Shivika OS- His Twin Sister (19/02/2017) - Page 4

And I loved it Again!
U know what... I dont have enough words to praise your talent... I have to search wrds for ur wrks...specially! I am so srry dear... was busy yesterday.. so couldn't comment.. srry abt that.

The starting of the shot was quite sad... Anika all crying and distraught...and Shivaay running to see if Priyanka is ok...
When I read that Prinku is ok...my doubts were cleared that Anika had done something crazy.. and this is gonna turn into something really funny.

Everyone came running hearing Shivaay's voice...and there's where they got to know about the lost twin sister of Shivaay!😭

The expressions u give to every character and the monologues are the best thing I love in your stories. They r so hilarious.😆😆

Then she enters with the album nd shows it to Shivaay... Nd he shuts it so loud that it echoed through the whole mansion. That was enough for me to start laughing..thinking about the upcoming fun.
They all have a look at the pic and laugh out loud..
And Anika still in confusion and pain...thinking that there was something in the air...😆
Finally her doubts are cleared by jhanvi.. that it was Shivaay himself!😆
The flashback was cute... And imagining Shivaay like that...i was awwing..😳
And then Anika adoring his pic and complimenting him that he looked like 'baby girl'..nd that was enough to make him go all the more red and the rest to roll on the floor with their uncontrollable laughter. Nd I too was laughing along with them.

Then his SSO mode on. I never expected him to throw her in the waters. But that was nice.
And Anika's answer made me grin like an idiot... their daughter...awww that was such a damn cute ending ... nd the peck nd Shivaay's smile made it even more cute.😳😳

Please can I borrow that little brain of yours... it has so much beautiful and innovative ideas... u make ShivIka all the more beautiful with these light and funny moments.
Superb! Awesome! Brilliant!!👏👏
Keep writing...

Loads of love and hugs...❤️🤗🤗
Sharmi

awsm dear, i lovd it buddy if possible nd u dnt mind then plz part bhi is os ko hona chahiye

Amazing OS.
Loved it to the core.
Such beautiful moments make a family and I'm glad u wrote something like this.

This was brilliant and epic!!!

I remember coming across this OS some time back and had ROFL and cried while reading it.

that was too hilarious
I couldn't stop laughing while reading😛👏