The Oberoi FanFiction - EPISODE ONE Updated Pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Awesome concept
Gauri is shivaay's secretary
Omkara was mesmerized seeing her

They way u r focusing on all 3 together
Just love that
Shitia🤣
Who comes up with such names

Rudra n Saumya are so cute
Songs completely matched the situation

Wonder how shivika n Rikara's story would progress
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome concept

Gauri is shivaay's secretary
Omkara was mesmerized seeing her


They way u r focusing on all 3 together
Just love that
Shitia🤣
Who comes up with such names

Rudra n Saumya are so cute
Songs completely matched the situation

Wonder how shivika n Rikara's story would progress
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Hey vrinda 😃 thank you for the feedback... Twist and turns awaiting 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: manopriya24

Thank u so much for the pm dear...😛

I wished to post the 1st comment for ur ff pari but due to my overload work I can't comment sorry for that dear...
I loved all the things in ur ff dear... especially om' s mind was fully occupied by shivaay's Secretary.. .😉😉
As usual rudra slaying it either in episode or in ff.. he is the one I loved the most...😛😛😛
Pari keep update it dear... I was expecting more twists and turns and some Tashan, more takkrar and khidkitod ishqbaazi too... 😳😳
Last but not least some caring advances from the boys side towards their ladies..😃😃
Love u so much dear... 🤗

Oh priya oh priya priya🤗
Thank you for such an honest feedback
Here the status quo is
Shivaay is preparing to marry Tia
About omkara you never know
For rudra sumo is his friend
Let the story unfold
"Maante rahe shaayad ishq hoga ... Jazbaaton mein ruwaa sa ...
Khud hi dil todkar poochte reh Gaye ...sachme ishq huwa kya "
Twist and turns on your way

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Thanks for PM Pari. ...
The part was awesome...i love everything in it...Anika's. ..blabbering...gabar wala dialogue...rudy pleading in song to sumo...and sumo ' s reply...All in all perfect part...


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