Rishbala 2s My Everlasting Love completed page4

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Hi friends..here is a new story.I tried to make it an os .but I am the laziest one when it comes to typing.i can't type more than ten pages .so it's a two shot.please read and drop your views and I am not sure it's a new one .

My Everlasting Love


Part 1



the wind swril back her hair.and the coldness swept sending goosebumps on her body.
"Trish I think it's going to be rain"Madhu
"Yes..come inside otherwise you will drench in rain"Trish
"I want to drench in rain Trish.i love rain..each drops feel like someone touching you"Madhu
"You are crazy ..or else you needed to get married soon"Trish Smirked
Madhu glared at her"don't you know why we are here.i came here to enjoy my last days of freedom"Madhu
"Haha .yeah how could I forget"Trish
"What's funny in it.i doing like to get married soon and but my parents want me to get married.so I came here to enjoy my last days of freedom.i am getting married after 3 months"madhu
"Girl you eloped without Thier consent.thank God you cared to leave a letter for them.otherwise police will be searching for you"Trish
Madhu smiled.
"What I should do.i told them I want some freedom.but they keep on telling the groom's family may not likeit."Madhu
"But you shouldn't have done it on the day they came to meet you"Trish
"Hah..what is special in it.they decided it when we were small children and they occasionally came to meet me."Madhu
"But your would be dint meet you and not you saw him"Trish
"I remember him ..he was 8 years and I was 5 yrs"Madhu
"Oh that's nice.he maybbe looking the same now"Trish said sarcastically
"I don't care if he looks like a monkey or an angel"Madhu
"You will marry him even he look like a monkey?"Trish laughing
"Whatever I can do.my so called parents like me to marry a monkey.then it will be my fate and I don't want to change it"madhu
"He is in US right?"Trish
"Yeah..and my parents is so excited about it"Madhu
"But I think he is a boring personalty..he never contacted you till this date.he knew about this proposal.whpever in this century do like this"Trish
"Oh..he once talked with me when his mother insisted him to talk..do you know what we talk?"Madhu
'what?"Trish
Madhu mimicked the call
"Hello"madhu in manly voice
"Hi.."Madhu in her Voice
"How are you?"man
"Fine ?u?"Madhu
"I am good"man
Silence
"Ok bye"man cut the call
"Oh god..what the f**k"Trish
"Yeah that's him..I think that will be also cold like him"Madhu
"Your never wanted to see his photo?"Trish
"Oh god...no..I didn't think of it and I didn't ask anyone"madhu
the rain started to pour madhu jumped in ecstasy.
"Pagal"Trish ran to her room
Madhu happily danced and giggled.
"Come inside Madhu other wise you will get fever"Trish
"No..trish.come let's dance"Madhu
"Oh.. girl.no I am not crazy like you"Madhu

******

Ring..ring
"Pick up the call Trish"Madhu peeking out of the bathroom door.
"Yeah"trish
"Hello.are you madhubala?"man
"No I am her Friend trishna.who are you?"Trish
"Her would be husband"man
"Who is that Trish?"Madhu came out of bathroom drying her hair
"Your would be"Trish
"What?"Madhu
She took the phone and said"hello?"Madhu
She heard a laugh.
"Madhu..I scared you? Buddy..I am Mukund.i heard you are hibernating..you were expecting such a call?"muku
"Muku..I will kill you"Madhu
"But you can't do it through phone.if you want to kill me ...come with me for a movie tonight"mukund
"What?"Madhu
"Haven't you heard such a word m.o.v.i.e?"mukund
"Mukund I ..."Madhu
'dont deny...Han and bring your friend .. hotty with you"mukund
"So that's the plan.. ok if your love life get flourished by me..then I will"Madhu cut the call
"It's mukund..you Know myclassmate at Delhi .he is now working here.he want to hang out"Madhu
"Oh..what's the plan?"Trish
"First we go for shopping and then meet mukund ..then movie"Madhu
"Ok let's get ready"trish

*********

Mk mall

"Trish look at this top..is it good at me?"madhu
"Yeah..why don't you try it?"
Madhu went to the changing room .she saw two of them show the sign occupied and the third one was just closed but not locked.she pushed it open revealing s man in his vest and denim checking out himself in the mirror.madhu gasped.the man looked at her raising his eyebrows.
"I..I am sorry"she shut the door and ran to Trish
"What happened Madhu ?why you look worried?"Trish
"No.. it's ...I."Madhu stammered
"Hey girl"the man at the changing room.
Madhu turned back and look at him.he is now wearing a white button up shirt .trish looked at his Greek god face.her mouth wide open.
"Yes you.. don't you have any manners?"rk
"What?excuse me..."Madhu
"Yes you heard it right."man
"What the .."Madhu
"Don't"man
"What's it ?"Trish
"Well..your friend.. dosent have any manners.sjr barged into the changing room.shr wanted to check out me"man
"What.?I came there to check out you?I thought there is no one in yhat room"mdhu said furiously
"Can't you see..it was closed"man
"You should have to lock it..that's the manners"Madhu
"You Should have to knocked rather than checking me out"man
"Excuse me..what you think about yourself?Vivian dsena Han?"Madhu
"Yeah...most of the girls say it.ou too feel like that?"man
"Bullshit"Madhu
"That's a bad word"man
"Suits you"Madhu
"What'?"the man moved closer to her.
"Hey...hey guys just chill.i apologize on behalf of her.please don't make a scene everyone looking at us"trishna
"Can't you teach your Friend some manners . You are such a sweet girl and look with whom you hed a friendship.i suggest you to quit this friendship"man
"You..b..."Madhu
'Madhu behave"Trish
Madhu gritted her teeth and looked away.
"Jungli Billy"man
She glared at him.
"Oops..if look kills ..I will be dead by now.. Don't you feel it Trish?"man
"How you know my name?"Trish
Rk Smirked and went back to male section.
"Hey.. wait"Trish
Madhu grabbed her hand.
"Why you going to him.its clear that he put up this to get your attention"Madhu
"May be.if so I am lucky.he is dead drop gorgeous"Trish
"Whatever..let's go"Madhu
"You selected this?"Trish
"Yes.lets pay the bill"Madhu and trishna went to the bill counter.
They saw the man paying his bill.he Smirked seeing them.madhu glared and looked away
Trish went to him
"Btw ..how you know my name?"Trish
"I Know.."man
"How?"Trish
"None of your business"man
Trish went back to Madhu"arrogant jerk"Trish
"I told you"Madhu
They paid the bill and went out of the shop..
"Oops..it's raining"Madhu
"Yeah..call your friend"Trish
Madhu dialed mukund number"what? stuck in traffic..yeah..we will "Madhu cut the call.
"What's it?"Trish
"Mukund is stuck in traffic .he told us to meet him at the theatre.if he come here after clearing the traffic and pick us ..we will miss the movie..it's already 6:30"Madhu
"You show will start at 7.right?"Trish
"Yeah we will rent a cab"Madhu
They tried for a taxi.but none of them stopped.madhu looked at her watch.
"Trish we gonna miss it"Madhu
A car stopped near them.the window opened.trish leaned to take a look
"Want a lift?"man
"You..?"Madhu
"Yes"Trish
"Trish.."Madhu
"Just come Otherwise we will miss it"Trish
Madhu sighed and Opened the back door
"I am not your driver"man.
Trishna opened the passenger door and hopped in.he started the engine.
"Well..Trish..where I should drop?"rk
"Sk movie theater"Trish
"Oh.. really .I am also going there.nice."man
"Oh.."Trish
"Btw ..I am rk"rk
"I am trishna chowdary"Trish
"I know and jungli Billy ..you?"rk
Rk looked her through the rear view mirror.she looked away
Rk laughed"Your friend is always in angry mood?"rk
"Oh...no she is just upset with you"Trish laughed
"Oh..ok..so what is your name ?"rk
Madhu remained silent.
"I think is ashamed to tell her name.is her name that much ugly?"rk
Trishna laughed.madhu glared at her.
"I think my car will be in fire soon"rk
Trish Controlled her laughter.rk parked the car in the parking lot .they climbed out.madhu saw mukund and waved her hand .
"Your boy friend jungli Billy?"rk
"Don't call me that"Madhu
"Why not?I don't know your name..okay then I will suggest a name"rk leaned near her ears and whispered.
"What if it is madhubala?"rk
Madhu looked at him awestruck.he wincked and waved at her .he hopped in his car and started the engine .he wincked and gave her a flying kiss.he drove off
"But rk said that he is here to watch movie?"Trish
Madhu stood awestruck.trish jerked her from her stance.
"Madhu.."trish
"He knows me"Madhu
"What?"Trish
"Yeah he called me Madhubala"Madhu
"Who is he?he Knows about us"Trish
"Who is who?"mukund came near them
"We met him at mall and he dropped us here"Madhu
"May be some stalker..you should be careful trishna"mukund
"What about me Mukund?"Madhu holding her hand on her waist flaring her nose.
"You have nothing to worry Madhu.your stalker will flew when he see one of your jungli avathar"mukund
Trish and mukund laughed
"Haha.. very funny"Madhu

*******

Madhu and Trish reached Thier flat.madhu Opened the door and she found an envelope on the floor
"Trish here is a letter for you"Madhu
Trish took it and Opened .
"It's not for me.its for you"Trish
Madhu Opened the paper and saw a potrait of a girl in rain.she closely looked at it and find out it's her potrait.
"Madhu..it's beautiful..whoever drawn it is a great artist"Trish
"Yes..but it's ...the scene..I yesterday I drench in rain"Madhu
"Yes...look something is written at the back"Trish
Madhu turned the paper and saw"jungli Billy ..you look so .. tempting in rain"
"Oh..god..rk?"Trish
"Jerk"Madhu
"So he was stalking you"Trish"you are lucky Madhu"
"What?"Madhu
"Oops..I am sorry ..I forget about you are betrothed"Trish
Madhu went back to her room.she throw the paper in the night stand.
Her phone ring
"Hello.."man
"Yes.. madhubala here"Madhu
"Madhubala Aahaan"rk
"Who is that?"Madhu
"How is that potrait..like it?"rk
"R.. rk?"Madhu
"Oh..you remember me.i thought I should have to remind you.oh Yeah..it's quite natural.. Girls never forget my charm."rk
"Charm ..my.foot"Madhu
"Oh..it hurts baby"rk
"What do you want?"Madhu
"You"rk
"What?"Madhu
"Hmm..it's..I love.."rk
"What?"Madhu
"Let me complete..I love a girl and I need your help"rk
"What?who and why should I help?"Madhu
"She is your friend"rk
"My Friend ?who.. Trish?"Madhu
"Yes"rk
"Oh...why can't you tell it to her?"Madhu
"It's..I just fall in love few months back.i have been stalking her from that day.but I don't have courage to tell her.i really don't Know any of her choices like her hobbies .. favour colour "rk
"Oh..but y do you draw my potrait instead of her?"Madhu
"To make her jealous"rk
"Wow..that's the most dumbest idea ever"Madhu
"Sorry..I am not so experienced in this field.its my first love and may be my everlasting love"rk
"Okay..I will help you. But you will don't show your arrogance with me"Madhu
"Okay.but don't inform her about this.i want to prop her in my style,"rk
"Okay"Madhu
"So we will meet Tomorrow."rk
"Yes"Madhu
"Thank you.goodnight"rk
"Goodnight"Madhu



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dharsii thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratez for new story ka..
Nice start ka..
I thought, RK is madhu's fiance..
He tried to fall her for him..
He used Trishna name...
O/W Madhu doesn't help him..
How Rk is going to get her love?
waiting for known about that .
update soon ka.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharsii

Congratez for new story ka..
Nice start ka..
I thought, RK is madhu's fiance..
He tried to fall her for him..
He used Trishna name...
O/W Madhu doesn't help him..
How Rk is going to get her love?
waiting for known about that .
update soon ka.
Thanks for pm.

Thank you priya.will update soon.
Madhu promised to help him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Superb start loved it
I thought rk was madhu 's fiance
But he likes trish
But i think this is just an act of his
He is behind madhu only
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Congrats for new story

Superb start loved it
I thought rk was madhu 's fiance
But he likes trish
But i think this is just an act of his
He is behind madhu only

Thank you varsha.will update soon . about your guessing ..I can't answer it now.. please continue reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo for the new story!
And thanks for the PM!
Loved this part!
Is RK the person she is engaged to?
Is he stalking her to know more about her?
Love this Jungli Billi & Stalker combination!

Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Awesome update,
Madhu's marriage is fixed but till now she didn't seen the boy's face,
loved Rishbala's meet he knows Trishna's name and Madhu's name too,
loving the way he is calling Madhu as jungli billy,
Rk send a portrait to Madhu its hers drenching in rain,
Rk said to Madhu that he loves trishna and asked her to help him she agreed to it,
is he pretending all this to be close with Madhu and to know more about her
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

Congo for the new story!
And thanks for the PM!
Loved this part!
Is RK the person she is engaged to?
Is he stalking her to know more about her?
Love this Jungli Billi & Stalker combination!

Waiting for the next part.

Thank you.will update soon
magicalmirage thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats for new story,
Awesome update,
Madhu's marriage is fixed but till now she didn't seen the boy's face,
loved Rishbala's meet he knows Trishna's name and Madhu's name too,
loving the way he is calling Madhu as jungli billy,
Rk send a portrait to Madhu its hers drenching in rain,
Rk said to Madhu that he loves trishna and asked her to help him she agreed to it,
is he pretending all this to be close with Madhu and to know more about her
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thank you for reading and commenting.will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats on this new story chechi..
great start..
i think rk is madhu's fiance..
update next soon..
thanks for the pm..

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