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Posted: 8 years ago
nice ud
maan want to take geet hospital but prem jerk his hand maan feel helpless that time something missing in these two year that maan can't come geet is angry on maan she confessed in front of Annie
maan mom stopped maan fr going to geet room
she don't want avoid arguments or any further fight
maan will go and how many days geet stops hr heart

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

geet fell from stairs
good that she is fine
but maan can't meet her now

thanks for commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago
try to update soon dear may be tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it!!
Maan was restless and wanted to stay with geet but due to prem he stayed aloof from her
We wanted to confront prem but his mother had stopped him
Geet out of flow spilled out her words regarding maan
She literally blurred out everything to Annie
Maan got chance to meet geet
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 23

Geet kaisi ho?
maan asked
geet also saw yash there she looked yash and said
yash bahi! inn sy kahye kay yahan sy chaley jaein
maan tumhaein dekney aya hy geet wo bht pareshan hy tumharey lye
koi zarorat nhi hy kisi ko marey lye pareshan honay ki marey lye pareshan honay k lye marey ghar waley hain
she said rudely
geet! bus karo mat satao mjh itna
he softly put his hand on hers caressed
mat baat karein mjh sy ma nhi dekhna chahti ma apko
she jerked his hands and with the jerk she also have a pain in her head she held her head tightly
kya hoa? geet dard ho raha hy?
he ignored her jerked but concerned for her
haan hota hy darad takleef hoti hy mjh mat aya karein marey samney
she said cryingly
ok ma chala jata hoon magr please tum ro to mat
he stands up by her side geet truned another side yash get saddened but also surprised to see maan, he is not maan he is totally changed he is madly loved geet only one mistake by maan why geet give him such a big punishment to him why? but he can't say anything to geet also she also get punish for two years without mistake its so hard to make her bring back to life. mahi also watched everything now one thing she understand that they are not living together and geet suffered a lot and now maan is back.she first saw yash then geet and in last maan who keep looking geet helplessness and then he goes towards yash.
iss ka bht khayal rakhna yeh mhj apni jaan sy ziada pyari ho gyi hy
and then he leaved the room yash first saw the closed door and then geet who is silently crying he then signaled mahi towards geet and left mahi sit beside geet and caressed her head and said
ziada dard ho raha hy to rano mami ko bulaon wo doctor ko foran bula lein gi?
nhi bhabi ap bus mjh tablet dey do ma so jaon gi to theek ho jye ga
after the dose geet is drowsy but can't sleep she is feeling something is missing.mahi saw that and then goes to yash who is talking with maan when both saw mahi is coming maan leave the room and mahi came to yash and said
pata nhi kya hoa hy geet so nhi parhi hy medicine bhi dey di hy neend ma hy pr phr bhi bechain hy kya karon yash
acha!!!
he nodded his head and signaled maan who is at the door
kya acha? ma ap sy kuch poch rhi hoon
arey tum uski fikar mat karo ab wo aram sy so jye gi tum marey sath chalo mjh bhi to sona hy
he said smilingly
ma ap k sath kaisey ja skti hoon wahan geet akeli hy
kaha to baba wo akeli nhi hy jis ko uskay pass hona hy wo hy ab tum chalo subha sab k uthney sy phele ajana
at geet's room
maan slowly entered in her room and looks her, her eyes are closed but she is twisting and turning on her bed he smiled slightly and goes towards her and lay beside her and hug her, her back is collide with his chest she is feeling dizzy that's why can't open her eyes then maan put his fingers in her hairs and caressed them softly and said whisper
so jao jaan!!
ummmhhh
she is feeling calm his warmth make her feel secure and in just few minutes she is in deep slumber maan smiled widely and murmur
pagli manti nhi hy pr dekho sukoon marey sath hi hy
and he also sleep with a smile. early morning maan opens his eyes to saw a very blissful sight geet is sleeping on his chest peacefully and hug his waist he don't want to go but have to so he slowly removed her hand but she is cuddling more into him he murmured
oh god jaan kya kr rhi ho sotey ma to chorna nhi chatein aur jaag rhi hoti ho to jangli billi ban jati ho please chor do na warna koi ajyega
he then keep her head on pillow and stand up when she losses th e warmth she patted her hand on bed maan quickly give her pillow and she hug the pillow maan bend a little and peck on her forehead and leave the room hurriedly.
when annie brings geet's breakfast all youngsters present in her room and yash asked naughtily
hey geetu neend kaisi ayi?
zabardast you know yash bhai aisa lag raha tha iss sy achi neend mjh ayi hi nhi kabhi ek bht acha ehsas tha kash roz mjh aisi hi neend aye
she said with smile mahi saw her surprisingly and then yash who is murmuring
woh to ani hi thi akhir ko MSK jo sath tha lo phr to roz maan ko room ma ana parey ga
yash bhai kuch keh rhy hain ap?
annie asked
nhi nhi tou ma to keh rha tha acha itni achi neend kaisey agyi tumhain humaein bhi batao?
pata nhi shahyad medicine ka asar tha
asar to hy pr medicine ka nhi maan ka
he again murmured
kya bol rhy hain yash bhai?
geet asked
arey kuch nhi tum breakfast karo ma zara tumhari medicine ko dekh loon
and smiled naughtily
pr meri medicine to yahan hy aur ap to bahar ja rhy hain
oh haan chalo baad ma dekh loon abhi mjh kuch kaam yaad agya hy and left the room.
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ayush beta kha lo jldi sy
heer's voice came down also she is trying to feed ayush something
ayush! ma naraz ho jaon gi aur phr chocolate bhi nhi miley gi
maan who is going to office stop by heer's voice he is about to go upstairs priya put hand on his shoulder he said
pareshan mat hoye prem nhi hy jab ma jogging sy aa raha tha to wo office ja raha tha she sigh in relief
tumhain bhi to late ho raha hy
ji magr phele apney batey sy mil loon phr chala jaon ga
and then he takes step to up stairs
kya baat hy champ kyun tang kr rhy ho kha kyun nhi rhy?
maan caught running ayush and pick him up heer is tanding there she is in relief that prem is not there
poora food aisey hi rakha hy ek spoon bhi nhi liya hy
she showed him a bowl
ok ho skta hy yeh aj apney dada k hath sy khana chahta ho kyun champ?
he kissed ayush's chubby cheeks ayush got geet's skin milky white and now there is some redness due to running.



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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely part
geet whatever say truth that she wants maan beside her
but she is too hurt
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update dear
Loved it!!
Geet showered her anger on maan and maan left the place so that geet could take rest
Geet slept in maan's arms and felt warmth and love
Yash could understand maaneet's gesture of love and demeanor
Maan was happy to feed his baby
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update! well written, thanks 4 da pm! Geet sleeps in Maan's arms! She is still angry with Maan! Maan feeds his son! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
Geet is still irritated with Maan
Yash got Maan to sleep with Geet
Now hes going to feed his son
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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