Their own unique first night! #AvNeilscene

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys. I just wrote something for all the AvNeil fans here. This is my first attempt. I don't even know if it is an OS or anything. It's just an AvNeil scene. The name is the title. I hope you all will like it. 😊
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It was the first night after Bebe's visit to their home. Neil and Avni had to spend the night together in one room. Already Avni was angry at Neil for mocking her not-so-good cooking skills during lunch in the day time. So, sharing the same room with that man is like hell for her she thought.

Neil was sitting on the couch working on his laptop when Avni stepped out of the bathroom dressed in a spongebob pyjama. It was a yellow tshirt with long trousers that had small spongebobs printed on it. She was hesitant to wear it at first but didn't really have any other choice since she didn't have anything wifey type to wear (Lol) because of the hasty marriage. She just kept hoping to not hear any more mockings from Neil. But that's just not gonna happen isn't it?

N: Mujhe nahi patata ki meri biwi raat ko ek yellow tamatar ki tarah dikti hai (laughing)

Avni stopped walking to the sound of Neil. Without showing her anger she says,

A: Yellow tamatar ho ya red tamatar, Kya karoge tum?

N: Kyun? Kuch karwa na hai?

A: (Startled) Nahi toh. Mein sone jaa rahi hoon. Tumhaari shakal dhekthe rahungi toh neend bhi darrke bhaag jayega.

N: (in low voice) Toh bhaag jaane do

A: kuch kaha?

N: Haan... NAHI

Avni walks to the bed, takes a pillow and the duvet. She returns to the couch Neil was sitting.

A: Utho. Mujhe sona hai.

N: Bed dhikai nahi dheta?

A: Woh tumhara hai

N: haan toh?

A: Toh waha toh tum souge right?

N: Right!

A: Toh mein toh couch par soungi right?

N: Wrong!

A: Neil ab yaha tumhaari police station ki attitude nahi chalegi. Utho!

N: Meri dear wifey. Yeh police station ki attitude nahi, yeh ek husband ka attitude hai.

A: Kuch bhi ho. Mein tumhare sath ek bed par nahi soungi bas!

Neil stands up with this and starts walking towards Avni. For each step Neil took forward Avni took a step back until she was pinned to the door. Slowly, Neil came closer to her and caged her with his strong arms. Leaning forward he came closer to her ear slightly brushing each others cheeks. Avni was breathing hard which was clearly visible. Neil smirked and said to Avni

N: Iss ghar mein tum sirf isliye ho kyunki tumne accept kiyaaki tum yaha pe meri biwi banke rahoge Ananya. Toh bed pe toh tumhe sona hi padega na Mrs. Neil Khanna. hmm?

Avni's eyes widened as she realized there was nothing she could do as she had already accepted the condition. She had to live there by hook or by crook. For that she will even tolerate this name-sake husband. Little did she know that this name-sake relationship is more than that.

Neil slowly went away from her and took his side on the bed. He got ready to sleep. Slowly, Avni too came and sat on her side in a position which is furthest away from Neil. She was even hesitant to lie down. Noticing this, Neil turned the other side and before closing his eyes he said.

N: Ananya just lie down. If you can't trust me, just trust my parents' upbringing. Good night.

A: (in a slow voice) Good night.
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Please do comment and give feedback. Would love to read them all.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow keep it up...looking forward for part2
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful update
keep going
looking forward for next part
waiting for it
when you update if possible pm me
cont soon
Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I absolutely loved this! Neil is so naughty
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... It was very nice yaar.
Your description was more than perfect.
I love this attitude of Neil .
Great yaar .
You can write a very good ff too. Please write more and more.
Thank you for this lovely scene.😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kasaf

Wow keep it up...looking forward for part2

Thankyouuu. This was just a scene I attempted to write. Not thinking of continuing this. But in the future I might write more. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehaa9

wonderful update

keep going
looking forward for next part
waiting for it
when you update if possible pm me
cont soon

Thankyouu! This is just a scene I attempted writing. Not thinking of continuing this one. But, in the future I'll write more. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sammy17

I absolutely loved this! Neil is so naughty

Hehe thankyou. I love this naughty Neil too. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvmylove

Superb.. i loved it..

Aww thanks 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vu1998

Wow... It was very nice yaar.

Your description was more than perfect.
I love this attitude of Neil .
Great yaar .
You can write a very good ff too. Please write more and more.
Thank you for this lovely scene.😛

Thankyou so much. 😳 I'll try writing more.
And you're welcome hehe.

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