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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi

Nice update... Geet cant understand what maan wants from his life... He wants to marry zeenat for business.. possessive for geet and acknowledge it too.. can do anything to keep her away from yash... Poor maan get to know abt yashmeer very late..


thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">maan dil ki baat ko mano...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">awesome n lovely update...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved it very much ...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank u very much fr d lovely update...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...</font>

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thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Hoshiarpur

Nice ud. I really enjoyed it. But I still have 2 things to say.

One, Please try not giving so much gaps coz I have a terrible memory, I forget the stories with such long gaps and I'd have to read from the beginning to catch up with what happened last... sometimes I don't even feel like doing it so I would hav discontinued reading it..
and two, I thought initially Geet was in love with Maan, but in the latest few chapters it wasn't shown that way even a bit.. any reason? In fact i see he has been softening but that's where it ends.. no monologues or feelings shown frm Geet's view.



can understand... I m having my exam that's why sorry ...
will do surely
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice ud

maan kissed geet on hr cheek bz she didn't kissed him and it's big blow on his ego he went movie with hr friends bz yash was going too he's insecure about him but after geet explained him and about meera he get relaxed
but zeenat waiting fr them


thnx for reading...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kajal2005

Fantabulous update

Maan's heart is continuously trying to knock some feelings inside him😳 but his idiot brain😡
Thanku for pm
Continue soon


thnx for reading...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Wonderful update👍🏼

Maan babu ke mann mein ladoo pootrahe hai... Geet kiss degi dare mein😉
Tai tai fish hogaya... Geet smart nikhli bache ko kiss kiya👏
Maan ne tho kiss diya geet ko😎
He is enjoying geet n her friends company... Maan too enjoyed the movie... He didn't have any friends... But geet was orphan but had many friends
Why zeenat has come home?


maan was flying high ..geet me gira diya he he
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 10 -


Geet asked Nakul to make coffee for their unexpected guest and sit to cut vegetables to divert her mind from Zeenat ...She never saw Zeenat and seeing her face to face , first time she feeling less ...' What she has which she doesn't...? yes Money ...high society label most important father's name ' ...


Didn't she knows sooner or later their Nikah gonna end ...it was already on card then why this heartache ? ...why this unbearable pain ? ...she thought slowly slowly she is getting over from Maan but no ... she was making fool of her own self ...she was avoiding him..stop talking to him all this to make her heart stop beating for her husband , to try to make herself strong enough to leave this relation with high head ... but no its not possible ...She still loves this man , in a dark corner of heart still expecting little love for her ... Expectations always hurt she shouldn't dare to dream what is out of her reach ...


She wiped her tears furiously...' why I'm crying ? for her Maan who now busy talking to his future wife ... but Why ? its good that Zeenat came and now its more clear that why Maan can't be her ' ...


but she never thought Maan would invite Zeenat home when she is still his wife ... was all this to hurt her ?..her mind try to believe that he wants to hurt her but her heart says no ..she seeing Maan may be he was rude first but from couple of days he is little different...he is not soft but not rude or something even sometimes very keen to spend time with her ...no he can't stop that low to hurt her ...most importantly how he knows that bringing Zeenat will hurt her feelings... ' isn't she told her decision to go away as soon as possible ? ...so may be he is giving hint to go away from his life sooner ...'

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" How are you Dadima ? " Zeenat said sitting beside her but Dadima still looking at the door where Geet left giving excuse of coffee ...and glaring at confused Maan..


" first of all I'm not Dadima for you only my close relative can do that ..and I'm fine ...but why are you here ..." Dadima told her directly in which she ducked her head down in embracement...

" Wwoh woh main bas aapki dekhne ayi thi ..." She said slowly looking here and there regretting to come here at this moment because it clear that no one here liking her visit even not Maan who standing quiet ...

" Actually I'm doing a project with Maan so thought to discuss..."

Dadima cut in mid " My grandson don't do business talk at home ...you should have know this Maan doesn't mix business and personal life together ...anyways good you came ..I get to see the girl with whom Maan doing business together ...I heard you good in business ...you both would make a good team as business partner ..." in one way Dadima told her what can she be in his life only a business partner for a time being that's it ...and Zeenat is not a child not to get it ...

After sometime she thought better to leave ..." ah I guess I should go..."

" yes you should ...its not good to stay out that long ..."

Zeenat nodded and went out not before looking at Maan who looks not bothered by any of this ...


" Dadima you shouldn't have do this " Maan said slowly as Zeenat went out hearing Dadima's rude taunt He not feeling bad for Zeenat as she shouldn't here when he didn't say anything about coming , but they are doing a big project together and he doesn't want that project to stop ..." She is just a client come partner ...just here to meet you that's it ..."


" Aaccha sirf client.. pahele aapki koyi client toh kabhi humse milne nehi aaye phir voh kyun ...? sach batayega Maan kahi aapne uche toh nehi bulaya ? " ...Dadima looked suspiciously to her Grandson.. still angry at Zeenat uninviting visit ...


" No I didn't trust me ...why I would invite her ! " Maan is also confused why she came ...they are not friend or something ..just business associate ...they done one project together and now doing another big that's it ...

Seeing Dadima's face he knows Dadima won't believe him ... he is at fault...he was so busy to date or something but media always linked him with some model or some rich girl but he never bother or Dadima never asked ..and when his name came with Zeenat as usual Dadima didn't care until Maan shared his plan to marry Zeenat . He didn't date her but he sensed that she is quiet interested in him even her father also , Maan thought she can be a good catch so he never bothered just kept quiet at her father indication about their alliance ..he was waiting for their project to finish then he would take step about it but before that he got married to Geet ...


There Dadima saw her in many parties and denied right there ...but his mind only occupied to become number one businessman and Zeenat can be the biggest pawn in that , so he was quiet adamant ...now after all this Dadima not believing him is normal still Maan tried ...

" Dadima there is nothing between me and her ..."


" and nothing can happen... you are married ...Nikah hua hai aapki Geet ke sath buliye maath " Dadima warned him little strictly ..." I don't want that girl near my house get this Maan " ...he nodded his ...giving her a glass of water sit beside her ...she drank it slowly still angry on Maan ...he held her hand ...


" clam down Dadima ...stress is not good for you ...forget all this she will never come here ever again I promise you ..."

" I know Maan you were angry with me as I forced you to marry Geet ...I was also feeling bad to force you but now seeing you both so happy I'm glad that I did that ...no one can be perfect for you than Geet I know till now you also understand it ..money and status can't bring happiness only love can do wonder ...she will always keep you happy , support you at every step ...she is not like your mother Maan she won't leave you in your bad time ..woh bohot acchi ladki hai ..kabhi unhe chot maat puchayeh ...kuch aasa maat kijiye ki woh aapko chor ne par majboor ho jaye ..." ...


Maan's heart pinch hearing Geet leaving him . Shouldn't he be bothered that Zeenat insulted here but no he not thinking about that girl or her insult not even feeling regret seeing her or marrying Geet because he slowly liking the fact that Geet is his wife not Zeenat or someone else ...

he nodded sharply still in dazed of what Dadima said... isn't it what Geet going to do when Dadima will fully well ..even time to time she makes it clear to him...but why he feeling restless hearing it ...what he wants actually ? money or this relation he needs to decided before its too late ...

Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
sorry guys.
so late update and short part ...
exam going on ...
still two left... 😕
updated just for you guys...
even worse that yesterday I tried to update but whole things got deleted ...
In short time i only manage to type this little ..
please bear with me till my exam end ...
enjoy
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan koh zeenat khet peechey jaana chahiye tha...
Kam se kam uss khi lover koh drop karna banta hai...Itni late...Yeh maan kaisa insaan hai...Apni pyar koh akela chod diya...
Moving on ...
I soo loved dadi answer to zeenat and even dadi words of advice to maan...
Let maan go behind zeenat leaving our geet alone...
This maan is still confused with what he wants...Why don't he jump from hill...
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's high time that Maan decides what he wants

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