ShivIka FF: An Ishqbaaaz Rising *3.7 Updated* (2nd July, Page 82) - Page 45

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another post ???? 😲 😲 that too so fast ??? 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

IT WAS FREAKISHLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JUST PERFECT! ❤️

He made her realise that he cares (but won't admit it 😆 ) and that both Saahil and Her are his family now, to be more precise, his newly found home 😳

It was all so cute, especially the little nok-jhok at the end 😆

Very excited to see what happens next!!!!!!!!😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗
Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update
Shivaa is such a stubborn person
Still confused how did he allow her to go alone
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Posted: 8 years ago
the end was typical shivaay
poor khanna
haha
loved whole part

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww I really loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shivay loved the shot ... I don't know why this ff is my fave '

Anni's emotions & shock for SSO was so amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi LilyJames!
First and foremost, my sincerest apologies for ignoring this gem for so long. I've been swamped with so many things that my to-lists don't make an ounce of sense of anymore. My inbox is jam packed with requests I have yet to reply so I hope you will forgive me for my tardiness.

Now, that said, let's come back to the story. I love the arch this tale has taken. From the forgiveness, to the heavy heart acceptance as well as what seems like a temporal embracing of their current situation, both ShivIka and the Oberoi Clan are trying to make the most things in any way they can. And the reason I say temporal is because unspoken acceptance often just leads to a tentative peace which beguiles.
And that's what Shivaay and Anika are at the moment, beguiled for and by each other. Shivaay is lost in the gratitude of her forgiveness and Anika is lost in the joy of family. And the family, ah well. They are lost in their own dreams of a happy-family moments and a happily ever after for these two lovebirds. As weird as it is, Pinky seems to be the only one awake enough to see the woods for the trees. The only one who seems to remember just how much is a stake.

So I have a feeling that the issues between ShivIka will come back - they haven't really talked about any issues at all. Haven't sorted anything out.
Stuck in a bit of a limbo is what they are - and oh, what a limbo it is. Cute, angsty, hilarious, intense and yes, dammit, hot! These two make my heart pick up beat I tell you - especially this last chapter. The way he grabbed her from behind, startling her and set her heart beat pounding... I loved, loved, loved that moment! Could see it happening in front of my own eyes!

All in all, a brilliant endeavor on your part and I cannot wait for more.
Once again, apologies for the tardiness.

Lots of Love.
A.C.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pride is consider the worst crime it's can drive you to do so much things be it good or bad . They both care but both will not accept both want more yet have not step forward. Love the update amazing as ever. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please update next part soon...
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3.6 PART D: THE WEB




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Daksh hid behind the tall shrubs on the last lap of the rounding highway... just before the winding road met the national highway through the toll plaza.


"Patience now..."


Willing himself to keep his calm, he focused all his attention into executing the plan now. Almost hidden completely from view, he had counted the exact number of cars that had passed the road in the last hour... three.. there had been three cars.


It was all fitting so perfectly... maybe this was all just proof of how this was all pre-destined?


A different kind of excitement buzzed through him...anticipation... years of winding emotions of losing...of hating... of loving... all came together in that moment.


Finally. Finally... he would have had his revenge.


An image of a much younger him and Shivaay played at the back of his mind...they were fifteen and Shivaay had just won the student of the year trophy... the chants of "Shivaay'..."Shivaay" rang heavily in the air and he remembered getting pushed behind in the after party as everyone just wanted to gather around Shivaay.


Shivaay... Shivaay... Shivaay... everyone just wanted Shivaay. And it didn't help that Shivaay never gave any of them except him and his own family the time of the day. Ironic... girls wanted to date him... boys wanted to be him... yet... none of it mattered to him.


Even now, over fifteen years later...he could never forget the night of his sixteenth birthday. They were all partying at his farmhouse...and he was excited. He was finally going to get to take it to the next level with his girlfriend, Avni. He still remembered feeling the nervousness... he had really liked her. But just as she wished him a happy birthday... and he had been about to kiss her... he remembered seeing her face transform and squeal at something behind him.


Confused, he had turned to see what had caught her eye and a shadow had crossed his face as he realised that it was because Shivaay had just entered the party with Omkaara.


Within seconds, Avni had slipped her hand out of his as she made her way skipping towards Shivaay who only payed her a small smile before trying to make his way to him.


He still remembered catching Shivaay's eye from across the room and noting the slight change even on his face. Not wanting to confront himself or Shivaay.. he remembered turning around and walking away into the crowd as if it had all happened yesterday.


The house music blared in his ears as he walked away from the party and into his an unused bedroom... and he also remembered in intricate detail the turmoil of emotions that had passed through him then. Shock... pain.. betrayal.. anger.



Betrayal. Anger. Pain.



His phone's silent vibration caught his attention as he quickly pulled himself from his thoughts.



"Yes, Tia."


"They have left Panchgani? Good... Thank you... Ti-aaa"


He drawled her name deliberately.


Just the idea that this... it... bothered her.. it nurtured him n inexplicable ways.




Almost...showtime... Shivaay.


Finally... Shivaay would know how it felt...To lose it all.




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"I am not sure about him, mom. There's something about him... I had met him 2 years ago... but he is different now... it's much worse...I can't explain it."


Tia tried explaining her confusing thoughts to her mother, who was growing steadily impatient.


"Enough Tia. There is too much at stake... now. We have invested too much into this. Into Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Get this through your head. We need this."


Her mother was already on another call before she could reply.


Closing her eyes in defeat, she quietly sent out a prayer for the woman who had unknowingly stepped into a web... a web that they had been designing over the last five years. A web that they had been orchestrating for over 3 of those 5 years now... a woman who was going to pay with blood for just having been destined to fall in love with the wrong man.



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Roop Oberoi held the payphone nervously as she fidgeted with the dirty looking wire at the small store.


"The truck has been arranged. Everything is ready."


She spoke in small whispers as an old woman bumped into her whilst crossing the store.


What had she been reduced too?


An uneasiness gripped her from within as she took in the final "go" signal from Mrs. Kapoor on the other side. "Okay, Randhawa is waiting for my signal. He is driving the truck himself. No witnesses... no others this time... You were right. It's all winding down, we need to be more careful."


Bitterness laced her voice as she spoke coldly... detached.


She hated them all. The Oberois'... All of them... from their hypocrisy to their selfishness.


And now, it would finally be her turn.


Pushing aside the uncomfortable feeling in the pit of her stomach, she moved to put the phone back into its holder before she paid the tariff to the old man behind the counter before walking away.



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Next: 3.6 Part E


Edited by LilyJames0194 - 8 years ago
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3.6 PART E : A RACE AGAINST TIME



"When times runs out and your heart needs to say so much more
But the heart that should hear it is gone forever now
And you are left with a raw nagging sore"

- Unknown


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As he ended the conference call with one of Oberoi industries oldest partners, he rubbed his chest lightly as the uneasiness within grew ever so slightly.


Annika


Her name still sounded like a reverent whisper within him. And as he walked past the dressing mirror in his room towards the large poolside facing windows he was almost startled to see a small smile at the corners of his face.


Annika


Pushing the slight tugging at his heart aside, he checked the watch on his left wrist, only to realise that he hadn't checked in on either Khanna or her in the last 25 minutes.


The call had taken 10 minutes longer than he had anticipated.


Pushing aside the uneasiness and without wasting another thought, he immediately dialled her number for the third time in that hour only to be met with the annoying sound of a pre-recorded "currently unavailable" voiceover.


Pushing the uneasiness away more uncomfortably this time, he dialled Khanna's number for the fifth time.


He should have gone with them.


Khanna picked up on the fourth ring...but before Khanna could actually say something, he heard the rushed heavy breathing of his head of security from the other side of the phone.


Something was wrong.


His mind froze as he let the thought wash over him.


Something was terribly wrong.


In the next second, he found himself running towards his car. "KHANNA! What is happening?"


Annika


He heard his own thundering voice echoing through the hallways of the mansion but in that moment he couldn't have cared less. Somewhere the back of his mind did register Tia and her mother calling out to him, but he couldn't have listened to them if they had been at gun point themselves. He just couldn't.


A fear so fierce had gripped him from inside that he found himself to numb to everything but the raging war inside him.


Annika


The only name that he could hear was hers. The only voice that he heard tugging him from deep within was hers.


Her.


Annika


His heart was erratically thundering in his ears and it was almost miraculous that he still heard Khanna coughing on the line.


Gripping the phone to his ear he shouted once more - "Khanna! Can you hear me?"


"S - Si" "S-ir"


He heard him stutter before he launched into another coughing tirade.


"I am on the way. I am on the way. Have you crossed the toll?"


His voice sounded alien even to him. The fear was too raw. Probably in different circumstances he would have allowed that moment of introspection... but right now... None of it mattered.


All he could see was her beautiful face and her hypnotic eyes...and the fact that he needed to get to her.


He was coming.


He was coming.


Finally out of the doors of the Oberoi Mansion, he almost pushed the army of security guards and servants that were running to help him and got into his car. Within moments, he was already pushing the limits of the car's acceleration as he sped down the roads of Mumbai to the national highway.


Khanna's gasping echoed in the car as he tried impossibly to push the gas even more.


"S-ir"



They had been fine 25 minutes ago. She had been fine 25 minutes ago.


Khanna was tailing them as they neared the toll.


25 minutes.


He had let his ego get the better of his judgment.


He should have gone with her.



"KHANNA! I - I need your location... Khanna.. please"



He was begging. He knew he... Shivaay Singh Oberoi was begging... but that didn't even register to him in that moment.


Nothing mattered except her.


"S-Sir... he has her. A truck..."


Khanna's coughing fit interrupted as he and he felt his heart sink and the pain threatened to paralyse him as he pushed impossibly harder on the gas.


"S - Si...The truck came and hit me from the side...it was him. It was Daksh sir. He has Annika ma'am."


The words echoed so harshly inside him that for a second he was sure that his heart had stopped altogether.



Daksh had her. Daksh had got to her.



His vision blurred as he raced across the barely populated highway. His heart was clenching painfully into his chest and he could feel his breathing ragged.


Daksh had her.



Numbly, he faintly registered that Khanna was still trying to tell him something. "S-Sir RK tried stopping him...b"


"...B- but Daksh sir just threw him off the side of the road -sir... RK is unconscious and An...Annika ma'-am... when she tried to run off to help RK... he.. he hit her on the head."


His knuckles were turning white as the grip on the wheel became almost unbearably tight.


"Annika ma'-am... when she tried to run off to help RK... he.. he hit her on the head."


The words repeated themselves in his mind and the knots inside threatened to push him over the edge.


The words turned themselves around his mind and he felt himself almost hunch over as the weight of reality sank in.


He had her. Daksh had got her. He had hit her on the head. She was unconscious.


A lesser man would probably have been too blinded by the turmoil of pain and punishing ache that burned within him...but Shivaay Singh Oberoi was not some commoner...He was Shivaay Singh Oberoi...so whilst his pain overwhelmed him, there was something even more instinctive to a man like him.



The end goal.


Her.


He hadn't realised that he had been holding his breath so his dried throat could only rasp out the question he had been trying to to get the answer to..."hang in there Khanna. Please. Where are you? Khanna, did you see where he has taken her? The car number? Anything. Something."


The last part of the question was a whisper. A prayer.


An agonised whisper of a burning man.


Khanna's breathing had turned even heavier but he still managed to whisper out the details.


"S-Sir, ma'am's... ma'am's small wrist purse... RK managed to slip in his security tracker when he saw the truck crashing... into me."


A scintillating glimmer of hope seeped into him as he took the car phone to dial his brother.


Rudra picked up on the first ring. "Rudra get the location of RK's tracker."


Maybe it was the alienness of his voice or something else, he couldn't focus on that now...but Rudra hadn't asked a single question... so he only heard Rudra quietly rummaging through the scatter of his room to find his iPad.



"Bhaiya I am on the Oberoi server - RK's position is nearing the old mill warehouse ... south of the toll naka on the highway."


Faintly, he registered Rudra now rushing somewhere too but he didn't stall on the thought as much. "Thank you Rudra... find Khanna's too -"


Rudra didn't need a pause as he hurried on to answer.


"Bhaiya, Khanna is on the crossroads near the toll naka-"


"Bhaiya.. I am on the way."


The vision in front of him blurring already, Shivaay made turns around the lonely roads at impossibly dangerous speeds.


"Rudra... it's Annika."



He whispered to his brother. The helplessness... regret... and agony bristled raw in the whisper.


The words themselves left him in a cold daze.



Shivaay


The way his name sounded on her lips. The softness of her gaze... the innocence of her mind. The selflessness of her soul... the shining truth in her eyes.


Somehow through the moisture that threatened to engulf his vision...he heard Rudra accelerating in the background.


Hitting the wheel in agony, he was racing towards the toll but he was still 13 minutes away and then another 6 to to the warehouse.


"Rudra... get to Khanna."


His voice was rough with emotion... and he didn't wait to hear his brother's reply before he lost the grip on the phone.


Khanna's small whimpers still echoed in the car as he seemed to race against time to get to her.



Each moment that he had spent by her side.. her impossible language... her burning gaze... her hypnotic eyes... her incessant questions... all of them burned deep inside him as he felt his skin bristle with a rage that he had never felt before.


Her.


Annika.


His Annika.


He was coming. He was coming.



"Please...just hang on. I am coming Annika..."


It was a whisper. A prayer. A finality and a promise that echoed and reverberated from somewhere deep inside him.



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Next: Part F


Edited by LilyJames0194 - 8 years ago

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