Chapter 4
He had started to believe more each passing day in his capabilities
finally bande main thodha confidence to aaya..
And It's here to stay 😉
when suman said she was a liability..i felt for the poor soul..the feeling of being a obligation to someone is heart-wrenching that to for a teen and especially when you already have another emotional turmoil to handle..it just is too overwhelming
Things will get better for her too...
the dear diary entry is a boon to read, his trust in himself is slowly budding and that's treat to read because an is the start he had thought himself to be a loser but the slow 'i am something better' progress was much needed😆
I know right.. Diary entries are my fav too!
Like my absence didn't matter, like I didn't matter
like now i wanna get that rustom swag and say "trust me darling, it does"😎
Hahahaha🤣 Wait for it!
finally he read the freaking mail🥳
women..take a freaking bow..gawd brilliant job portraying her emotions in the letter and his emotions when he read it but the last line mashaallah!! 'i can't live without you' 👏
*Bows graciously* Shukriya for the Nawazish!
They both wept as though in each other's embrace.
Zo di i love you for this chapter ❤️
Thank you hon!!
Chapter 5
That's my friends name..inaayat
Lovely name I must say!
but again the title ❤️
Thankies!i love eric..i said that before i know but still quoting your words "its always good to be reminded" 😛
their conversation is so real and of course my fav part is 'you traitor' 👍🏼 ike how typical friends joke around
I love the friend lingo! If they don't abuse you, they ain't your friends!"I have a friend who is a girl, she ain't my girl friend.."
let's wait for the nearing future for this statement to be proved wrong😛 i hope you understood..
Loud and clear, wait for it to materialize...
She could beat you to a pulp Shrav!"
She can definitely do that without a doubt
Again, wait for the tables to reverse😆
"Accha? Woh subah bohot khoobsoorat hai na, shayad iss liye.."
haan meri bacchi subah to khoobsurat hogi hi..raat jo suhaavni thi😉...wait in all the right manner..no double meaning
Not yet! And never from Nanu😆
Sherlock frigging Holmes!
R.I.P Sherlock Holmes 🤣
Turning in his grave😆
Sumo se baat hui na? You'll are back at being friends?"
a brownie to pushkar from my side😛 but still they are obvious 😳
Pushkie pie!
"Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."
i could imagine shravan choking on air 😲
He was!😆
this chapter was beautiful one indeed😳👏
Thank you!
Chapter 6
i did a punch in the air when the image read the same meaning i had assumed 😃
Hahaha! High 5!
i practically wanted to skip the ramnath part but when i did..
You didn't!!!!!😉
Given their fights gave her decision impetus, given that he asked her to leave and never return to snatch his son away, but at least she could have called. At least she could have asked how Shravan was doing. Her reckless negligence only served to cement his notions about her. How could she desert them like they never existed.
i agreed with him for this part
Haina!
but when i think that i cant hate anymore he gives me a reason to
Maybe if she apologized for her doings, just maybe, he would forgive her.
who the hell is he to be apologised to after being an a** of a husband to her😡...only person she should have apologised and reconciled with was Shravan
Now, you are the only person that actually worded this bit! When I'm out seeking vengeance, it will be from all angles... 😎
the explanation that Shravan gave for a best friend was 👍🏼
many people just do not tend to understand that relation needs space to breathe and if you give them it that does not mean disinterest
I know right!
the amanda confession was honest from Shrav's side and understanding from her side and that should be the way you handle rejection 👍🏼
I agree!
but when he asked her for prom..i know he was showing his kindness and friendship spirit but to be honest i was like a little, a little as a pinch was disheartened..😛
Don't be... You'll see a bit on that in the next...
maybe i did expect sumo accompanying him overseas..*sigh* stupid me😭
Hmm.. well that's not on the cards...when Sumo said 3rd aayi hu main class main..*gasp*, *wide eyes*😲
certainly library did work
You will see how that happened... 😆
about eric...i have this strange feeling that he has a thing for amanda..i'll confirm my doubts with the next chapter though😛
Doubts have been cleared 😆
- Zo di you get the award for the best titles from my side👏..i mean you relate them with the chapters very well
- Haye! Shukriya!!! ❤️
- there were certain dialogue confession from Sumo's side like 'i need you shravan' & 'i always wanna be with you' these dialogues made me wonder that if Sumo could contemplate on that in her teenage years why couldnt her grownup self be a little more honest in the show
- The show made no sense in those aspects! Kuch bhi reasons were being given...
- and the 3rd one...now that Shravan and Sumo are back to being friends..is there's a chance of SHRAVAN turning into the misogynist like in the show or no?
- I won't say anything, why ruin the fun right?
and the last one i'm so sorry i unressed so late..i hope you understand😳
You know I don't mind, stop apologising please...