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Part-1
Part-2
Part-3
Part-4
Part-5
Part-6
Part-7
PART-8
PART-9
Hey...I am starting the story.I am born and bought up in kerala,no roots in north india hence i l be using english.My hindi is good..but i dnt want to embarass myself with grammatical error.Now about the story its completely based on original yhm..i hate the new yhm after leap..i miss old yhm..here everybody is same..except my raman hete will b a ltl more sensible..I l take ur suggestions and include more characters..i l stop my rambling and begin my story.
PART-1
The scene begins from the hospital where ishita is admitted after jumping from the bus
Raman:Dr.manoj..please please save my Ishita...I cant live without her..Please dr..(Raman breaksdown)
Everybody's eyes got teary seeing The Raman kumar Bhalla crying to save his wife
Mrs.Bhalla:Its all because of me..If i didnt arrange for this trip nothing like this would have happend.
Mrs.Iyer:ayyo santhoshi..aisa kuch nahi hai..Dont blame yourself..Its not your fault.
Vandita:yes aunty..please dont blame yourself..we need to be strong now..for the kids,for Raman..Ammaa ,where is Adi and Ruhi??
They all look towards Raman's direction and see the kids going to their papa.
Ruhi:Papa..she calls him with her innocent voice..please dont cry papa..our Ishimaa and chotu are very strong..nothing will happen to them..Meine bhagwanji se bola hai agar unhe kuch hua toh phir mein kabhi unse baat nahi karungi..aap tension mat lo..Ruhi good girl hai na..so god will listen to me..(she kisses raman and wipes his tears)
Raman hugs her tightly
Papa..Adi calls him meekily..Ishima teekh hoga na..I love her papa..bohot pyaar karti hu mein meri ishimaa se
Raman:woh meri jkr hai...nothing will happen to her.They sit there holding onto each other..
Dr.Manoj:Raman...Ishitaji is out of danger know..
All of them were ecstatic listening to this
Raman:our baby??
Dr.Manoj:your baby is indeed a miracle baby..He/she is very stubborn like her mother..We thought we couldnt save the baby...but ur baby kept fighting for a life and in the end sur baby won..but u must take very good care of them..a small carelessness can be vital
Raman:Thank you dr..thank you..I l take very good care of her..i promise.. dr.can i see her??(dr nods)Raman enters the room and sees Ishita laying there peacefully..He enters and sit near her..He lays his head on her chest and start sobbing
Ishita:Raman..(meekily)why are tou crying??Raman please dont cry...look I am fine..aur our baby is also fine
Raman:Jaan..Dont do this to me again...I have died a thousand deaths.i will kill u if u do stunts like this again...I love you Ishita...i lov u so much..pagal madrasan
Ishita chuckles..I love u too my Ravan kumar...no no..we love you..Haina baby..(Raman smiles hearing it and was leaning to kiss her when the door opened)
Ishimaaa calked Adi and Ruhi in unison...Ishita:How r u my babies??arey why r u crying??Adi..Ru...mama is fine
Adi:we were afraid Ishima..we cant live without you
Ruhi:Ishimaa..I love you..Ishita:awww...my babies..come here..(she hugged them and kissed them..and they kissed her and her tummy too carefully not hurting her)
Raman:Hello...Somebody love me too...Ishita:Jallu Ravan kumar..and they all stat laughing
One by one everyone came and met her...Atleast they all left the love birds alone...
At night,
Ishita:Raman...y r u sitting so silent??..Raman...look hete baba..she held his face and made him look her..Its not ur fault..we are fine. You know our baby is very strong and brave..just like his papa..our baby saved me Raman..after all he is my ravan Kumar's baby...after hearing this Raman start smiling...He held her by her waist and leaned to kiss her.. a long kiss...kiss of assurance,hope and contentment
Raman lifted Ishita's gown and placed his head on her tummy and said: Papa loves u baby...come soon..we will make a team and tease ur mama..Ramaaan Ishita groaned...he chuckled and gave numerous kisses on her tummy..
Ishita adjusted on her bed and made space for Raman..He laid beside her..She kept her head on his chest and he wounded his hands around her.
Ishita:Ramannn...
Raman:hmmm
Ishita:mujhe ek aur kiss chahiye
Raman was shocked seeing a bold jkr...kyaa??he asked flabbergasted
Ishita:haa..woh bhi french wala...by saying this she placed her lips on his..He started sucking her lips gently..She oppened her lips and invited him..she moaned through the kiss..it lasted for a long time..
Raman:(panting)ab bas meri silk smitha ...baaki ghar jaake ab soja..And they laughed...She kept her head on his chest and he laid on the bed with her falling into a deep slumber..awaiting a new morning full of hopes and love..
Part-1
Part-2
Part-3
Part-4
Part-5
Part-6
Part-7
PART-8
PART-9
Hey...I am starting the story.I am born and bought up in kerala,no roots in north india hence i l be using english.My hindi is good..but i dnt want to embarass myself with grammatical error.Now about the story its completely based on original yhm..i hate the new yhm after leap..i miss old yhm..here everybody is same..except my raman hete will b a ltl more sensible..I l take ur suggestions and include more characters..i l stop my rambling and begin my story.
The scene begins from the hospital where ishita is admitted after jumping from the bus
Raman:Dr.manoj..please please save my Ishita...I cant live without her..Please dr..(Raman breaksdown)
Everybody's eyes got teary seeing The Raman kumar Bhalla crying to save his wife
Mrs.Bhalla:Its all because of me..If i didnt arrange for this trip nothing like this would have happend.
Mrs.Iyer:ayyo santhoshi..aisa kuch nahi hai..Dont blame yourself..Its not your fault.
Vandita:yes aunty..please dont blame yourself..we need to be strong now..for the kids,for Raman..Ammaa ,where is Adi and Ruhi??
They all look towards Raman's direction and see the kids going to their papa.
Ruhi:Papa..she calls him with her innocent voice..please dont cry papa..our Ishimaa and chotu are very strong..nothing will happen to them..Meine bhagwanji se bola hai agar unhe kuch hua toh phir mein kabhi unse baat nahi karungi..aap tension mat lo..Ruhi good girl hai na..so god will listen to me..(she kisses raman and wipes his tears)
Raman hugs her tightly
Papa..Adi calls him meekily..Ishima teekh hoga na..I love her papa..bohot pyaar karti hu mein meri ishimaa se
Raman:woh meri jkr hai...nothing will happen to her.They sit there holding onto each other..
Dr.Manoj:Raman...Ishitaji is out of danger know..
All of them were ecstatic listening to this
Raman:our baby??
Dr.Manoj:your baby is indeed a miracle baby..He/she is very stubborn like her mother..We thought we couldnt save the baby...but ur baby kept fighting for a life and in the end sur baby won..but u must take very good care of them..a small carelessness can be vital
Raman:Thank you dr..thank you..I l take very good care of her..i promise.. dr.can i see her??(dr nods)Raman enters the room and sees Ishita laying there peacefully..He enters and sit near her..He lays his head on her chest and start sobbing
Ishita:Raman..(meekily)why are tou crying??Raman please dont cry...look I am fine..aur our baby is also fine
Raman:Jaan..Dont do this to me again...I have died a thousand deaths.i will kill u if u do stunts like this again...I love you Ishita...i lov u so much..pagal madrasan
Ishita chuckles..I love u too my Ravan kumar...no no..we love you..Haina baby..(Raman smiles hearing it and was leaning to kiss her when the door opened)
Ishimaaa calked Adi and Ruhi in unison...Ishita:How r u my babies??arey why r u crying??Adi..Ru...mama is fine
Adi:we were afraid Ishima..we cant live without you
Ruhi:Ishimaa..I love you..Ishita:awww...my babies..come here..(she hugged them and kissed them..and they kissed her and her tummy too carefully not hurting her)
Raman:Hello...Somebody love me too...Ishita:Jallu Ravan kumar..and they all stat laughing
One by one everyone came and met her...Atleast they all left the love birds alone...
At night,
Ishita:Raman...y r u sitting so silent??..Raman...look hete baba..she held his face and made him look her..Its not ur fault..we are fine. You know our baby is very strong and brave..just like his papa..our baby saved me Raman..after all he is my ravan Kumar's baby...after hearing this Raman start smiling...He held her by her waist and leaned to kiss her.. a long kiss...kiss of assurance,hope and contentment
Raman lifted Ishita's gown and placed his head on her tummy and said: Papa loves u baby...come soon..we will make a team and tease ur mama..Ramaaan Ishita groaned...he chuckled and gave numerous kisses on her tummy..
Ishita adjusted on her bed and made space for Raman..He laid beside her..She kept her head on his chest and he wounded his hands around her.
Ishita:Ramannn...
Raman:hmmm
Ishita:mujhe ek aur kiss chahiye
Raman was shocked seeing a bold jkr...kyaa??he asked flabbergasted
Ishita:haa..woh bhi french wala...by saying this she placed her lips on his..He started sucking her lips gently..She oppened her lips and invited him..she moaned through the kiss..it lasted for a long time..
Raman:(panting)ab bas meri silk smitha ...baaki ghar jaake ab soja..And they laughed...She kept her head on his chest and he laid on the bed with her falling into a deep slumber..awaiting a new morning full of hopes and love..
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