Humnava ( Part 16 - Page 104 ) pm later ( 27/ 05/18)

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

nice ud

maan kissed geet on hr cheek bz she didn't kissed him and it's big blow on his ego he went movie with hr friends bz yash was going too he's insecure about him but after geet explained him and about meera he get relaxed

but zeenat waiting fr them

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Nice ud. I really enjoyed it. But I still have 2 things to say.

One, Please try not giving so much gaps coz I have a terrible memory, I forget the stories with such long gaps and I'd have to read from the beginning to catch up with what happened last... sometimes I don't even feel like doing it so I would hav discontinued reading it..

and two, I thought initially Geet was in love with Maan, but in the latest few chapters it wasn't shown that way even a bit.. any reason? In fact i see he has been softening but that's where it ends.. no monologues or feelings shown frm Geet's view.

Edited by Miss.Hoshiarpur - 8 years ago

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Maan is naming his feelings as ego and protectiveness while he is actually jealous. Zeenat at this time?!?!? Maan is gonna be in dilemma.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: jasika08
Nice update
Waiting for next update

thnx for reading

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Shall I plan your murder sabi...
How can u stop at this point...
Maan went to movie with his wife but his lover is waiting at home...
How worst it can b...
If u didn't update soon...
U know what I am gona do...
I love the way geet kissed the kid not maan...Maan don't deserve geet ask...
Maybe zeenat can kiss him...
Wilb waiting

itna gussa ...shant shant
one secret I don't like Zenaat 😃
yup will soon

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: anu5
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Geet was restless finding thyself in a situation to kiss a boy
Maan couldnt fathom to understand his feelings towards geet and her gesture
He was frustrated that geet didn't kiss him and his ego took over his thinking
He was insecure abt yash and geet's camaraderie that he went along with geet and his friends to watch a movie
He was regretting not making friends and to bound his life building up his career and earning money
One should live their life very cheerfully that u don't regret missing things in future !!
Maan is yet realise his feelings and endurance for Geet
May be zeenat can make maan realise his feelings
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting for the next update

let's see
thnx for reading

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#337

maan dil ki baat ko mano...

awesome n lovely update...

loved it very much ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: anu5
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Geet was restless finding thyself in a situation to kiss a boy
Maan couldnt fathom to understand his feelings towards geet and her gesture
He was frustrated that geet didn't kiss him and his ego took over his thinking
He was insecure abt yash and geet's camaraderie that he went along with geet and his friends to watch a movie
He was regretting not making friends and to bound his life building up his career and earning money
One should live their life very cheerfully that u don't regret missing things in future !!
Maan is yet realise his feelings and endurance for Geet
May be zeenat can make maan realise his feelings
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting for the next update

thnx for reading sweety