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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinynew

Hello again Zoya ...😊..

Hello!! How are you doing?
Finally got the time to read this one ..
And I finally got the time to reply...
Shravan is a sweetheart dear ...Deep down somewhere I really think this is happening in real...feeling so connected with the story Zoya ...
God I'm so glad, you feel connected to it! It's the best compliment a writer can get...
I loved the Nirmala Ramnath convo..It just gave a sense of satisfaction over the utter crap they had shown on the show...Nirmala was wrong ...and she will have to repent for it...
Repent she will!
I am not at hating Ramnath here ...maybe it just the way story is progressing. ...
Yes I guess that's the reason...
Loved the duo 'SHRAVAN AND HIS DIARY '..he hasn't forgot sumo yet and his penning down his emotions in the flow...such is the innocence of this fellow. ...Can I just have him for myself ...😉❤️
Well, get in queue... It's a long line here!
All in all the chappy was worth the wait ...and can't wait for more...
I won't keep you waiting long...
Do come early..😊
P.S.This one turned out to be long😛
I like that!

@Bold Thank you so much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Shravan is so complex. Brilliantly written chapter. Continue soon!

Mrinaaa🤗
Thank you so very much hon!
I shall!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

mere ek-do din kuch zyada hi extend ho gaye..nahin??
Hahahah!
first of all sorry to keep you waiting and now lets get onto work without any freakin further delay😃
Arey it's okay, you're here now and that's enough for me😃


Chapter 4

He had started to believe more each passing day in his capabilities
finally bande main thodha confidence to aaya..
And It's here to stay 😉

when suman said she was a liability..i felt for the poor soul..the feeling of being a obligation to someone is heart-wrenching that to for a teen and especially when you already have another emotional turmoil to handle..it just is too overwhelming
Things will get better for her too...
the dear diary entry is a boon to read, his trust in himself is slowly budding and that's treat to read because an is the start he had thought himself to be a loser but the slow 'i am something better' progress was much needed😆
I know right.. Diary entries are my fav too!

Like my absence didn't matter, like I didn't matter
like now i wanna get that rustom swag and say "trust me darling, it does"😎
Hahahaha🤣 Wait for it!
finally he read the freaking mail🥳
women..take a freaking bow..gawd brilliant job portraying her emotions in the letter and his emotions when he read it but the last line mashaallah!! 'i can't live without you' 👏
*Bows graciously* Shukriya for the Nawazish!

They both wept as though in each other's embrace.
Zo di i love you for this chapter ❤️
Thank you hon!!

Chapter 5

That's my friends name..inaayat
Lovely name I must say!
but again the title ❤️
Thankies!
i love eric..i said that before i know but still quoting your words "its always good to be reminded" 😛
their conversation is so real and of course my fav part is 'you traitor' 👍🏼 ike how typical friends joke around
I love the friend lingo! If they don't abuse you, they ain't your friends!

"I have a friend who is a girl, she ain't my girl friend.."
let's wait for the nearing future for this statement to be proved wrong😛 i hope you understood..
Loud and clear, wait for it to materialize...

She could beat you to a pulp Shrav!"
She can definitely do that without a doubt
Again, wait for the tables to reverse😆

"Accha? Woh subah bohot khoobsoorat hai na, shayad iss liye.."
haan meri bacchi subah to khoobsurat hogi hi..raat jo suhaavni thi😉...wait in all the right manner..no double meaning
Not yet! And never from Nanu😆

Sherlock frigging Holmes!
R.I.P Sherlock Holmes 🤣
Turning in his grave😆

Sumo se baat hui na? You'll are back at being friends?"
a brownie to pushkar from my side😛 but still they are obvious 😳
Pushkie pie!

"Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."
i could imagine shravan choking on air 😲
He was!😆
this chapter was beautiful one indeed😳👏
Thank you!

Chapter 6

i did a punch in the air when the image read the same meaning i had assumed 😃
Hahaha! High 5!

i practically wanted to skip the ramnath part but when i did..
You didn't!!!!!😉

Given their fights gave her decision impetus, given that he asked her to leave and never return to snatch his son away, but at least she could have called. At least she could have asked how Shravan was doing. Her reckless negligence only served to cement his notions about her. How could she desert them like they never existed.
i agreed with him for this part
Haina!

but when i think that i cant hate anymore he gives me a reason to

Maybe if she apologized for her doings, just maybe, he would forgive her.

who the hell is he to be apologised to after being an a** of a husband to her😡...only person she should have apologised and reconciled with was Shravan
Now, you are the only person that actually worded this bit! When I'm out seeking vengeance, it will be from all angles... 😎

the explanation that Shravan gave for a best friend was 👍🏼
many people just do not tend to understand that relation needs space to breathe and if you give them it that does not mean disinterest
I know right!

the amanda confession was honest from Shrav's side and understanding from her side and that should be the way you handle rejection 👍🏼
I agree!
but when he asked her for prom..i know he was showing his kindness and friendship spirit but to be honest i was like a little, a little as a pinch was disheartened..😛
Don't be... You'll see a bit on that in the next...
maybe i did expect sumo accompanying him overseas..*sigh* stupid me😭
Hmm.. well that's not on the cards...
when Sumo said 3rd aayi hu main class main..*gasp*, *wide eyes*😲
certainly library did work
You will see how that happened... 😆

about eric...i have this strange feeling that he has a thing for amanda..i'll confirm my doubts with the next chapter though😛
Doubts have been cleared 😆

  • Zo di you get the award for the best titles from my side👏..i mean you relate them with the chapters very well
  • Haye! Shukriya!!! ❤️
  • there were certain dialogue confession from Sumo's side like 'i need you shravan' & 'i always wanna be with you' these dialogues made me wonder that if Sumo could contemplate on that in her teenage years why couldnt her grownup self be a little more honest in the show
  • The show made no sense in those aspects! Kuch bhi reasons were being given...
  • and the 3rd one...now that Shravan and Sumo are back to being friends..is there's a chance of SHRAVAN turning into the misogynist like in the show or no?
  • I won't say anything, why ruin the fun right?
and the last one i'm so sorry i unressed so late..i hope you understand😳
You know I don't mind, stop apologising please...

@Bold Arpi 🤗
Your comments were worth the wait!
Lovely!
Thank you!
Makes me feel my writing is cherished!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.

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Unres. Jyada hi jaldi kr dia na 😆
Haan! Aaisi harkaten na kar, mera bechara dil kaise bardasht karega?
Sorry account se le lena 😆
Bohot pade hai, le liya don't worry!
Now to ur update.
Praise the Lord! Finally!
Marasim ❤️
The chapter did all the justice to the name 👏
Haina! Yey!
U described all the relations so beautifully.
I'm glad you felt that way!
Though I still don't like Ramu but his thoughts were beautifully portrayed too. Of course because it's u doing it.
Well, badla toh usse bhi lena baaki hai😎
Amanda- Shravan is too cute. One more adorable friendship.
Oh yeh!
Sumo ka 3rd aana mere gaale se nhi utar rha 😆
Utrega, reasons soon!
Par obviously she wasn't dumb. Bs kvi try nhi kia.
Haan wohi na...
What about Eric yaar? But since I m unresing do late, the next chapter is already up so won't have to wait. Perks of unresing late. No effects of cliffhanger 😆
*Angry Face* Go to hell🤬

Missed the diary ha.
Good for you!
I loved it. And of course u too 🤗
That I know!

@Bold I love you too waise, with all your PJs and late comments!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.

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Unres😛
This was brilliant.
Thank you!
Shravan's diary entry ❤️
Pure love right!
Poor boy is confused. He obviously forgave her but u can't just forget something like that.
It's not easy! It never is...
My heart went out for Eric. Guilt is very dangerous. It's just impossible to live with it.
He won't live with it for much longer...
Pri k baare mein soch aur usko jaldi se thk kr de pls.
Deal!
Ramu- Nirmala convo 😡
I hate both of them equally so I don't buy any of their reasons. Although in this update it looked more like nimmo's faults weighed more, I hate them both. Can't get what I have seen on the show out.
I love keeping life on an even keel... So wait up for Ramu's Mommy's eyes and legs!
Kammo rocks. I loved her. Bullseye pe bullseye.
She always did! She was the real MVP!
Eric- Shravan are darlings. #Friendshipgoals
We have already met them!
A massive storm coming Shravan's way I guess. And that too when he has just gathered himself. Too cruel u r Zoyi.
What you don't see is the fact that Shravan is now more resilient than before... Will a storm really dwindle him?

Izteraar ❤️
How well u defined it Zoyi.
Shukriya!
The bit u wrote before the chapter and in the middle was WOW!!!! Every time I read an update of urs, it give me something to think about and that's the best part of all ur stories.
I aim at doing just that, and if it hits you, mission accomplished!
This was perfect. I just can't put in words how much I loved it. Though it had less ShraMan moments, I loved loved it.
I'm glad you did!
Love ya 🤗

@Bold Thank you Resh!
I love you too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much Nikka Sa Nik 🤗

@Bold 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
It wasnt a short one Nik🤔
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res.
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Unres
Zoyi 🤗
This is one of my best birthday gifts. I mean it can't get better. Getting a chapter by u dedicated to me is the best feeling in the world. I love u yaar 🤗 I m really touched. And doesn't matter how forgetful I m, u too be rest assured I will never forget u guys. One reason being U guys won't allow me too. My leg pulling is one of ur fav pastime I knw that 😆
This chapter is pure love ❤️ In every sentence I can feel it's dedicated to me or more so us 😳. Friendship dripping from all corners 😆 But I never felt it was out of place. Pure brilliance.
And yes there are too many similarities to us 😳
Three Musketeers 😳
Bs yaha pe tuney emotional blackmailing nhi include ki 🤣
Eric-Shravan's earphone fight is so me. I do that sometimes when I just don't feel like using earphones. And those were also times I play songs nobody understand 🤣
Pool drama 🤣
Amanda is awesome yaar. I love her as of now 🤣
Shravan as always is a darling 😳
Full faith on Sumo. This guy ❤️
Pushki v ❤️
I just loved it 🤗
And of course u too 🤗
Thanks yaar for this wonderful wonderful gift ❤️
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Resh meri jaan 🤗

I hope you had a great day .
Zo🤗
A/N ❤️❤️
Shravan and Eric. This duo is FriendshipGoals ❤️
I adore their bond . Their bromance i love like i loved Stefan and damon's ❤️



Fighting over earplugs and headphone...too cute they are ❤️
Amanda 😆 😆 😆 ...i love her .
Pool scene was quite funny n cute.
Three musketeers ❤️ just like us ❤️
Ugh Manju mami ghise pite record ki tarah bajti rehti
He is so sweet ...he brought cake to congratulate her and celebrate her success❤️
Your Shravan is such a sweetheart . I wonder if people like him exist in real
Aur Kutta sach me adjective hai 😆 ...atleast i feel so *hides face*
Uske liye kitna kuch plan kiya
Zo itna acha mat likh mai yahi sab kisi me dhundhne lgi to afat ho jayegi 😆
Jealous sumo? I like it

I'm loving this tadka of jealousy 😉
Cutest chappy of Alfaaz ❤️❤️❤️
Loved loved loved it!!
Loads of love🤗
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago

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