Musings Of A Restless Soul - Shivaay's Contemplation

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pal81

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jalarani
How beautiful romance is, even in the absence of one of the lover...wow...beautiful i loved how her presence in the form of her writing lifted up his mood..Thank you so much for PM and thank you so much for writing.

Yes we had such pure fun romance back then dint we .. and Shivaay was always more aware of Anika than she was of him. The sensing of her coming near him, the need to touch her , the need to listen to her mumbling diatribes.. he was affected way more than she was then. 😊

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pal81

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_
This is so, so very beautifully written ❤️
I have already read it twice, it's that beautiful. Pallavi girl, u rock! 👏

Loved the contents of Annika's diary. So like her to jot down the small small stuff - gende ke jagah kele🤣 Loved how you added details that are so characteristic of her. The post-its, and Annika keeping tabs on her employer's favorite stuff and h ow Shivaay reacted to all these - so beautifully portrayed.

Just loved it. Do write more!

Aww Archie thank you 😳 That means a lot Actually im missing the old IB and the reason why i had started watching IB was Anika. I fell in love with her fiest , the world can go to hell kinda character. I mean lets face it Shivaay as a character is not new . In fact every romantic drama has a Shivaay like character now. But Anika was a breath of fresh air that i miss now. And i loved her devil may care attitude that hid her caring side underneath. And yes she did care for him unknowingly..the helicopter crash epi depicted that beautifully. He just wasnt aware that she cared. I wanted him to find out so j wrote this. Im so glad you liked it 😊

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pal81

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
This was awesome! 😳
Kinda overwhelming. I could feel the emotions. Missing the old days of the show when everything was so new for them 😳
Anika's diary was fab and SO her 😆 Her personality, nature, soul is everywhere 🤣 Loving the notes, Shivaay's reactions to everything, the way he avoids that place in her presence, but he could feel her soul even when she's not there...
Loving the Chakor name too 🤣
Keep writing dear!

Thank you Aishuuu.. yes new romance is the best isnt it 😉 the journey of discovery is beautiful. Im glad u liked it as you put into words what i wanted to convey. He feels her presence evn in her absence 😊

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Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Aww.. so well written..👏
Shivay bhi na.. Even if i want to hate him.. The next day he does something that force me to fall in love once again.. 😆 typical male lead/hero.. 😆 lovely yaara..!

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ankita_t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

It was a beautiful piece of work, just got a small smile on my face. So , thanks a lot!!!

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Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Beautiful and lovely os..

I was missing old ishqbaaz too😊

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varala

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Written beautifully 👏⭐️

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Blondiexzy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Beautiful OS I can imagine Billu facial expression when reading Anika notes😆

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nikki.171

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

This has spruced up my mood too - just like Billuji 😆 Loveddd reading i, especially Anika's quirky comments. You should definitely write more of these.

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