The Oberoi FanFiction - EPISODE ONE Updated Pg 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys, You can call me Pari 😊. I have sincerely followed both the shows on television as well as the forum and I am in so much love with the stories and compositions here. The initial character sketches and storyline of ishqbaaz was awesome. Be it ShivIka, RiKara,RuMya, Pinky, Jahnvi, Tej or dadi.

I am not at all liking the unnecessary melodrama now. Achhe khaase show KO chewing gum ki tarah chaba diya aur ab kheecha taani kar rahe hai 😆. So coming to the point, I have an idea about an oberoi family fan fiction where everything is crazily normal 😉 with some modification in the characters

The characters are...
#TheOBros
- The Regal, The One, The Only SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI.😎
- The Intense, The Passionate, The Artist OMKARA SINGH OBEROI.😳
- The Charmer, The Chocopie, The Fittest RUDRA SINGH OBEROI
#TheirLadies
- The Khidkitod Khoobsurat, The Jugaadu Jaan, The Farratedaar ANIKA GOYAL 🥳
- The Street Smart, The Intelligent, The Hardworking GAURI PATEL
- The Adorable, The Caring, The Sweetheart SAUMYA MUKHERJEE 🤗
Here the dhamakedaar roles played by the three womaniya are
- The Ekdum Bestum Best wedding planner in town Anika 😃
- The Edgy Secretary of SSO Gauri 👍🏼
- A Distant Family Friend's Relative Saumya 😳
The girls help me add some Punjabi, some Gujarati and some Bengali flavor to the tale.
Other than that we all know OH-MY-MATA, The so much loved Prinku, Tej and Jahnvi's patch worked marriage and our favorite ishqbaaz Daadi. Oh my my how did I forget our powerhouse of positive energy Tia Kapoor 😆 & The newly welcomed member in the family is their healthy labarador Janardhan 😉

The Oberoi Mansion is excitedly awaiting the much talked about and so publicized and controversy inviting ShiTia wedding.

I am working on this concept and will try to update soon, looking forward to your responses and a wonderful time here.

With lots of love
Pari 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for ur update pari... always love to read ff on Oberoi family... character sketch was ekdum khidkitod Hain.. . So please jaldi update karo na yaar... Thanks in advance dear.. 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manopriya24

Waiting for ur update pari... always love to read ff on Oberoi family... character sketch was ekdum khidkitod Hain.. . So please jaldi update karo na yaar... Thanks in advance dear.. 😊😊

I am working on it Priya, the oldie Goldie original ShivIka, IntenseKara & Chulbule Bulbule Rumya ... With a lot of effort by Tia ... Thank you 😳... Will update soon 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the character sketch.. Waiting for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjanagarg71

Awesome. ...update soon dear

For Sure Sanjana 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: magss24

Loved the character sketch.. Waiting for the update

Tommorow good morning will be the update time 😳 can I know your name mags😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparajita2210

I am working on it Priya, the oldie Goldie original ShivIka, IntenseKara & Chulbule Bulbule Rumya ... With a lot of effort by Tia ... Thank you 😳... Will update soon 🤗

I know dear... u writers are working hard for readers like us...😊 ur story seems to be interesting from the way of introducing the characters...😛😛 am waiting for tomorrow to read ur 1st chapter...😉😉 Love u pari...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparajita2210

Tommorow good morning will be the update time 😳 can I know your name mags😊

hi dear my name is Maheswari.. Is your name aparajita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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EPISODE ONE

What was this loud and frustrating sound for??? Not able to attend his call for the second time Shivaay angrily marched towards the hall and OH-MY-MATA what the hell was going on??? The whole housekeeping staff, all the technicians and even Khanna along with Rudra has turned absolutely junglee. They were stomping their foot... JHING JHING JHING JHING JHING JHING JHING JHING JHINGAT!!! The song was pure noise. Then they started doing the patang flying step on APDI PODU, moonwalk, then superfast bihu and finally the main attraction was the thumkas on MAIN AAI HOON UP BIHAR LOOTNE... Janardhan jumping and wagging his tail the whole time. All of which Omkara is supposed to record & wait what on earth was tia trying to do? Sitting and clapping to count their beats!🥳

Finally he was able to look at her, now dancing centre forward. Their gang leader obviously! ANIIKKAA, he yelled switching of the music player. Arre Billuji aap aa gaye, Aap bhi shuru ho jaaiye... Dekhiye hum visarjan wala dance kar rahe hai... Abhi massakali wala step karna baaki hai and she actually did the step in front of him. For heaven's sake STOP IT ANIKA! He literally roared. Oh please Shivaay baby, they are gaining their energies back aur main unko reki bhi bhej rahi hoon and this is so entertaining Tia interrupted. Haan Billuji aisa raapchik faadu dance karke mazaa bohot aayaa Anika continued giving Tia a high five.😉

Everyone has gone mad , Shivaay cursed himself. All this dramatic preparation caused him a lot of stress. He never liked any pomp and show but kare bhi kya Oberoi khandan ke bade bete ki shaadi jo hai. More than the wedding, what caused him worry was the 150 crore deal he had to strike and that to before Siddarth Vikram Rana. Here ever y one had stopped dancing but rudra continued walking squats. Ab toh photo kheechni hi padegi Om laughed. With his walking he turned. CLICK. Unfortunately it was not Rudra's picture on his screen. It was this fair and tiny girl who was walking towards him now. Humme Shivaay sir se milna hai, she told. Oh thank god Gauri you are here, Shivaay breathed a sigh of relief. Who is she? Omkara thought.🤔

Totally opposite to how chaotic the hall had become, the kitchen was peaceful and aromatic. Saumya carefully removed the freshly drenched brown sweet from the hot pan, humming some tune of robindro sangeet. The flavor of cardamom was strong, PERFECT... saying she patted herself. Cooking was her therapy, her escape and right now she needed a break from her hectic schedule. Her college life, the wedding preparations and above all Rudra is driving her crazy. Name the devil and he was there! BHAJA MISHTI!!! He jumped in excitement. Saumya took away the plate from the counter, she was not going to share. Thoda sa dedo Sumo , itna khaaogi toh aur moti ho jaaegi. No Rudra! She declared and reminded him about a mock test that was like tomorrow!😲

SCRIBBLE SCRIBBLE TYPE TYPE TYPE SCRBBLE. Gosh, she worked like a machine as he saw her while standing at the door of the study. She hardly occupied any space of the big recliner surrounded by blue, red, yellow and green files in the grey room. Her messy hair tied in a bun, she occasionally bit the tip of her pen. He was observing but all of this was absurdly awkward for her. How can such a huge man go unnoticed even for a minute and Om was standing and staring at her for the last half an hour. Irritated, she picked up her laptop and files to move out of there, his built obviously blocking her path. Aapka ghar hai, jahaan khade rehna hai rahiye, jo karna hai keejiye, humme jaane dijiye... she looked straight into his eyes as he stepped aside. Can it be? He imagined, his eyes still fixated on her.

After a hard day of work, Anika aur Janardhan couch pe chaude hoke lete huye thhe... Dekh na Janardhan, pairron mein pahiye lage huye hai, itna sara kaam karte karte bilkul Mahindra ka tractor ho gayi hu... Anika was blabbering. Noting down what exactly to do next. Okay Janardhan subah chaar baje aaloo pyaaz ka truck aaega, kal mehendi waali se baat karni hai, woh Lakme waale beauty parlour waali ko bulana hai aur wedding card par se "ShiTia ki shaadi hatwana hai. Tia ne mere dimaag ki kadhi kar di thi ShiTia likhne ke liye aur ab Billuji keh rahe hai Unko ShiTia nahi likhwana. Arre OO kanji aankhon waale... bahut naainsaafi hai, she was mimicking gabbar singh.😆

And there he came, composing himself. Anika hato yahaan se. infection ho jaaega. Arre Billuji fikar not Janardhan abhi abhi nahaake aayaa hai. Wahi toh main keh raha hoon Janardhan ko infection lag jaaega, tumhe kitna paseena aa raha hai! Oh excuse me aap kehna kya chahe hai, mere badan mein bacteria hai... for your information main roz hand pump se do baar do baalti paani nikal ke nahati hu lifebuoy waale saabun se... Aap dekhne thodi aate hai... she spoke frustrated in the flow. Anika main tumhe nahaate huye kyon dekhne aaunga... he answered the question weirdly and she helplessly bit her tongue inside her mouth.🤣

OH MERI PYAARI SUMO

OH MERI BHOLI SUMO

THODI SI MOTI SUMO

ECONOMICS NI NAIYYA BEECH BHANWAR MEIN GUDGUD GOTE KHAAYE

TU USKO PAAR LAGAADE

RUDY KO PAAS KARAAYE

Off the beat he sang literally begging her to help him with the studying. Oh Rudy baby ko padne mein pareshaani ho rahi hai. Padh lo naa jaise Sheena ko movie dikhane le gaye thhe, Jasmine ke saath long drive peg aye thhe, Kriti ko icecream khila rahe thhe, Waise padhlo easy hai, she taunted him. Don't be jealous fatty, he smirked. Jealous meri jutti she cut him off. TUM TOH HO NAA CHATUR ANAAR BADE HOSHIYAAR... came her lyrical reply.😆

Not able to get a blink of sleep, he scrolled through his mobile phone and so came the picture. The sharp jaw line with delicate lips and a pointed nose, confidence in her eyes... the bold and beautiful kind of confidence. She accessorized her loose and plain chocolate brown color kurta with a pair of pearl stud earrings. Her long hair neatly clutched in a pin. Yeah this was the candid picture of the fair and tiny girl. Her presence seemed so natural; she is really photogenic he thought. Is she the one, he forced his brain into functioning.🤓

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much for the pm dear...😛
I wished to post the 1st comment for ur ff pari but due to my overload work I can't comment sorry for that dear...
I loved all the things in ur ff dear... especially om' s mind was fully occupied by shivaay's Secretary.. .😉😉
As usual rudra slaying it either in episode or in ff.. he is the one I loved the most...😛😛😛
Pari keep update it dear... I was expecting more twists and turns and some Tashan, more takkrar and khidkitod ishqbaazi too... 😳😳
Last but not least some caring advances from the boys side towards their ladies..😃😃
Love u so much dear... 🤗
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