Time : A hope? - An Avneil Oneshot

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm Vibha and i've been trying to write an Avneil so here's my take on it. Please bear with me as it's my first try 😃😳



Time! It was a very funny thing, how her time was limited with her mother and brother and how she couldn't forget about all the deeds of the past.

Time had flown by and healed her wound too but the scars had etched their mark on her chest leaving a long imprint on her mind.

Time, the only thing she wanted in-order to expose The Great Dayawanti Mehta and it was the only thing she didn't have because within few hours Neil was going to marry Rhea and Dayawanti Mehta would be successful in fooling the whole world once again.

She was satisfied that with Ali's help she had made Rhea realize that this marriage was not a good idea but she got the shock when she saw that Rhea had to marry Neil as she had no other chance to live.

There were other things going on unknown to her...
Neil was planning a hoax marriage as he knew Rhea didn't love hi and he wanted to unearth the truth behind the hidden face of Dayawanti Mehta.
Shwetha ji was planning to make Rhea a puppet in her hands.
Dayawanti planning to leave the country once the marriage was over.

Within a few minutes of confusion and Neela maa asking Avni to switch as a bride, she decided that it was her only chance which would lead to the downfall of her enemy and agreed hesitantly to it. Expressing a silent sorry to Neil as she took the silent pheras with him knowing that it wouldn't mean anything to he.

Only time would announce the winner she thought as a lone tear made way through all the happenings. In this tale of revenge little did she know that there was a shoulder for her support, a hand to wipe her tears off, a heart which would beat for her...Little did she know that after all the fights, encounters and suspicions Neil was already falling for her.

Time was a funny thing afterall!



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Do let me know how it was! I'll try to write better ones next time!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's lovely dear.pls write more .I like the way u built up the plot.continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow superb yaar I loved the last lines u wrote lil did she know and that shoulder line super 👏 loved it do write more 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikhsk

It's lovely dear.pls write more .I like the way u built up the plot.continue


I'll definitely try and write more! I hope I can write one this weekend😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

Wow superb yaar I loved the last lines u wrote lil did she know and that shoulder line super 👏 loved it do write more 😳


Thanks you! It means a lot to know that people like it, I'll try to improvise😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very well written loved the last para the most . Please do write more i m waiting for more. Ek wada wala thank you🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vu1998

Very well written loved the last para the most . Please do write more i m waiting for more. Ek wada wala thank you🤗


I'll try to make the stories longer, glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful OS
Do write more on AvNeil
Take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rozy77

Wonderful OS
Do write more on AvNeil
Take care


I'll definitely try and write as many as I can😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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that was a good one!!👏
time!😊
continue writing...on avneil...want to read more from u ..😃

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