||Love That Brings You Back ~~ A KAIRA SS|| Chap 6 Updated ~ Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Friends, so I decided to pen down a Kaira story that came to my mind recently. I still didn't decided on the name, but the prologue is ready.

I will post it here. Based on your responses and willingness to read , I will decide if I am going to continue or not. So plz do let me know your views.

Prologue

It was a beautiful night, but dark enough to let her rest in the balcony and catch some sleep. Dark, just like her life has become now. She was sitting on the rocking chair with half closed eyes and drifting into a peaceful slumber. Well "at peace" wouldn't be the right phrase to describe her current state of mind. Not since the day he had left her. Still our bodies need rest from both physical and mental exhaustion. Similar was the case for her, but the emotional turmoil she was going through in every minute of her life, always took a toll on her. Still no matter how hard she would try, she could never have a sound sleep.

That night would always be there to haunt her. The fateful night that snatched away all her happiness and the reason of living. It was the night when two lovers were separated for lifetime... She was half asleep when..."I love you Naira. I love you, he yelled in happiness. "I love you Nai..." and before he could complete the sentence...boom.

The next thing you can hear is her gasping for air and yelling out "Kartik..." with a loud shriek. The voice was all familiar to her and her sleep broke with a painful cry. Most of her nights would be sleep deprived or she would wake up after seeing the same dream that would leave her yelling out his name, just like that night. She was covered up in sweat now. It took her a moment to take in her surrounding. After a minute or so she realized it was a bad dream after all. BUT to her bad luck, that night wasn't a dream. It was vey much real and still is imprinted on in her mind and soul. It all happened right in front of her eyes...she had lost her Kartik forever.


INDEX

Prologue ~ Page 1
Chapter 1 ~ Page 3
Chapter 2 ~ Page 4
Chapter 3 ~ Page 5
Chapter 4 ~ Page 6
Chapter 5 ~ Page 6
Chapter 6 ~ Page 6
Chapter 7 ~ Page

PS: will update with the links later

Previously Titled "My Lost Life"

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shona this is amazing I didn't knew you wrote so well! Please you need to continue this I love it!!! It sounds like a beautiful story line please continue soon and I will let you know if I can think of a name if your struggling! :) <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shona, Beautiful!!!!!
You have penned it well...
It is emotional...I felt Naira's pain...

Please continue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It broke me to tears. The name i thought of is "A heartache i have to bear for a lifetime"
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is amazing! Please do continue. I just hope u will show that Kartik is alive. This one will be so good to read. Eagerly waiting! Update soon.!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You write amazingly. I could feel Naira's pain after reading this. Beautiful portrayal of Naira's feelings.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Will be back later and reply :)
Thanks everyone.

Most probably will update the 1st part soon.
Edited by Angel4KMH.BI - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this was just WOw!
pleasee continuee.soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shona, waiting for the update...😛
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Originally posted by: Duggukede

Shona this is amazing I didn't knew you wrote so well! Please you need to continue this I love it!!! It sounds like a beautiful story line please continue soon and I will let you know if I can think of a name if your struggling! :) <3



awww Thank you.
Few year back I used to write, but because of time stopped.
After long time I am here, hope can do justice to it.
I am glad. Yes I will, now I have to.
Yeah sure. I do have something on in mind, but if you think of something do let me know. I may like it and be appropriate for the story.
Thanks once again.

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