Tasveer Banaata hun Mein 1 SHOT, Om & Gauri updtd on pg 33 19 June - Page 7

Originally posted by: --Zehnaseeb--

Ila KAli thakur ka monologue.. lolz.. he is best villain we got till date.. So what kand he is gonna do next.. ? waiting for it.. Omkar ki taqaat n kamzori dono pata chali usse..

Hehehee... Filhaal kaali Mumbai darsan Kar le... Usse pehle kayi cheezein explain krni hai

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Which part have you read I have written 3 part...

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

Oh I have written only the first part

Please index it on the first page so that people can reach out to the other parts

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

That song is so beautiful...are you going to write your next os based on father-daughter relationship...eargerly waiting for your update..thanks for the pm...

Lovely tzr... Can't wait for the next part... Thanks a ton for the pm

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Lovely tzr... Can't wait for the next part... Thanks a ton for the pm

Bachpan Mein Jhulaaya Jin Baahon Ne,

Duniya Se Milwaya Jin Baahon Ne...

Voh Haath Fir Se Chaahoon Mein, Voh

Saath Fir Se Chaahoon Mein...

Voh Papa... Sun Lo... Papa...

[Tej's Pov]

He was standing at the window and was in deep thoughts. Wrinkles on his head have been increased after spending half of his life in concentrating on business. Life is such a dreary when you want to be with your loved ones you don't have time to see what they have lost?? Jhanvi enters the room and saw Tej standing. She had already guessed what is bothering him? He was always like this. Doing whatever he wants and if the things don't go his ways he will make everything be his ways but sometimes in doing this you lose everything in Tej's case he really had lost the most precious thing his son Omkara whom he had loved a lot that he never let anyone hurt him but in these years he had hurted him beyond repair. The only thing that Jhanvi can do is console him. She came near him and asked," What happen Tej? Kya soch rhe ho ? " His voice was low as if he was tired of life. Tej said to Jhanvi," life mein pehli baar mujhe aisa lag rha hai ki mere ek decision ne meri family ko sirf nuksaan hi pahunchaaya hai... Kaash main apne past ko badal skta kaash uss waqt main jo kar rha tha voh sab nhi krta toh shayad aaj situation alag hoti." She was feeling sad seeing him but she can only share his worries," Tej I know pehle jo hua so hua maanti hun tum galat the par gltiyan sab se hoti hai. Or aaj ki situation ko apni gltiyon ka nateeza maanana yeh toh sahi nhi hai yeh situation or voh situation alag hai..." Tez," Nhi Jhanvi! Galti meri hi hai Agar mein business mein itna nhi khoya hota... Naa mein Svetlana ke jaal mein fasta aur naa hi main Omkara ke hurt ki vajah bnta. Jaanti ho Jhanvi Jab Omkara was born I was so happy that I wanted to give whole sky to him. I had promised that whatever he want I The Tej Singh Oberoi will give him everything but see what I have given only hurt and sadness... Duniya mein shayad mein hi ek aisa father hounga jo Apne hi bete ki life ka dushman ban bhaita ho." He was having tears in his eyes. Jhanvi interrupted him,"Tej..." Tej,"Nhi Jhanvi aaj mat roko mujhe aaj keh jaane do muje jo mein feel krta hun vrna jee nhi paunga iss bhoj k tale... Yaad hai jhanvi Omkara jab school se rote huye aaya tha aur maine jab pucha toh usne btaya ki uske teacher ne usse maara" She was having tears,"Kaise bhool skti hun Tej voh din Omkara was crying hell maana galti hoti but itni buri trh ki nishaan chap jaana... Aur fir tumne uss Teacher ko iss school se toh kya fir kisi school mein use naukri dene se rok diya tha... fir in the end jab usne tumse pair pkdke maafi maangi thi toh b tumne itna hi kaha tha ki iss shehar mein toh tumhe koi naukari dene se rha kisi aur shehar mein dhundh lo..." Tej,"Aisa krta b na kyu aakhir he was the one who had given the immense love aakhir father hone ki feeling usi ne kraayi thi sabse pehle mujhe... Kaise dekh leta uske sharir pe nishaan... Kaash uss waqt main paison ka itna fitoor nhi chada hota toh omkara aaj aisa nhi hota he would have moved on easily. Mitti se khelna maine hi sikhaya tha... Poultry museum main hi leke gya tha shayad nhi jaanta tha ki vohi uska passion ban jaayega... Fir humaare jghde humaari duriyaan and Omkara ka effect hona... Shayad ek decision life mein sahi liya tha humne... After buama shifted we also shifted to India where Omkara met Shivaay... Shuruat mein toh Omkara was reluctant bas todha time toh usse shuru se lgta tha... par Shivaay ne usse jaise smbhaala shayad meri kami bhi puri ki aaj bhi regret krta hun main jo mujhe krna chaahiye tha voh shivaay ne kiya Omkara hi nhi balki humaare teeno bchon k liye... Jhanvi kya aisa nhi ho skta ki Omkara fir apne dad se khulke baat kare jaise voh Shivaay se krta hai... Uski voh pehle vaali Om Ki jhalak pane k liye taras gya hun main..." She was feeling bad and don't know what to say She too knew Omkara will not be able to go back in time the wounds are too deep. She just consoled him,"Don't Worry Tej everything will be fine... haan todha waqt laga tumhe sab smjhne mein par tumhe smjh aa gya naa Omkara ko todha waqt de do fir dekhna Voh tumhre saath sab share krna shuru kar dega... Aakhir tum hi toh the jo Svetlana k real face ko saamne laaye the... humne toh kabhi socha hi nhi tha ki tum yeh sab plan kar rhe ho... Kbhi kbhi toh khud pe gussa aata hai kaash apne pyaar pe nhi but Tumhra Omkara ke prati jo pyaar hai uspe yakeen kar leti toh shayad tumhe truth dhundhne mein itna time nhi lgta..." Tej interrupted,"Nahi Jhanvi tumhri glti nhi thi I never wanted you to get involved I got the clue when I saw the photo of real Svetlana from then I was started finding clues and I was always close I had known if Svetlana came to know that I am doing this she would have done everything to stop me so I pretended to be cruel and hurted you I am sorry... "Jhanvi,"It's Ok now everything is on track haan todha aur time chaahiye sab kuch normal hone mein but ho rha hai naa... " Tez was first time worried for his child,"Apni chinta nhi hai mujhe... Mujhe fikar hai toh Omkara ki... Gauri ki sachaayi hum sab jaante the... Naa chaahte huye bhi I had accepted her because I knew Omkara's happiness lies in her. Ik baar usse uske Art se dur krke galti kar chukka hun dubaara nhi krna chaahta tha... Par Gauri ka yeh sach naa jaane mere bete pe kya asar karega aur ab toh aur dar lag rha hai jabki voh usse pyaar krne lga hai... Kahin fir se voh uss andheri kaali jagah naa chala jaaye jahan se usse Shivaay ne badi mushkil se nikala tha..." Jhanvi," Tej Aisa kuch nhi hoga... Tumne yeh dekha Omkara ne pyaar ka izhaar kiya fir usse jaane ko kaha tum yeh nhi dekh paa rhe ho ki Omkara ka reaction pehle se kitna alag hai... Jis insaan ko jhuth se itni nafrat hai ki usne riddhima ko ghr se bahar tak nikaal diya voh b isiliye ki she was helping you... Par usne gauri ka jhuth sunke yaa sach chupane ke baad bhi usse Oberoi Mansion aane ko kaha voh agar Gauri se dur hona chaahta toh usse vahin se keh deta ki chali jao par nhi... He just needs time for gathering himself... Usse time chaahiye yeh smjhne mein kuch jhuth logon k bhalaayi k liye b bole jaate hain... Har baar sach saath nhi deta humein jhuth ka sahaara lena padta hi hai... Omkara ki kamzori hi yhi hai voh jhuth nhi bol paata aur naa hi sehan kar paata... yahi cheez Gauri usse smjhaayegi... " Tej was astonished to listen and got calm," I hope so jhanvi jo tum keh rhi ho voh sach ho... aur kal ki subah Omkara ka gussa shaant ho jaaye... I wish voh din kab aayega jab voh muje Dad bolega ... par ek achi baat huyi kam se kam ab voh mujhe Mr. Oberoi toh nhi kehta... Gauri k aane se Omkara mein positive sign jyada dikhte hain... I am glad I didn't protested right" Jhanvi smiled," Don't worry Tej Ab Voh din dur nhi jab tum khud Omkara k muh se dad sunoge..."

After such a rollercoaster ride Tej was relieved from the pent up emotion he was having from quite a long time... Jhanvi hugged him and soothed his heart and made him believe there will be a time when the equation between father and son will change.

**********The End**********

Ila, you don't know how much happy you made me by writing this OS. I have always wanted a scene like this. Tej's guilt is something which I hope (against all the hopes) to see in the serial. Thanks to you that this wish of mine got fulfilled.