MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

so lovely lovely update dear..geet remebered her first meeting with maan..khurana come to handa house.meera 's geet friend.maan mermerised her beauty .elder give chance know about each other..maan intitate.both sharing some like things each other and maan said iam not look like bad..maanji, every girls drooling u openly..i always dreamy look with u..maaneet comfortable with each other..so lovely FB..i hope geet found out maan soon...thanks for pm and continue soon..i want long update dear..if u have comfortable..u do it..otherwise leave it..

thanks for your lovely comment
i'll try dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Loved it!!
Geet in search mission to find her maan
On the way she was lost thyself in her past
The thoughts were well protrayed
Loved their sweet and simple first meeting
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

thank you dear
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try to update tomorrow
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Part 5

Early morning geet reached her hotel she already booked her room she was tired so just lay on her bed and take some rest for few hours after she woke and ordered something for eat and talk with her baby
baby i know apko bhook lagi hy don't worry mamma ne order kr dia hy pr baby hum yahan a to gye hain tarey papa ko dhondney pr ab sawal yeh hy k ab karein kya mjh to abhi kuch smajh hi nhi arha tu hi kuch bata dey kh to dia k tarey papa ko dhond loon gi pr kaisey thora sa to pata hy pr yeh smjh nhi araha k start kahan sy karon aur kaisey marey khayal sy baby shyd kuch khaya nhi hy na to dimaagh bhi kaam nhi kr raha to baby aisa krety hain phele kuch kha letey hain pr kuch sochein gy
while eating geet also tapped her head with her finger and then suddenly she said wah mil gya
arey baby kya idea aya hy yeh vicky kab kaam aye ga
and then she called her college friend vicky who detective by profession after few ring he pick
hello
hello vicky kaisa hy tu?
oh geetu tu
haan kahan hy tu itney months ho gye hain teri kuch khabar hi nhi hy
arey yaar jaanti ho na tum yeh job to kabhi yahan to kabhi kahin aur
yeh chor tu suna kaisi hy aur wo tera maan kaisa hy?
wo vicky actually ma ne tumhain isi lye call kiya hy tumhari kuch help chahye
tumhain meri help ki zaorat kyun paarh gyi sab theek to hy na?
haan wo na mjh maan ko dhondna hy to uskey lye tumhri help chahye
what!!! ma kuch smjha nhi maan ko dhondna hy kya mtlb
phele tum yeh batao tum ho kahan?
yaar ma to ek case ki wajah sy Africa aya hoa hoon mgr tum phele mjh shi sy batao hoa kya hy
than geet narrated whole thing then said
ab bol ma kya karon
sab sy phele to sorry yaar tumhaein meri help chahye aur ma wahan nhi hoon
ab mjh yeh bata k tumharey pass gprs maps maan ki kuch photos to hain na
haan wo sab to ma ly kr ayi hoon
good ab sunn sab phele yeh dekh k jis paani ma maan ka plane gira tha wo pani humarey kis kis jagha arha hy mean kahan kahan paani takra rha hy phr un places ko mark kr aur ass pass ki kuch places ko bhi kr kyun k maan k wahan honay k chances bhi hain jaisey koi utha kr ly aya ho tum smjh rhi ho na
haan vicky ma sab smjh rhi hoon aur note bhi kr rhi hoon
good yaar tum to marey sath rh kr kafi intelligent ho gyi ho
shut up vicky! aur agey bol
haan ab tum jahan ho wahan sy dekho k un mark ki hyi places ma sy kon si tum sy near hy aur start wahan sy kr do aur koi problem ho to mjh sy poch lena
thank you yaar tum ne meri bht help kr di hy
yaar yeh kya kh rhi hy teri help nhi karon ga to phr friend kaisa hoon
chal vicky rakhti hoon bye
ok bye and take care
after the call she take out her stuff and spread on bed she already mark the places then find the nearest place and mark that and then pack all her stuff and patted her tummy and said
chalo baby get ready for mission MD nhi smjhey arey yaar mtlb mission maan Dhondo.
she came out of hotel and there is a car waiting for her with manager of hotel
maam your car you want this na?
yes and thank you
she put her all luggage in her Prado and sat on driving seat after few hours of driving she reached her destination in night and murmer
oh god ab to raat ho gyi hy ab raat k lye kuch dhondna parey ga aur yeh to hain bhi villages yahan to koi hotel bhi nhi miley ga ab kya karon?
she came out from the car and looking here and there then hear a voice of a lady
beta kuch dhond rhi ho?
she turn and saw a mid aged lady asked her with a smile
ji aunty wo ma yahan nyi(new) hoon na aur mjh raat ko rukney k lye koi jagah chahye
oh acha beta pr tumhain yahan koi aisi jagah nhi miley gi wasey kahan sy syi ho beta?
ji aunty delhi sy
wasey marey pass bhi ek room khali hy tum chaho to marey sath ruk sakti ho
thank you so much aunty
to phr chalo ao mera ghar agey wali gali ma hy
she reached with a lady, lady take her to the room and said
wasey mera naam kamla hy sab mjh kamla tai bulatey hain aur tumhara?
ji ma geet Geet khurana tai ap yahan akele rehti ho?
arey akele kahan yeh poora gaon marey sath hy phr akele kaisi aur ab to tum bhi ho
wah tai ap kya karti ho?
ma yahan ek larkion ka training center chalati hoon jahan sab ko kuch na kuch seekhney ko milta hy
arey wah tai ap to bht acha kaam krti ho
geet to maa baneny wali hy kya?
apko kaisey pata chala?
tai ki nazroon sy kuch nhi chupta aur pagli dekh tumraha to thora pait(tummy) bhi nikal raha hy pr abhi bht kam hy konsa mahina hy tera?
ji wo 4th with a shy
arey ma to pochna hi bhool gyi tun ne kuch khaya?
nhi abhi to nhi
arey pagal ho gyi hy kya iss halat ma bhooki hy apney bachey ka to khayal kr ruk ma kuch ly kr ati hoon
arey tai!!
but she leaved hurriedly
then geet sit on bed and said to herself
lo aj ka to intezaam ho gya ab kal sy mission MD start.
after dinner they both sat in terrace and then tai asked
yeh bata geet to yahan kya krney ayi hy wo bhi iss halat ma?
wo tai ma apney pati ko dhondney ayi hoon
mtlb???
wo tai ap shahyad meri iss ma kuch help kr skti ho kyun k ap to yahan sab ko jaanti ho gi
haan jaanti to hoon pr sab ko nhi humara village bht badha hy mera to kehna hy k yeh kisi city sy kam bhi nhi hy
tai baat yeh hy kay
and then narrated her story
shabash geet mjh tum py garv hy kay tujh ma itni himmat hy kay tu apney pati ko dhondney ayi hy warna aisey ma to koi bhi himmat haar jata hy ma dua krti hoon k tera pati tujhey jald hi mil jaye
tai ap meri madad karo gi na?
haan haan kyun nhi hum kal subha sy hi shuru karein gy marey yahan bht janney waley hain
thank you tai
ab chal so jaa raat bht ho gyi hy
ji tai
she layed on her bed and thinking what to do next and then salpped her head
oh god ma to bhool hi gyi meera sy bhi baat krni thi wo pareshan ho rhi hogi ab to kafi raat ho gyi hy chalo subha karon gi arey meera sy yaad aya medicine to li hi ni
she quickly take her medicine and said
sorry baby mamma medicine bhool gyi pr promise ab agey sy nhi bhoolon gi ok ab tu bhi so ja bht thak gya hy na ok good night.
and closed her eyes but image of maan came in front she said
maan kahan hain ap jldi mil jaye naa apkey bina rehna bht mushkil hy mjh to kuch ata hi nhi hy sab to ap hi krety thy ma kahan dhondon apko kya apko meri yaad nhi arhi? please jldi mil jaye na please...



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Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Geet landed to her destination and was all set to find her love
She to help from her friend too and an unknown women was ready to assist Geet in her mission
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
cute update geet decided to eat and stay at a place she is confused from where should she start her search she remembers her friend vicky who is a detective she tells abt her problems vicky gives her some points and place to start her search geet is estatic and continues her search she meets a lady who runs a centere for girls and when geet tells abt her mission to fing her husband the lady becomes happy and praises geet also agrees to help her as she knows many ppl geet is happy she misses maan and wishes to have him back in her life pretty soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
great update, well written! thanks 4 da pm! Geet on her mission 2 find her love! love hw she talks 2 her baby! she makes sure she eats n then calls her friend Vicky 4 help! he is unable 2 be there bt advises her wt to do! Geet meets a lady! she tells her abt Maan! the lady offers 2 help! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
geet went to search Maan
geet taking help of Vicky

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