Tumse milke mila main khud se # 4 Teaser on pg 130 on 14/6 - Page 29

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Hello friends back with a new update .This update is especially for two of my lovely buddies ,"akshu aka agm1998 "as she turned dazzler and " Nasrin aka threeta who turned Goldie today .
Congrats sweety for changing color ,enjoy the new color .




Part 26

Ishra were talking anything and everything cuddling into each other when they heard knock at the door , ishita got up composed herself and went to open the door . She saw it was her friend shruti was standing there ,she greeted her and called her inside. At first shruti congratulated ishita and then they started talking about the rooms renovation. Raman was back to his work of reading his fat book putting glasses on his eyes ,shruti saw him ,ishita introduced them and spoke " Raman I m going to renovate this room according to me as you are not suggesting anything ".

Ramsn got up from his place and spoke" its alright ,you people continue your work I m in my study ".

Ishita nodded and he went ,the moment he left her friend spoke " yaar Ishita he is too handsome but st the sane time he is looking too rude ,kaise pataya ".

I- don't eye on him ,he is mine and he us not rude but too sweet .he loves me a lot and can do anything for me .

S- sachchi .

I- aur nahi to kya .

S- kaise pataya yaar ,he is so rich and handsome ,I wish mujhe bhi aise hi kisi bade ghar ka job mile so that I can also trap a handsome guy like him .

I- shut up ,I didn't trapped him ,we actually love each other .now don't talk much ,concentrate on your work ,I have to go and buy my lahenga also .

S- achcha baba doing .

Saying so shruti started working while ishita was instructing her .After telling all her choices and changes which has to be done in the room she went to raman .He was still busy in reading the book ,she went to him and settled in his lap ,he smiled fully while she removed his glasses and pecked on his cheeks and spoke " I'm done with my work ,now I m going .

He pulled her more towards him and asked " all your work is done ".

I- humm I instructed shruti ,now she will do everything accordingly.

R- how she can do everything ,I think you should be there with her ,what if she did some mistake or didn't do according to you .

I- (nuzzling into his chest)- nothing like that ,I had instructed her well .

R-(stopping her)- if you will do like this ,then I will not be able to control myself ,then don't blame me .

I- I so want you to have me but you have to wait just for four days .

R- now you are behaving despo .

I- I m always desperate for you ,don't know why but I always wanted you .

R- achcha ,always means from when .

I- the day I met you the day you kissed me first ,the day we slept together for the very first time ,I was in your arms,I just fitted in them and it seems that I m meant to be in them only .

R- that's nice .

Ishita straighten herself and then pressed her lips on his ,he was Lil surprised with her sudden act but took the charge without thinking again ,both kissed each other hungrily as if there is no tomorrow relishing all their flavours and parted to catch some breath ,after taking some air they started kissing again as if compensating for the next three days when they will be away till their marriage. After kissing each other hungrily Ishita spoke " Raman I want to talk to you something very important ".

R- humm tell .

I-Raman I think you should talk to papa about all the happenings .

R- what happenings .

I- raman I m talking about the happenings of that day when your parents had fight and your mother went away .we need to know the actual happenigsof the day to investigate the case.

R(surprised)- ishita are you out if your mind ,do you actually think that I will talk to him .

I- yeah I think you should ,for once only .

R- never ,you are wring this time ,I will never go to talk to him.

I- I would have talked to him but it will not look good ,Simmi se kahti but may be papa would not be comfortable with it so you are the best option ,I think papa will talk to you openly .

R- that can only happen when I will agree and you very well I m not going to do anything like that.

I- please Raman.

R- ishita tomm is our engagement, I think you should concentrate on that .

I- please raman it's very important for us to know what exactly had happened.

R(angrily)- ishita I think you didn't listened me .

I- I listened you very nicely but you are not responding me .Raman you are not understanding my point .

R- me not but you must understand that if I m not responding that means I don't want to .

i- but I want you to go...

R- ishita I repeat ,tomm is our engagement and our marriage is on forth day ,concentrate on that .

I- Raman I know that i have to concentrate on that but this is also very necessary, what if after this you come to know that your father is innocent.

R(angrily)- seems you are more bothered about him ,god damn it you are getting married to me not him.

Ishita was stunned listening to this ,her eyes become teary listening to him ,while he turned his face to other side ruffling his hairs in frustration.

Ishita stood rooted to her place for sometimes,then walked to him ,she stood in front of him and asked " I know I m getting married to you but seems you cannot see or think anything anything rationally .I do remember that I m getting married to you but when a girl get married na then she don't get married just to a person but to a whole house ,she not only has to look after her husband but she has to take care of her whole family and every member .I thought I can be bridge between you two but seems you cannot see or listen anything as you have closed your organs in anger and hatred.

Saying so she took her belongings and went from there ,Raman so wanted to stop her but he was too disturb to react ,he can only witness her retreating figure while she vanished in some moment .He threw the things which were kept in the table in frustration and greeted his teeth in frustration,when he listened " now why are you regretting your words ".

He wondered around and found non when he realised that its his own inner voice who was cheeding him for his bitter words .He ruffled his hairs and spoke " she wanted me to do work as per her will ."

Raman's heart - then what's wrong in it she is doing so much for you .

Raman's mind - I hate him .

RH- think for once ,if she is right ,what if he is innocent.

RM- how can it be possible .

RH- till now you don't know the truth .

RM- I lost my mother .

RH- he too lost his wife .

RM- then what should I do .

RH- go and talk to him .

RM- I should go .

RH - humm that's the only way ,you can woo her .

After having the battle between his heart and mind he finally walked to his fathers room with slow steps . He was very hesitant to enter in that room ,he hasn't went to its direction from last four years .His eyes become teary ,he felt shivers in his vains recalling the memories of his childhood ,the sweet voice of his mother jingled in his mind as if she is calling him ,he felt as if his legs were giving up and he couldn't walk anymore ,he supported himself holding the walls and any how reached the room .He was standing on door ,feeling reluctant to enter the room ,while he saw his father was in a call ,holding his beer in his hand .Till he complete the call ,Raman was standing on the door .Mr bhalla ended the call and turned to fill his glass again when he felt someone's gaze from the door ,his eyes traveled towards the direction and he was shocked to see Raman standing in front of his room .His eyes got teary and he too felt same emotions which raman felt .Mr bhalla walked to him and asked " Raman puttar you here ,kuch chahiye tha tujhe ,come inside ."

He spoke this but he don't have that much courage to hold his hand and bring him inside.Raman stepped inside the room and scanned it fully ,he noticed that room has not yet changed , everything is like that only as his mother has arranged ,he was looking to the big photo of their family ,all were smiling and hugging each other when he heard Mr bhalla " sab kuch waisa hi hai jaisa teri ma ne sajaaya tha ".

He turned to look at him and saw Mr bhalla's eyes were moist ,so as his . Before he can speak or say anything Mr bhalla folded his hands in front of raman and spoke crying " it was not my fault puttar ,I hadn't done anything wrong but she didn't trusted me so as you ".

Raman couldn't control himself and hugged his father tight both burst into tears and poured their pain which they had hided in themselves for last four years .

Thats all for now friends ,hope you like this .Enjoy reading and do comment .

PS - 200+ likes and long comments for next early update .
Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome. Lovely romantic and emotional also. Loved ishra moment. Ishita told him to talk to his father but he is no where ready. Ishita tried her best but he didn't listen and angrily burst out on her. Later realized she is right and went to talk to mr Bhalla. Both hugged each other after so many years crying. Waiting for their conversation. Update soon
Edited by Kadianvi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks a lot for this update dii
And thanks for the dedication too
Ishra's r totally adorable
But Raman looses his temper so quickly
He is gonna have a hard time manofying madrasan now
Finally he and his father kind of patched up
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updated new part ,have a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing wonderful awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous incredible super se bhi uper brilliantly written beautiful I liked the story very much plzzz update soon next part waiting for the next update. update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Osm update..just loved every line and good to see raman & mr bhalla's patch up
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome...
Lovely update...
Ishita wanted raman to speak with papa..
But raman was not ready & in anger hw scolded her..
Poor girl wanted raman to be be happy but endee up hurtingg her...
Finally raman went to papa to spek..
Finally hope the prob get solved...update sooon di...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update...
Ishita want raman to talk to his father to clear the misunderstanding between...she could feel his father is innocent. Raman get angry knowing what ishita want him to do. He could not accept what ishita said bzcos he feel that his father is responsible for toshiji death. Ishita want raman to know the truth before blaming him. Raman could not stand ishita support toward his father & he burst out by hurting her with his word. Ishita get shock & teary hear what raman said...as a member in the family she need to take care of everyone & this is reason ishita want raman talk to his father. Finally raman reliase what he has done by hurting ishita. Raman determind to talk to his father...both father son get emotional...thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
finally he put his ego aside n went to his father
waiting to find out the truth
hope they(dad-son) going to start fresh
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hayee I loved this part
Awesome update waiting for next part Update soonish plzz waiting for it eagerly
Too good update
I wish everything will get fine between father son duo
Continue soonish plzzz plzzz plzzz waiting for it eagerly

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