~Perfect Strangers~ TS (Aabi-Shan) Epilogue (11/04) Pg 6 *Completed* - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: akriti154

Beautiful beautiful and beautiful
aabi n shan r happy in they lil world
him helping her in cafr n dose girls jealous of her whenever he wud kiss her
finally married n d honeymoon wali harkatein was superb
d scene wen she was talking to hee mother n he was busy teasing n convincing her fr d weekend getaway was super
thankfully pari was there fr support
him accompanying her fr lingerie shopping n d reason behind dat was mastt
haider gt beatings
Barbados was awe
d tension while dressing up n stepping out while lethaly shirtless ibad was icing on cake
so d chocolate smudge worked n dey r gonna become parents
thnxx fr dis beautiful piece
will b waiting fr more frm u
tc


Thank you for this beautiful comment Akriti. โค๏ธ

I'm so glad you loved the epilogue so much! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aabi Shan are love. โค๏ธ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Res. Res. Res. โค๏ธ

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Unres.
I'm listening to music while unresing this and my player sure knows what song to play as it comes up with Saas from JTHJ. <3
This song suits this scenario of Aabi Shan perfectly from strangers to lovers. โค๏ธ
Specially the first paragraph and Rooh Ne Chhuu Li Jism Ki Khushboo Tu Jo Paas Aayi.. For Ibaad! โค๏ธ

I absolutely love this song! Shreya Ghoshal's mesmerizing voice made it one of my fav songs when it came out. โค๏ธ
Esp.. those lines, Kab tak hosh sambhale koi.. Hosh ude toh udd jaane do. Dil kab seedhi raah chala hai.. Raah mude toh mudd jaane do..

Then secondly, you know I love love love you! ๐Ÿค—
Here's to so many more of our collaborations! :*
The way you keep mentioning me in each comment is truly overwhelming. :*
Coming up to the update, I don't feel that you've updated after a month cuz I've been getting those treats by you on WhatsApp mostly everyday. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I love you too! โค๏ธ
So may more! :* I cant wait to present them. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I had to mention you. My notes aren't complete without your name. *kisses*
I love sending you whatever I write and then those dreamy exclamations in your replies. They make my day. ๐Ÿค—

To start with I love the swag which Ibaad has with which he just got to the bar and sat down with Shan! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘
He's putting Justin Bieber to shame with it. (if the singer has some, apparently.) ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
I loved even more how Shan replied that does she knows him enough to tell him the purpose of visiting Miami. ๐Ÿ˜†

Aabi and swag are twin brothers! ๐Ÿ˜Ž
And I hate Justin Bieber! ๐Ÿคข
So damn much more after his so called concert in Mumbai a few days back..
I don't understand how people even like him or his songs. He's pain to eyes and ears! ๐Ÿฅฑ

Like I told you once during our calls, that guys tend to run around after girls who come easy but they're solely for casual fun and those who don't give in and show them their place are actually women and like said they're for lifetime.
And of course Ibaad has to like her attitude. ๐Ÿ˜‰ I loved how cutely after that he introduced himself, such a charmer. <3

I totally agree with you on this!
Human tends to appreciate and value only which comes with efforts. Muft cheez ki kadar kisi ko nahi hoti. ๐Ÿ˜†

Their changing chemistry after their introduction was seriously cute with a tinge of hot. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Shan has to love his company for who would mind such a hot sexy stranger! I loved how she thought of him as hunk. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
The way Ibaad kept pushing the hair strands behind her ear and that flirting bit with beautiful name was love. โค๏ธ
You want me to flirt with you?!
I'm not trapping you.
You're blushing Ms Imam!
I don't flirt, I'm just being honest..
These few lines were cheesy yet hell sexy! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I totally adore how he keeps complimenting her beauty. He's Baby! :*
Their conversation about that book was so cute where Shan realizes that it's a series. ๐Ÿ˜†
And she indeed checks him out which Ibaad realizes! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
I loved how he asks, "checking me out?!" โ˜บ๏ธ
Hell Yeah Baby she does! Who wouldn't?! You're Fire! :*
Ly and Pari are happy seeing her enjoy with a handsome company. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I'm so glad you loved the flirtatious encounters.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
They're chemistry had to change. I mean even a blind girl can't resist the man Ibaad is. โค๏ธ
Shan toh phir bhi is in her complete senses. Well, I find hair tucking very loving yet sensual. So I always make a point to keep it my story. :P
He's the most adorable baby. โค๏ธ
Who wouldn't check him out? He's Tabaahi.. *Fireee*

To be honest, I liked how she talked about it to him. Sometimes, it's better to share your grief with a stranger cuz they don't judge you unlike your known acquaintances and Ibaad's suggestion to dance it out was cool.
I could visualize them in their gorgeous outfits dancing to the beats. Shan's chic black dress and Aabi's navy blue t-shirt.
That grey and blue combination looks lethal on the man.
Their scents! The way they started recognizing each other's scent was sexy.
Ibaad's amber and musk, while Shan's rose and jasmine. Saxxy! โค๏ธ
The way he pulled her close was so damn hot. I really would've lost my senses in this closeness. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I tried adding the pictures of their outfits in the end but the whole text was getting disturbed because of it. So I skipped it. I hate IF at a times!!
Amber and Musk is hell sexyy!!!
I would've too! ๐Ÿคช

Shan! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† How cute is she, telling him that she hungry! ๐Ÿ˜†
Ibaad is really moving fast! Dinner Date. ๐Ÿ˜†
I cracked up at Grasshopper! ๐Ÿคฃ
Their Dinner and Dancing session was Uber Uber cute and I could so imagine Ibaad doing cute weird steps with Swag! ๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ
Like Cute Is synonymous to Zaroon Hotmess Junaid then Swag is synonymous to Ibaad Sexy Ashraf.
(As said by you!) :*

He's adorably eager! ๐Ÿ˜†
Grasshopper comes from TFIOS! :P
This story makes me cry as we go towards end. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Heart breaking. ๐Ÿ’”

Dare Not Friend Zone Me Miss Imam!
Dayyyum! Hell Hell Hell Sexyy! โ˜บ๏ธ
Aabi is such a cutie, I can imagine him doing that funny step by that man in the restaurant. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
He looked Uber Cute in KNS doing that spcly that electrocution one. ๐Ÿคฃโค๏ธ
Their bit at the fountain where Ibaad tells her that Haider is a loser to lose out on her and tucks that strand of hair behind. Uff!
The way he holds her face in her palm, wipes away her tears and tells her that he who respects her rules is the one who truly loves her. <3
Their Hug! Uff my fragile heart. โค๏ธ
The beauty of this scene. ๐Ÿ‘
The way she cried in his arms. Uff, Love.
I want to give you a bone crushing hug for this. ๐Ÿค—

Rahul Kapoor is the sexiest character played by Fawad. โ˜บ๏ธ
Who would say he's playing a gay character? Though a secret observation done, quite a many Gay men are sexy. They break your heart when you look over their spouse and find, Oh Its a man! ๐Ÿฅบ

Fountain bit my fav too! They're real beautiful. Perfect Strangers. โค๏ธ
And its something believe in very firmly. A man who loves you truly will respect your rules and will never even try to break them!
Coz he's not with you just to satisfy his physical needs. He's there because he wants to be with you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hugs back!!!

Shan's hidden childishness was so cute. ๐Ÿ˜†
And how Ibaad was just watching her, Bliss.
The stranger part was hilarious. ๐Ÿ˜† Hi-5 and Hug, not bad.
But the way Ibaad pulled her closer and the kiss, Dayyyum! โ˜บ๏ธ
It was so sizzling hot and she tasted like Vanilla. *blush!* โ˜บ๏ธ
Room! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I'm so happy that you loved their kiss!! โ˜บ๏ธ They were so attracted to each other that it had to be hot!

Ibaad's eagerness at the reception and the glares he was giving to the manager! Gosh, if stares could kill he would've been to ashes till now. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
The knowing smile manager gave him and the mind your own business look he gave back to him! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

That was something I could just imagine Aabi doing. Our Baby! โค๏ธ
And I don't doubt on that ashes part! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Their elevator kisses, gawd they can't just keep off each other. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I loved that conversation where Shan mentions about his lips! Dayyyum, they're softer than anyone could've imagined. โ˜บ๏ธ
The way Aabi eyes her lips! Uff. โ˜บ๏ธ

I absolutely loved the eyelock they shared. Beautiful and Deep.
The way she's so concerned about him and the way he wants to punch Haider, they know that it isn't just a one night thing.
The old couple part was beautiful, their words turned out true.
Ibaad's struggle to open the damn door! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
Shan's torcher to keep up with, the kisses and blowing air. Tauba! โ˜บ๏ธ
Then that housekeeper guy! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Aabi's cute possessiveness. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
This man is love! <3 Breaking few bones. Awwiee. :*

No! They can't. How can they? โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜‰
I'm glad you loved the eye lock and old couple part. โค๏ธ
I had loved it too when you suggested this.
Aabi is hell possessive!

Coming to their scorching hot make out! โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
Believe me I blushed like a mad woman reading it all over again!
Only if IF had some fire emojis, this paragraph about the make out would've been solely dedicated to that fire emoji.
That Sexy Dragon Tattoo! Dayyyum! That too on his chest. โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ
I loved how Aabi asked her about it and Shan found it sexy, ofc it's hell sexy! *Fire!*
Shan placing open mouthed kisses on it!!! *Fanning myself!*
Shan moans taking his name! *Uff!*
Those kisses and those touches..โ˜บ๏ธ *adfybcdhhhivxefvyjvcfg*
I'm DEAD! Duniya Walon! BAS!!!!!!!
Kisses above her bosom and Shan unhooks the first fastener of his trousers! *Ahyvxgbjifjknb* โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
The way he cussed, seeing her curves! Jaan Lelo!! โ˜บ๏ธ
Here I would give you credits that the make out scene could've vulgar owning to the details but you wrote it beautifully! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. *bows*
I was nervous abt the make out part coz you ace writing hot stuff. *sheepish smile* But reading everyone's comments, I'm finally at peace. ๐Ÿ˜†
I'm glad I was able to keep it the way you wanted and had imagined. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Love you! ๐Ÿค—

Shan was sensible to talk about protection and Ibaad's cute face to it. Awwiee. ๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ
Both are so impatient. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
The morning scene was BEAUTIFUL! I mean, the way Ibaad was holding onto her, sleeping so cutely was love! โค๏ธ
Apart from the make out and their initial interaction at the bar which are my top most favorite scenes, another is when Shan reminisces all those tender moments they shared. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
The way she touched her lips, then neck and the whole body tingling with his essence was so so beautifully written by you! ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ
A beautiful, beautiful feeling. โค๏ธ

God knows how many times I'm going to repeat this.. but he's truly, really adorable from head to toe! โค๏ธ
Like you say, a man you would want to cuddle with in fluffy blankets all day long and still not getting enough of him.

Her hangover and there is Ibaad in his track pants! โ˜บ๏ธ
Subah Subah itne khoobsurat nazaare! Hayee!
His concern actually shows that she's more to him just than a party pickup girl. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
The way he wished her, actually she couldn't no other better way to start her birthday than Ibaad wishing her with a kiss. <3

I better don't begin on what sinful images I had in my mind when I was writing this. Track pants and shirtless! *Atomic Bomb* ๐Ÿ˜‰
They've fallen for each other. โค๏ธ

And can I just stand and clap for the man Ibaad is! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
He knew Shan wouldn't have regretted it but still he didn't cross the line without her permission just cuz she was drunk!
Such a gentleman and a true MAN! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Shan thanked him for the best birthday ever and he thanked her for the bestest night! Cute. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
How adorable he was when Shan had to leave and his plan to continue what was left in mid! โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ
The way she toed up to kiss him was hot! <3

Ibaad is truly a gentleman who knows his limits and how to stick to them. :*
Aabi Shan are love. โค๏ธ
His mind is crappy. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Okay Ly and Pari caught her sneaking into the room! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Spending birthday with someone else and good friends don't spend the night together! ๐Ÿคฃ Pari is adorable! :* Like You! <3
I loved how Shan asked her sister to give her details about her new boyfriend! Cute. ๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ
Kiss and Introduction to his friends, Ahaan! Things are going good. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Matt asked Lydia to move in, Yayy! Good news coming in from all over! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I love Pari's character too. Like me?
Yeup! Maybe.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Though kiss with Liam is so much more than good. ๐Ÿ˜†

Finally Shan's birthday. ๐Ÿฅณ
First let me confess that she looked gorgeous in that white dress and tiara. <3
Pari and Shan's scene was so so so beautiful. Loved the bonding between them and spcly the bit where Pari keeps her head on her sister's shoulder. Aww..It's beautiful! โค๏ธ
I loved how she told her that she loves her choice this time. ๐Ÿ˜†
The fact that she was after Haider ever since they were together warning her that he's not for her and the fact that Liam crossed all the hurdles she had set up for her little sister's boyfriend shows how protective they're of each other. Beautiful. โค๏ธ

I wanted to keep a cute sibling moment of Shanaya and Pari. โค๏ธ
I'm glad you loved it so much!! :*

Liam turns out to be an amazing guy and I'm so so happy for Pari. :*
Matt and Lydia fighting over a shot. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I loved how you kept that the moment Ibaad entered the venue, he secured the lifetime fangirls in Ly and Pari. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
That's his charm and his added manners, etiquettes and that respect for women works for him and Shan is lucky to have him in her life. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Aww, he was clicking the pictures of little dancing girls and then clicked Pari Shan's picture and I'm sure it must be beautiful. โค๏ธ

He had to secure fangirls in Pari and Lydia. You just cant resist his charm! โค๏ธ

Ibaad! Eee! Denim Shirt and Black Trousers! Tabaahi.
Their moments by the poolside were so beautiful. I loved how they found missing pieces of themselves in each other and are so happy!
That pendant by Ibaad is so so so beautiful!
The way he kissed that milky mole of hers. ๐Ÿ˜ณ He is Lover Goals!
Their kiss which ends up being so passionate. โ˜บ๏ธ
How cutely, they exchange numbers! And their ID's..
My Tabaahi, My Life...
Just Plain Beautiful! โค๏ธ

Total Tabaahi. *FIREEE*
I'm glad you loved the post birthday celebrations of Aabi-Shan. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I really don't have words to just describe it all. Bas, I'm so so glad that I chose you to write it cuz you just made me proud!
I love you, bas! ๐Ÿค—
Can't wait for the epilogue now.
Update Soon.

PS - Love You! โค๏ธ


Love you too! โค๏ธ
This TS has been as special for me as it was for you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thank you for trusting me and giving me this chance. I'm glad you know that I didn't let you down. :*
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Thank you so much!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Res. โค๏ธ

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Unres. *Speaking and writing this post from the 7th Heaven!*
You know, why I chose you everytime I want you to write anything? It's cuz you do complete justice to it. And not only that, you write it exactly how I would've or wanted you to. It just makes me proud that my baccha, my Oswald has grown so so much as a writer and I'm so proud of her. ๐Ÿค—
Just like Sayali is proud of Bhumi. :*

Awww.. that is very sweet of you to say.. Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I love you for constantly working on this and all of my requests despite being so busy with studies. Sending me all of this late night so that I can read it in the morning. I love you, bas! โค๏ธ
And I so know that this isn't the last one from you, picture abhi baaki hai mere dost! ๐Ÿ˜†
July!! You're so much awaited. ๐Ÿ˜‰
It's been like a ritual now with 3 years in a row. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

I wouldn't deny it was hard coz I was bulked up with my 12th finals but I'm glad despite of all that I was able to write what you wanted me to!
Yeah! Let's see what I'm gonna write! :P

It's been 10 months since and that description of Paris by you is so damn beautiful spcly the Eiffel Tower. <3
Aabi's proposal had to to be like him! Hilariously Funny yet Deep! ๐Ÿ˜†
Though I really wanted to smack his head and ask him if he really thought following Phil's idea would help him? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I could understand what Shan must have gone through after reading that message from him. Shukar, that he didn't get killed by her. ๐Ÿ˜†
The way they ran around in the house and Aabi's that could kill me referring to the vase! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
Shan's I don't care. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
The way they kept hitting each other with the pillow till Aabi finally cleared it that he wants to marry her! ๐Ÿคฃ
His proposal was so so so beautiful, deep yet simple which touched Shan's heart! โค๏ธ His pure thoughts about wanting to share every moment of his life with her was love. <3
Aww.. Shan's emotional state when he proposed. :*
Though I still feel that Ibaad shouldn't have proposed her this way. ๐Ÿ˜†

Aabi is one adorable man!! โค๏ธ
And even Shan is no less, so yeah it had be a little hatke!
Their running around the house was my fav bit too!
I'm glad you loved his proposal. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

That shower was fire! *IF needs to have some fire emojis as well.*
Shan's red lingerie and I can imagine the way Ibaad must be looking at her. โ˜บ๏ธ
Another thing, the way you synced past with present was amazing! Not once would you feel confused. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
You know that love lock bridge idea came up to my mind too but it slipped eventually, and I'm glad you included that. :*
Their love is sealed till eternity. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I agree abt Fire Emojis.. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
Whenever I'm writing something, I read everything like a reader, pin point possible mistakes ad then work on them! So yeah, syncing past with present was same! I mean, if I'm confused with what I am writing, how can I expect my readers to understand it!
Love Lock Bridge is Paris' one of the biggest highlights. So I had to add it. โค๏ธ

Their wedding was such a beautiful one. <3
Liam and Pari sizzled Haan?! ๐Ÿ˜‰
I can imagine them dancing on Dilliwali Girlfriend for some reason. ๐Ÿ˜›
Aabi Shan's Janam Janam and that poem dedication was Aww..<3
I can visualize how much in love a couple they would be. โค๏ธ
Poor Babies wanted to get married just after 2 weeks but families. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I love Ibaad's Honeymoon wali Harkatein! Please keep doing them Aabi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Glad you loved their wedding bit. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
They're adorable together!

Uff. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Shan wants to visit her parents while Ibaad wants to steal her for Barbados. Ghonchu Ladki..!! ๐Ÿฅฑ
Such a hot, cute man is asking you to spend a weekend with him ALONE in Barbados and all you're worried about is your parents?! I would've cancelled all my plans there itself. ๐Ÿ˜†
Like you yourself say, I'm one of a kind. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Ahaa! I loved loved loved how Ibaad used his masterstroke on her!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Perfectly how a man should dominate his wife and in that domination there's this sinful pleasure. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aabi's touches, that husky voice! I'm melting already. <3
The reminiscing of Shan about their nupital night. Uff. Uff. Uff.
Those stray delicate strands of Jasmine that were torn, Their finery, Their bedsheet. It seemed as if that sexual tension came out as a raging flood and they made some scorching love. โ˜บ๏ธ
Shan's scream when they consummated. Uff. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
Ibaad should mentally applaud himself cuz he finally was successful and I loved how Shan threw her things and goes, take me to Barbados with that slamming of lips was cute yet sexy! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
And the next task to inform her parents! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I cracked up reading how Ibaad is scared of his father in law. ๐Ÿคฃ
Ek toh Shan is lying and even that Aabi is making it difficult for her. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
His touches ohlala and the way Shan tried to console herself much to the irritation of her mother, if only she could understand. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Glad that Pari does. <3
I love her. :*

I'm so glad you loved that flashback! Though I had tough time adjusting this request of yours in the update but I managed! ๐Ÿ˜†
Ibaad knows how to melt Shan and he did it effortlessly! ๐Ÿ˜‰
He's one besharam aadmi. Pari knows it!

Their whole weekend in Barbados was one beautifully written flashback! One of my most favorite and most read perhaps! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
You aced it love, It came out exactly how I wanted it to be and you wrote it with choicest of feelings that I wanted. โค๏ธ
Right from the moment, they stepped into the beach cottage to Shan discovering it like a little girl, to her request of going to the beach, to Ibaad's plan of house arrest, just lovely. โญ๏ธ
Perhaps, what I loved the most was the part where Shan was dressing up for her man with nighty, rose perfume and the shower. <3
The whole prepping up of hers for a night together was so beautifully, aesthetically written, brilliant! โญ๏ธ
My most favorite bit of that anticipation and nervousness Shan experienced while putting on the nighty for she had never tried anything so sensual and revealing or walking out of the door for she knew what was awaiting her in the next few days. โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
A lethally shirtless Aabi waiting for her and the way he pulled her out of the robe. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
They make love the whole day, have beautiful evenings with dinner and dance. Just Perfect. <3

I'm so so so glad you loved it so much!! โค๏ธ
You totally ace in writing love scenes. I'm still learning, hence it really means a lot coming from you. Anything involving Aabi can not be thanda. It had to be sizziling!!
Shan's nervousness is something I think very common for a woman to experience when you are alone with your husband for a weekend. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Even you added this in latest AM update! ๐Ÿ˜†

That Fireworks Display was beautiful! โค๏ธ
The way Aabi screamed on knowing that she'll wear that white dress and then slowed down. ๐Ÿคฃ
Awwiee, Baby was too lost in watching his wife's innocent expressions that he missed the fireworks. Can he be cuter?!
How is he supposed to wait for 10 looonnnggg minutes and wants to go back to the room ASAP! Aabi. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
His protectiveness when Shan got dizzy was so so beautiful! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
The way he kept scolding her for being careless about her meals was love. :*
Shan too has become naughty being with him. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Take me to our room and lots can be done, No, actually I feel horny right now. ๐Ÿคฃโค๏ธ
Ibaad would surely be amused and her mimicking him was so cute! โค๏ธ

I'm so glad you loved this part so much!! โค๏ธ
He's cuteness personified! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Even I love Aabi's protectiveness!

Aabi accompanying them to Lingerie Shopping was so him. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
His reply was equally witty. Of course he's the one who had to see it so why not his choice. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Shan had to blush when he would show too much interest in his wife's stuff and trust Pari Lydia to make it worse. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
But their icecream moment was love! <3 Ibaad feeding her with his hands and asking about his name in her henna. ๐Ÿ˜‰
His reply to Pari about who would waste time in such things! ๐Ÿคฃ
Shan. โ˜บ๏ธ
Ibaad's lesson to that douchebag Haider was much much needed! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I loved how Lydia didn't let Shan interfere and let Haider get a good thrashing from Ibaad. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Allah, I love his protectiveness for his woman! How much I love this man! โค๏ธ

Haider deserved the thrashing he got from Aabi and I'm glad he did. It was high time for Haider to learn a lesson he should've got long before!
Like I mentioned above, he's one besharam aadmi. ๐Ÿ˜†

And they did make love! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I loved how you subtle yet beautiful hints of it. <3
The way Ibaad took a tender bite of her shoulder flesh. Dayyyum. โ˜บ๏ธ
How sensually Shan traced the back of her hand on his jawline. <3
Aww.. the final happiness. โค๏ธ
The way Ibaad reacted after knowing Shan is pregnant or the prospect of him being a dad. :*
He's a baby and I really want to kiss him all over. :*
I can visualize how wide eyed he must be. ๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ
That hug and swirling around, Shan had tears in her eyes Awwiee!
I think that chocolate smudge weekend worked! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Their I Love You's were so beautiful!

I'm so glad you loved this bit. โค๏ธ
Of course, they had to.
Being parents is a beautiful feeling and I'm happy I was able to portray it as well.

Again a beautiful beautiful piece written by you! ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ
The ideas were mine and the words were yours. To copy words into someone else's idea is a difficult task and you aced it!!
I love you so so much. ๐Ÿค—
Keep Writing. :*

Thank you so much!!
It really means a lot coming from you. โค๏ธ

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