Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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jess_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

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swara has fallen for sanskar..<3

and fallen so so hard.. this is wonderful..

im wondering what will happens once she finds out about sanskar's feelings for her..<3

great going nita.. waiting for the next part..:-)

love

Jessica..:-D

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Oh, I love you so much for this, I know you said that you would have Swara falling for him, first, but reading it is good.

I will be back for a detailed comment, I do not want to use that word (I have so many, I keep the pms unread as a way to track the posts I have to unres and I have around 45 of them🤢) will get around to it.

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Nyna

Unres for 9

Okay - Laskh is a #$%#@% - feel free to fill it in, IF might not allow my thoughts.

And yes, Swara falls for Sanskaar and Laksh is angry, not for what he has done, not for losing the girl but for the girl falling for his brother. GOD - what a sibling rivalry and what an insecurity complex. And yes he also is once confused person, just because Swara told him she loved him first, he believes he can win her over again. Absolutely delusional.

Even in her POV - he comes across a slug, one of those creepy slimy things. Why did she not simply dump the breakfast on his head. And so what if Sanskaar is engaged, she could still love him over the excuse of a man that Laksh is. He is..

and I stop, I have ranted enough about him. But still one good thing, she realised she loves Sanskaar and he also seems to be realising the same.

love,

Nyna

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Res. N I intend to unres this on time. 😊

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Laksh will be always a idiot

Lovely update

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Nita doll...

Amazing update...

First i was worried with laksh entry and now im scared...why the hell he want swara now...???he left her and lost his chances..now he should backoff..but his advances is scaring me.what is he planning???

..one best thing happened that swara realised she love sanky...but laksh started planting doubts in her mind.regarding sanky...how much i hate that man...ahhh...hoping swasan confess their love soon...so no laksh can seperate them..ever...

Waiting for next baby...muahhh for this..love u

Talia

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: jess_27
swara has fallen for sanskar..<3
and fallen so so hard.. this is wonderful..
im wondering what will happens once she finds out about sanskar's feelings for her..<3
great going nita.. waiting for the next part..:-)
love
Jessica..:-D

Thanks jess dearest. Really happy to know you liked the update.. Swara has fallen hard indeed.. Soon sanskar will fall and we can have an love story.. You will get to know them soon.. Will update the next part tonight

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Oh, I love you so much for this, I know you said that you would have Swara falling for him, first, but reading it is good.
I will be back for a detailed comment, I do not want to use that word (I have so many, I keep the pms unread as a way to track the posts I have to unres and I have around 45 of them🤢) will get around to it.

love,
Nyna

Well sanskar won't be far behind.. He is just one few seconds late.. Don't worry about res and all.. This tale is wrapping up soon enough.. I had planned lot on it but apparently I find the way it turned out much better.. Bit faster paced then I wanted.. But it better or so I hope.. Finished the next update already.. Will post by tonight and four more updates later we can wrap it up.. I am just glad I could finish it up.. So yeah I am babbling.. Now I will stop..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Laksh will be always a idiot
Lovely update

Thanks dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update.. And yeah Laksh is an idiot indeed

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nita doll...
Amazing update...
First i was worried with laksh entry and now im scared...why the hell he want swara now...???he left her and lost his chances..now he should backoff..but his advances is scaring me.what is he planning???
..one best thing happened that swara realised she love sanky...but laksh started planting doubts in her mind.regarding sanky...how much i hate that man...ahhh...hoping swasan confess their love soon...so no laksh can seperate them..ever...

Waiting for next baby...muahhh for this..love u
Talia

Don't worry about Laksh dear.. He is an idiot and way worse villian but he won't do much damage.. So you can relax. Will update tonight and you can find how his plan work out..

Thanks dear for the lovely support.. You are awesome friend..

Love

Nita

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