NEW! Arjun/Riya (Ariya) FF: Strings of Desire- Note p34 URGENT - Page 8

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Ugh such a mess. Not the joy of kissing a man she loves/is attracted to, not a follow up of a situational thing, no internal Monologue nothing, this awkwardness. She being this good pure soul can't process this thing, I wonder how Arjun is faring. The way what walked away says he is numb and probably beating himself up for betraying Roshni. Poor guy. I still can't believe he actually went through that, I thought maybe he will back our giving excuses of PDA etc. Riya typically not in a position to accept it, easier to blame it on hormones and tiredness.

So this killer is onto her. But one thing, she didn't follow up on her gut feeling that someone keeping watch on her the moment Arjun walked in, is it cause she felt it was him and not the killer? A 'I can sense you around me" thing?

Interesting tidbit about the case. Lungs water don't match hotel water and no water around hotel. It's like an island no communication nothing. No wonder those couples having trouble came here to fix their almost broken relationships. Where this killer getting this different water from? Can it be mineral water which comes from outside, it won't match hotel water sample (shower swimming pool for eg) also the men didn't eat anything for 24 hours. Nothing solid anyway...were they sick? Is it ORS😆 my mind is on overdrive after this. One couple was professor, of what subject? Another was lawyer...though he /she didn't get lessons on recreating crime scene but the do know how to get away with it legally. Though still onto hotel staff.

God damn I didn't see it coming. Poor Riya, her sister and jiju! They were killed, it's almost parallel to Arjun. Shit, they didn't need to be connected like this! I don't think it's same killer but who knows...such a terrible situation, she needed to be away but this case demands her presence. Her memories of her sister smoking on rooftop and both talking about boys and life was so heartbreaking. And then her punching arjun...I can't help but feel this seals the deal for the killer to target then more cause now they have a conflict which is similar to all other victims. Good work, luck!🥱

I legit resed seconds after you update😆 aw don't feel bad about less response, last update was a bit different so people maybe a bit confused about the story but I am sure it will be better slowly. Also this forum is slowly dying as you can see. Yours is a good story which deserves wider audience, and I am so sorry the response is not what you had in mind. I hope for few of us loyal readers you will finish this story with the original vision you had in mind.

Thanks for the update and scrap 🤗

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