Avneil ff: Jealousy. Part 2 updated Pg 3 (19/5)

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shikha

@shikhsk

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Brilliant dear . continue n pls post it soon

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Wow as every one mentioned I could literally imagine this scenario
Very well written do continue soon

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Oh man avni 😆

Thanks for update!

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Superb
Neil is so jealous that he isn't thinking straight
But I'm confused about avni's feelings for ali
Update soon

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Aww that was a great part
Jealous Neil is funny although I do feel for him
It's good to read about Avni being happy for a change.
Loving Ali-Avni bond. Beautiful, deep and pure friendship
Please update again soon

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Starfish03

@Starfish03

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Amazing work. The story line is commendable and truly realistic, the way you have written this is phenomenal, Great job👏 Please continue this ASAP i really want to know what will happen next.

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