi mein pyaar mein todhi milawat honi jaruri hoti hai... aur woh kami puri tumhri biwiyan karegi tbhi toh hogi takr ki Ishqbaaazi I smiled at that and muttered. "Takar ki Ishqbaaazi I realized now what daadi used to say and slowly i am getting the view and Gauri's state of mind why she did that and I am starting acknowledging her. I love her because chulbul is also a part of her. I was smiling at the end realizing the true of my feelings but still there was a lingering thought something that is stopping me I wonder what could it that be. I was little confuse and thought to drop this half finished statue and I will complete it tomorrow otherwise I will not be able to make it the way I use to it I need to clear my head first.

Keeping that in my mind I left to my room and started pondering over the lingering thought and I don't know when I slept.

***********THE END************

Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi finally I was able to put my feelings of Omkara in my point of view in mere 1,876 words. It took me quite a lot of efforts to portray the feelings still there are something about his feelings that will uncover when the time prevails. I would love to hear you reviews in my comment please do whole heartily comment on this part I am sure you guys will love it...


P.S. Keep Commenting Guys


With Regards
Ila
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome...loved it yar...
you portrayed om's emotions very well
they was a flow continues through out the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its so amazing...u wrte dwn omkaras state of mind very well...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Ila, 😊
This was absolutely beautiful!! 👏 Right from Omie's guilt n regret to realization, absolutely loved this os. 😃 Thanku for the pm. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update. 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM, Ila :)



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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice Ila
Beautiful part 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update dear
thanks for pm

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