Journey of Love-PART 2 UPDATED PG 3-Avneil SS - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Interesting concept
Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1

He started walking without leaving her hand.
She tried to free it but he wasn't bothered to leave her as if he left her hand she wud be lost forever.

Avni had tears in her eyes as she kept looking at his face.

he looked so scared.
Why was he scared ?was he afraid of losing her?
nope avni this cannot be true but what was it in his eyes...

Neil signalled her to sit in d car.
She sat without a word.

Avni too was hell scared Bcz of the incident.
He started driving.
She kept looking out of d window.
It wz a long journey...


The car stopped as there was a huge jam on the highway.
Someone told Neil that bcz of the storm roads r blocked n u won't be able to leave.

It had started to rain lightly.
Helpless and tired they got down of the car to look for shelter as well as food.

There was a small lodge n dhaba nearby.
Neil ordered food n they sat there.

Neil looked at her n her eyes were wet bcz of crying constantly and her kajal smudged.

Neil didn't know why but he picked up his handkerchief and wiped her tears.

Avni looked in surprise.


She got up from there and stood in a corner nearby looking at the rain n drenching her hand in it.

Nearby some goons were standing n they eyed avni.

Neil was away to make arrangements for the shelter.

He returned only to find avni missing.
He thot this girl must have ran away like always.
"Betrayed me again huh"Neil thought.


He looked for her only to find faint cries of someone.
"Avni he ran at once and within moments the goons were lying on the road.

How dare they touch my avni"

Neil gave them an extra punch.

And looked at her...




Continued...


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PRECAP:Avneil in d lodge.
Neil having fever.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Avneil + rain scene = my favourite😳
Interesting precap . Avneil in lodge . Can't wait so long please update next chapter yaar.
You write very well . But too short for avneil scene hungry person like me.
But above all that loved it . 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Amazing start
Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2
"Are u okay? neil asked her and she nodded in a yes

It started raining heavily and they got fully wet.

Neil took her inside the lodge as he had arranged a room.

The wife of the owner of lodge gave them dress to change but Neil started sneezing bcz of cold.

They had changed clothes but Neil had caight cold.

Avni asled if he wz okay but Neil told her he's fine.

"Neil tumhe sardi hogayi h I will bring a cup of tea for u"
Avni went out and brpught tea.

Wen she returned Neil wz lying on the sofa and breathing heavily.

She ran towards him and took his head in her hand.

"oh no isey toh tez fever hai.."

Avni called out his name but he wz not in sense.

She brought out water in a mug and dipped her hanky in it n kept on neil's forehead.

Avni kept repeating the acitvity and almost an hour had passed wen neil blinked his eyes and saw avni sitting wit half open eye.


She wz worried.

Neil slept peacefully looking at her face.

She cares for him and he cud see it.

"Avni" he callled out in pain.

"IM Here Neil"She held his hand n let him sleep.

Neil dreamt of avni standing near a cliff and somebody pushing her down.

She was about to fall and..

Neil woke up scared.

It was a dream.
ahe slept again and woke up in the morning.
but where is avni gone.

He cudnt find her in the room.

He only saw the papers kept on the table.

He wanted those property papers...

but where is Avni missing...

Is she gone??

He looked for her in d lodge calling out her name.

Avni came running to him

"Kya hua Neil firse koi bura sapna dekha kya?"

PRECAP
Neil and avni walking.
Avni going near the mountain cliff.


Edited by Ashi345678 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is indeed journey of love full of care,worry and love
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Awesome update
Continue soon
Next time plz pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Nice update...continue soon😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
nice starting
good parts
waiting for next
if possible pm me next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Nice one dear. A caring wife and a protective hubby . Loved it . 😃

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