OURS IS DIFFERENT (SEASON-2) Ch 22-25 on pg 25 - Page 10

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Its been a long time since i updated so here is a RECAP:
Kabir comes to know that Viraj and Kaira always knew that Nisha was in London. viraj tells him that he couldn't tell because Nisha has given them her kasam. Viraj shares some idea with Kabir (not known yet). Nisha and Kabir become friends. Aage Dekhiye!😆😉
Chapter-8
Dance Pe Chance Maar Le

Finally they went to the rehearsal hall. Nisha went and stood by the students. She wouldn't really stand there supervising, would she?!

Ka- So, Hi guys! I know almost all of you by names and even by your shooting talents but now I want to see what you all have in the name of dance. What say we have a warm up?

Everyone was confused except Kabir's crew. Kabir understood. He was about to explain when Priyal interrupted.

Pr- May I sir?

Kabir smiled and nodded.

Pr- Friends, actually warm up is nothing but showing off your dance steps. There will be music played for you and you have to dance on it. But the music will be random and not by your choice or someone else's. You can do whatever you know. We can only cheer up but no laughing on anyone or commenting. Good sir?

Kabir nodded.

Ka- Shall we? (everyone nodded)

He played random latest English and Hindi songs for respective people and observed their dancing styles. Everyone had their chance. Even Austin and Kj were made to dance. Everyone pleaded Kabir to dance. They did not ask Nisha as It was like putting your entire face in the mouth of a lioness. Kabir reluctantly said yes after a lot of insistence.

Ka- okay! I will! (everyone hooted) But on one condition!

He looked at Nisha. Nisha, who was enjoying till now, was getting afraid because she could understand very well that he was upto something.

Ka- Nisha will have to dance with me.

Everyone started pleading Nisha to dance but Nisha denied. She could never dance anything except Baraati. Nisha looked at Kabir angrily but Kabir in return smirked back. Nisha had to agree.

Kabir played the song UDI UDI JAAYE from the movie Raees. Nisha was literally jumping from inside because she was saved from the biggest BEIZZATI' of her life. After all kaun chahega apne students ke saamne beizzati karwana!

Wait! How was she saved? Let me tell you. Only some people including Nisha's family and Kabir's knew that Nisha was very well versed with the gujrati garba steps and she loved them. (GOING TO ANERI MAM's side)

Nisha and Kabir danced together on this. By the end of the song others also joined and they had a fun session. After that Kabir gave them a small 15 minutes break. Everyone took some corners and grabbed their water bottles. Nisha and Kabir sat together (but obvious!)

Ni- (looked towards) him) Kabir, tujhe yaad tha?

Ka- (looked back at her) Jo log dil ke paas hote hain na Nisha unki baatein chahkar bhi nahi bhool sakte hain aur naahi unki galtiyan.

They had a deep eyelock as if they were trying to ask the questions that disturbed them or saying the unsaid words. After a long eyelock of around 30 minutes, they broke apart.

Kitni baatein yaad aati hai

Tasveerein si ban jaati hain

Main kaise inhein bhooloon

Dil ko kya samjhaun

Kitni baatein kehne ki hai

Honton par jo sehmi si hai

Ek roz inhein sun lo

Kyun aise gum-sum ho

Kyun poori ho na paayi daastaan

Kaise aayi hai aisi dooriyaan

Ka- (trying to change the topic) Vaise abhi bbhi Gujrati ben hain andar se? any special reason? (in a teasing tone)

Ni- Not any from my side. What about you? Tera bhi garba kaafi accha ho gaya hai? (in a teasing tone)

Ka- Mera toh kaaran hai!

Nisha was shocked to hear this. She thought the answer would be no. she thought that he still loved her somewhere.

Ni- (monologue) Woh mujhe kyun pyaar karega? Aur main kyun soch rahi hoon iss baare mein! Nisha its over! Everything!

The break got over. Everyone stood up from their places and took their positions.

Ka- I think we should group ourselves according to our dance styles. The best of my volunteers will help you if you have any doubt. We will be having 3 group namely Hip-Hop, Indian semi Classical and Contemporary. I will teach steps to each group personally but being a perfectionist needs practice so you will get your practice by these volunteers. Let's begin! I will put you in different groups.

He put everyone in different groups. Nisha chose herself and went to the contemporary group. (idiot girl! Thought it would be easy!)

Kabir smirked cause he knew that it was almost impossible for Nisha to do contemporary. She was never patient enough. He made Hardik (Hip-Hop), Priyal (Semi-Classical) and Vardan (Contemporary) the volunteers. He started with Hip-hop, taught them some steps and then went to the next group. Soon he reached the contemporary group. He just taught them steps without songs. The steps were slow and about balancing. Kabir looked at Nisha and laughed inside.

Ka- (monologue) Yeh aaj tapkegi!

God- Toh tu jaake bechaari ki madad kar de!

Ka- Aap har baar mere monologue mein kyun ghuss jaate ho? Mujhe thoda enjoy karne do. Good bye!

He was enjoying Nisha trying her best to do the steps. In the step she had to hold her leg to 90 degree while standing with her one hand only and that too on the side. She was about to fall when Kabir went to her and held her by her leg and hand. He helped her take the position whiel they were deep lost in each other's eyes.

Dono ke dilon mein chhupa hai

Jo Ek anjaana sa gham

Kya ho paayega woh kam

Koyi kya kahe

She was about to fall when Kabir went to her and held her by her leg and hand. He helped her take the position whiel they were deep lost in each other's eyes.

Dono ne kabhi zindagi ke

Ek mod pe bhi jo paayi

Hai kaisi woh tanhaai

Koyi kya kahe

They were still lost in each other. Kabir slowly left her in the position of the dance step without her knowing. Now she was doing it on her own. He smiled. Nisha couldn't understand. Then she heard claps. She saw herself and smiled. She was the first one in the group who could take the stance. She looked at Kabir and thanked him through her eyes. She did the next step taught.

Soon the time got over. Nisha was already tired. Kj was with Austin all this time. She was leaving for her room when Kabir called her from behind. They were left alone in the rehearsal hall. Nisha turned towards him.

Ka- Nisha woh mera Kairaj se milne ka mann ho raha tha, if you don't mind? (he scratched the back)

Nisha smiled at his cuteness.

Ni- Kabir, you are Kj's uncle and you don't need to ask me if you can meet him. I am just his protector here but I don't need to protect him from his uncle. Chalo! I am also going to meet him.

Nisha and Kabir went to Nisha's room where Kj was. As they entered they saw Kj sleeping. He was looking real cute. They looked at each other and smiled as they were both admiring Kj together.

Nisha went to Kj on the bed and huffed his hair. Kabir also went and sat on the other side.

Ni- (admiring Kj) Kitna cute lag raha hai na?

Ka- Haan! (also admiring Kj)

Ni- I just don't know how can someone look so damn cute when he is sleeping!

Ka- (astonished) Oh My Mata! Tu kabse itni saari English bolne lagi woh bhi ek saath aur woh bhi without grammatical errors?!

Ni- (annoyed) Oh hello! Main English mein topper rahi hoon hamesha! And moreover London mein kuch hi hote hain jo tumse Hindi mein baat karenge.

Ka- But I am really surprised. Waise ab toh teri Hindi totally kharaab ho gayi hogi!

Ni- Mr. Kumar, Meri Hindi bhi acchi aur English bhi. Woh toh aap hain jo Hinglish mein baat karte hain. Na Hindi aati hai aur na English.

Ka- (annoyed) Juice me! Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Ni- (challenging tone) Accha toh theek I challenge you, kal ka poora din you are going to talk in proper English in front of me.

Ka- Madam taali ek haath se nahi bajti. (challenging back) I will do it if you are going to do the same with Hindi and remember no grammatical error.

Ni- Okay! But tu bhi koi bhi word nahi use kar sakta. You have to been on 6th grade level to the least. 1st grade ki English toh Kj ko bhi aati hai.

Ka- He is not in 1st grade.

Ni- Kj ka IQ level bahut zyada hai because he stays with me all the time. (attitude)

Ka- (murmurs) Isiliye usse Hindi acchi tarah nahi aati.

Ni- What did you just speak?

Ka- Nothing! But remember you can't even talk to Austin in English.

Ni- That is not done Kabir. You know he knows only English.

Ka- (Attitude) IDK!

Ni- Okay then tu bhi Aashita aur uske group se English mein hi baat karega.

Ka- Nisha, this is not done.

Ni- (attitude) IDK!

Ka- Okay! We are going to talk to each other in the languages given as a challenge.

Nisha smiled at her victory.

Ka- Par agar tu haari toh?

Ni- Then what?

Ka- Toh tujhe sabke saamne mujhe...

Nisha was confused at the way Kabir was speaking.

Ka- Sabke saamne mujhe sorry bolna hoga aur bolna hoga ki teri Hindi bahut kharaab hai.

Ni- It goes vice versa then.

Ka- Deal!

Ni- Deal!

Nisha started waking up Kj.

Ka- Usse kyun utha rahi hai?

Ni- He hadn't had his dinner. I should wake him up and take him down.

Ka- wait!

He picked Kj up in his arms and Kj hugged him.

Ka- Chal! Niche jaakar utha denge.

Nisha smiled at his idea. They went down and had their dinner. Later Kabir put Kj back on the bed.

Kj- Mamu, tell me a story na like you did earlier.

Kabir sat beside him and Nisha on the other side. Kabir started telling him a story. Nisha also heard it very carefully. Soon Kj slept. Kabir looked at him and smiled but his smile grew wider when he saw the next scene. Nisha was also asleep. Kabir put a blanket on Kj and Nisha both.

Ka- Tu pooch rahi thi na Nisha ki koi itna cute kaise lag sakta hai. Look at yourself sleeping. (giggled)

Nisha's mouth was open and one hand under Kj and the other outside the range of the bed. He kept Nisha's hand properly and got the other one out. He closed her mouth but she opened it again.

Ka- yeh nahi sudhregi.

He was admiring both of them.

God- (singing) Kaho na pyar hai!

Ka- (monologue) Aap fir shuru ho gaye! Jao jaakar kisi gareeb ka pet bharo.

God- Jo kaam nahi karte main unka pet nahi bharta! I live on my own principles.

Ka- Jaao so jao mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Goodnight!

Kabir went to his room and slept ready for the next day challenge.

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Chapter-9

NEXT ROUND

Nisha woke up and got ready. She and Kj went downstairs where the children were already there. There she saw Kabir who smirked at her and she got remembered of the previous day challenge.

Ni- So everyone ready for part 2?

Everyone- YES MA'AM!

Someone- NO ma'am!

They heard that voice and turned back. She saw Viraj and Kaira standing there giggling at them. Even before Kj could she ran and hugged them. Everyone was surprised by seeing this. Kj came from the back with a frown on his face.

Ni- (to Kj) What happened?

Kj- That was my right. I was supposed to hug them first.

Nisha bent to his height.

Ni- Mr. Kairaj Singh Rathore, let me tell you even before you were born I was already like their kid that is why they can handle you all day. So I have the first right.

Kj- (fighting) They are my parents.

Ni- But they are my friends first.

Kj- (annoyed) Papa! Mamma!

Here Kaira, Viraj and the whole team was enjoying it, especially Kabir. He could not really control his laughter. Nisha stood upto to her level.

Ni- Aint I correct, Viraj?

Kj- Mom tell her she is wrong.

Kaira- Actually you both are correct.

They were both confused.

Vi- Because you (looking at Nisha) were treated by us like a kid after my wedding but you (at Kj) were actually out first kid. So both of you have this right.

Nisha smiled and this time Kj and Nisha both hugged them together while Kj and Nisha were still giving each other those looks. Everyone was already giggling at their cuteness. Viraj took Kj in his arms.

Ni- But Viraj how come you are here? Weren't you supposed to be in India for your vacation?

Vi- Yes Nisha we were supposed to...

He looked at Kaira as if asking her to complete it.

Kaira- But then we felt that Kairaj might be troubling you and since you were practicing for a competition we didn't want to disturb you a lot.

To this Kj and Nisha both frowned.

Ni-Viraj, how could you ever think that Kj would disturb me? He can't ever trouble me, no matter what.

They smiled. Kabir came forward to meet Viraj and Kaira. He hugged Viraj and greeted Kaira.

Vi- Nisha, vaise bhi Kairaj ke school khulne waale hain so it's better we take him. We will come to meet you in every round.

After much reluctance Nisha and Kairaj agreed to this. They bid the happy family goodbye and got back.

Ni- I am really sorry for much of your time is wasted. Let's get back. So now...

Nisha started training them. After some 3-4 hours there was a break.

Ni- Okay now everyone let's take a break.

They were leaving for breakfast. Kabir was still standing there. Nisha stood at the door. No one else was left there.

Ni- (without turning) Kabir, mitr hone ke pashchaat bahano ki avashyakta nahi hoti hai. (after being friends you don't really need reasons)

Kabir chuckled. He joined her and they went to have breakfast together. They got seated. She called the waiter.

Ni- 2 Samosas, if available.

Waiter- yes ma'am we do have.

Kabir was confused because he thought that Nisha didn't have samosas in her diet chart.

Ni- (looking at his face) Kabir, main khaana khaane ke praayah sochti nahi hoon. Mujhe jo uchit lagta hai main vahi chunti hoon. Aur samosa khaana na khaana kuch panne nahi bata sakte hain. (giggled) (Kabir, I don't think twice before having some food. Whatever I feel I okay I pick it. Having samosa or not cannot be guided by some pages)

Kabir giggled.

Ni- Tum huss kyun rahe ho? (why are you laughing?)

Ka- You look really funny when you try to speak proper Hindi. And I am really surprised how do you know so many words that too in proper Hindi?

Ni- Bharat mein janm lene ke pashchat yadi main pardes bhi aati hoon tab bhi main apni matr bhoomi ka saath nahi chodungi. (even though I shifted from India to some other place but I have taken birth in India and I wouldn't leave my mother land so soon.)

Ka- Nisha, I really can't digest this now!

Ni- Toh khaane par dhyan do!

The waiter got food for them. They had it and again joined the practice. After having lunch everyone went to the rehearsal hall for some practice of dance. Nisha was getting good with contemporary. Kabir was laughing sometimes at her trials to take difficult postures but then went to her and helped her. Soon the practice was over. They went to have dinner. Nisha and Kabir were having dinner.

Ka- Nisha, by the way, we didn't decide what would be done if no one loses?

Ni- Ab inn khayalon ko dimaag se nikaal dein kyunki ab hum ismein kisi prakaar se sahayta nahi kar sakte hain. Jo bhi plan kara tha wahi karenge.

Ka- Haan theek hai.

Wait! They realized that the other one lost the challenge.

Ni & ka- Tu haar gayi/gaya!

They laughed.

Ka- (laughing) Nisha humein sochna chahiye tha ki jab dono haarenge tab kya karenge?

Ni- (laughing) Hum kahan dono ke jeetne ke baare mein soch rahe the aur kahan...

They started laughing louder. Everyone was looking at them and they did realize if very soon. They stopped laughing but were still giggling. They had their dinner and then were leaving back to the rooms. They were talking and telling each other some funny tales. Soon they reached the rooms and now they were standing in front of the doors.

Ka- So?

Ni- So now I guess we should go and sleep.

Kabir nodded and they went to their respective rooms. They saw the time. It was still 9. They were getting bored. Nisha started watching TV where nothing was coming. Suddenly she heard a knock on the door.

Ni- Who's there?

Outside- Nisha it's me, Kabir.

Nisha opened the door and they sat on the bed.

Ka- Yaar mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai.

Ni- Toh lori (lullaby) Sunau?

Ka- No because I know tu bhi so nahi pa rahi hai. Let's talk.

They started talking. Kabir sat on the couch. Nish rested her head on the bed rest and Kabir took the support of the cushion on the couch. They were enjoying each other's company.

It was fun. Soon they slept there only. The next morning they woke up at the same time and looked at each other. They felt like it was the best morning. The days went by like that. No not Nibir in the same room but they were coming closer day by day. Finally the final day came"Round 2.

Their teams performed well. Kabir made his team dance on the song LAKHDHYA HAI TERA with various dancing elements. TARGET LOCKED performed on the song Badal Pe Paun hai with some elements of long range shooting. The results were getting announced.

Laura- So here we get the top 8 academies. Let's go from behind.

Andrew- On the 8th position we have the...

They announced all the names and now was the time for the winner of the second round and only some teams including Nisha's were left.

Andrew- So the first one is THE TARGET LOCKED.

(By the way just so that you all are not disappointed Kabir's was second.)

Everyone cheered for the teams. Nisha was almost jumping and so was Kabir. Andrew and Laura came to her and she calmed down and met them. They were down the stage.

Andrew- Congratulations Ms. Gangwal! (looking at Kabir who was standing beside) And to you to Mr. Kumar!

Laura- I was really impressed by the performances of your teams today and it was surely a tough competition between you two.

Andrew- But we came to know from our sources that you have helped each other?

Nisha and Kabir smiled and nodded.

Laura- Don't you think that would defy our rules?

Ka- Ma'am we were not supposed to take help and call someone from outside. We didn't do that.

Laura and Andrew smiled at his wise answer and then left. Nisha was giving a confused look.

Ka- What?

Ni- I never knew you could be wise actually.

Kabir smiled thinking it to be his praise but when he realized what it actually meant he also realized that Nisha already ran away.

They were leaving for their rooms. Nisha was walking with Austin discussing some matter with him. Kabir came from behind and samcked her head.

Ni- (rubbing her head) Oww!

Ka- Yeah, this is what you get when you badmouth me that too in front of me.

Ni- Tujhe ladki par haath uthaate sharam nahi aati! (still rubbing her head)

Ka- Tujhe bhi toh nahi aati.

They were about to begin the fight again when Austin interrupted.

Austin- I am sorry to interrupt in your fight but I have to go. Its late now.

Austin left. Nisha was also leaving when Kabir called her.

Ni- Haan bol?

Ka- Laura and Andrew told that tomorrow morning by 9 all the owners will have a meeting where we will be told about the next round. Be ready!

Ni- (sarcastically) What you will come to pick me up in your Mercedes?

Ka- (sarcastically) Nisha how can someone be so sensible I really doubt it!

Nisha smiled sarcastically and then was leaving again when Kabir called her yet AGAIN.

Ni- Hmm?

Ka- Nisha agar aaj neend na aaye toh chatting kar lenge (teasingly) warna log galat sochte hain.

Nisha went near him (like near wala near) encircled her arms around his neck leaving some space between them not making their bodies touch. Kabir was shocked and was ready to call the ambulance for he could die any moment out of shock.

Ni- (huskily) Toh sochne do!

And this is how Kabir died! He could not really understand what was happening.

Ni- (huskily) And by the way thanks for helping us, Mr. Kumar.

She slightly kissed his cheek and went inside leaving a hell shocked and almost dead Kabir behind. Soon he recovered from the shock and went inside his room. Nisha was all ready to sleep and was switching off the lamp when she heard her phone beep. She opened it and saw there was a message from Kabir.

Tune toh mujhe apni style mein thank you bol diya (embarrassed emoji) but i haven't got the chance to thank you in my style. This is unfair, Ms. Gangwal. (winking emoji)

Nisha was blushing hard now and she did not know this. She replied.

Mister, chance milta nahi lena padta hai. (winking emoji)

Kabir was astonished at her boldness. He replied

Kal tayyar rehna tu fir. Good night.

Nisha didn't reply then. She kept the phone on her side and slept. The next they woke up and as decided Kabir knocked the door of room at 8. She was also ready and came out.

Ka- (teasing tone) Badi Fresh lag rahi hai, Nisha!

Ni- Oh copy cat! Chal abhi!

She said as she locked the door.

Ka- I didn't copy.

Ni- Maine YJHD 30 se upar baar dekh chuki hai so please.

Ka- Wow! I really thought that you don't watch Hindi movies.

Ni- Yeah you mean "I DON'T WATCH TV" type. (quoting the words)

Ka- Sort of!

They were fighting again. They went to the hall. Everyone else were already gathered. They took their seats. Laura and Andrew came.

Laura- So congratulations everyone! Before we tell you what's coming up next we just want you to forget everything we told you about the rounds earlier.

Andrew- Now we have only 2 rounds remaining.

Laura- And by the end of the nest round we will have our 4 finalists.

Andrew- This means we will have to eliminate 4 groups.

Laura- in order to be fair we have decided that the nest round would be a face off round.

Andrew- Not a normal face off but a faceoff between the coaches and to help them you can have maximum 2 members of the team.

Laura- And since we have 2 teams showcasing the same talents we can be fair with this and so we all know who is having competition with whom.

Andrew- Now the rules! The best part of this competition is there no rules except for one common rule for the whole competition that is you cannot call anyone from outside. So go on and do your best.

Laura- I hope we are clear enough.

Everyone nodded.

Andrew- So now we can go for breakfast. Have a great day.

Ka- (whispering to Nisha) Chalo we haven't got any shock this time.

Laura- And yes the competition is 3 days later. All the best!

Ka- (sarcastically) And here we go! Stupid Kabir!

Nisha giggled. She saw her phone. There was a message. She opened it and read it she was shocked and ran outside making way through everyone. Kabir ran after her asking her to slow down. She reached the reception and so did Kabir after her. Kabir was going to ask something when they heard someone call her.

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Someone- NISHU!!!

Nisha heard the voice and turned. There was guy wearing Rayban goggles and having a bouquet in his hand with his arms open. Kabir was astonished to see the person and even more when he saw Nisha running to him and hugging him. The guy hugged her back and swirled. He literally picked her up in his arms.

Ni- (extremely happy) Neeche utaaro.

Guy- Mann nahi hai!

Nisha glared him. He put her down. They hugged each other again. Kabir was still standing near the reception all shocked.

Ni- (smiling) Itna time kyun laga?

Guy- You see there were loads of work. I couldn't really get it completed it soon. Vaise bhi tumse main zyada door thodi na reh sakta hoon.

Ni- Acha!

She started tickling him and he couldn't stop laughing. Just then she realized something.

Ni- OH god!

Guy- (relief) Thank god!

Ni- Main toh bhool hi gayi!

Guy- What?

Ni- Wait! Kabir!

Kabir went there trying to cover his shock.

Ni- Kabir he is Gaurav and Gaurav he is Kabir.

Gaurav- Nisha you are really bad at introducing.

Nisha gave a WHATEVER look. He took out his goggles.

Gaurav- Hi friend! I am Gaurav, Gaurav Khanna, Nisha's bestest friend and the owner of Khanna Group of Industries.

He forwarded his hand. Kabir shaked his hand.

Ka- Kabir Kumar, Nisha's friend and the owner of The Impeccables.

Ga- Oh! Sorry! I forgot to congratulate you. Congratulations man!

He side hugged him. Kabir also plastered a smile a hugged him.

Ni- (teasing) Yeh bouquet kiske liye?

Ga- Uske liye jiski wajah se main yahan hoon.

He gave her the bouquet and she smiled not knowing that the burning smell was not from some gas stove but from Kabir.

Ni- Thank you. Waise tumhe mujhse milne ki permission kaise mili?

Ga- (almost whispering so that only the 3 can hear) Unko bola that you are my fiance.

Nisha was shocked and so was Kabir and before Nisha could speak up Kabir did.

Ka- (annoyed) Are you mad? How could you say that she your fiance without asking her?

Now it was Nisha and Gaurav who were shocked.

Ni- (to cover up and lighten the mood) Haan sahi keh raha Kabir! Main abhi bhi tumhari fiance nahi hoon.

Ka- Abhi bhi?

Ga- Haan actually I proposed her but she said no and since then I have been trying to convince her but she is engrossed in someone else's thoughts.

Just then Gaurav realized something.

Ga- Are you Kabir from India?

Kabir nodded. Gaurav gave a questioning look to Nisha. Nisha assured him by keeping her palms on his elbow.

Ni- Why don't you join us for breakfast?

Ga- Why not, sure!

They went to the breakfast table. Gaurav sat beside Nisha and Kabir in front of her.

Ni- So what to order?

Ga- I would like to do this small work if you don't mind?

Nisha nodded. The waiter came. He was an Indian.

Ga- Two cappuccino and one black coffee and... (saw his name on the batch) Arre tum Indian hi ho! Ab samjhana aasan hoga. 2 samose, ek chutney se bana hua and one plain and one plate salad.

Ka- how do you know my taste?

Ga- (Seriously) Mujhe sab kuch pata hai, Nisha mujhse kuch nahi chupati hai. After all ab uski family mein log hi kitne hain.

Kabir smiled in order to ignore what he was trying to say but even he knew what he meant. They had their breakfast.

Ni- Now I should leave for I don't really have much time aur mujhe Austin se baat bhi karni padegi about the next round.

Ga- Chalo main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon.

Ka- (monologue) Chipkali hoti hai lekin ye chipkala hai woh bhi bada wala. Wait! But I should not get affected. Aur last time bhi Viraj and Nisha were only friends.

Nisha and Gaurav left. The day went by. Nisha, Gaurav and Kabir had their breakfast. Gaurav was leaving when they saw camp fire in the lawn. It was cold night. Nisha went there and the two boys followed her. There were young boys and girls of a school trip.

Ni- Mind if we join you?

One of them- No not at all. We would love to have winners with us.

Nisha sat on one log. Kabir was about to take the place beside her when Gaurav came from behind and took that place.

Ka- (monologue) chipak toh aise raha tha jaise boyfriend ho aur Nisha bhi usse aise hi treat kar rahi thi.

They were singing songs. All of them were Indian. They asked Nisha to sing a song. Nisha sang the song MUJHE ISHQ SE and that too after much reluctance looking at Kabir all the time. It was Gaurav's turn. He went in the center and sang the song TAREEFON SE NAHI and by the end danced with her. Now it was Kabir's turn. He sang the song BOLNA. He was looking at Nisha all this time as if dedicating the song to her. He stopped because he forgot the lyrics. Nisha stood up and completed the song. She looked at everyone while singing the song. She went back.

Ga- Wah Nisha! You are too good haan!

Ni- Thanks. But I sang a song previously usmein kuch nahi bolna.

Ga- Uske liye yeh...

He opened his arms. Nisha smiled and side hugged him maintain some distance. Kabir could not tolerate it and left without letting anyone know except for Gaurav and Nisha.

Ni- I will be back soon.

She went behind Kabir. Kabir was beside the pool. Nisha went near him.

Ka- (angry) Nisha abhi chali jaa warna main kuch bhi bol doonga.

Ni- I am really eager to hear.

Ka- (shouts) Nisha just leave!

Nisha knew now was not the time to talk and so she left.

God- (singing) Haan tujhe pyar pyar hua pyaar hua allah miya!

Ka- (shouting looking up) Aaj bilkul nahi!

After sometime Kabir went in his room and slept. Gaurav left and Nisha also went to her room.


Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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This part is specially for Anmol jo Sacchai jaan ne ke liye saare type ke tareeke try ker rahi thi. I know sab hi kar rahe the but she deserves a special mention over here.

Chapter-11
Sachai Ka Hoga Aadha Pardafash

Kabir went to his balcony and looked at the stars up.

All I want is nothing more
To hear you knocking at my door
'Cause if I could see your face once more
I could die as a happy man I'm sure

Kabir was reminiscing some of their happy moments.

*Fb* BEFORE DIVORCE

Ka- (shouting) Nisha bahar aa yaar! I am getting late. Please na yaar.

Ni- (shouting from the bathroom) Kalb hi tu jaanta tha that I was getting late for the pooja but fir bhi romance kar raha tha. 15 minute late kiya than a mujhe ab dekh!

Ka- Nisha tujhe toh sirf ghar waalon ne hi daanta tha aur apno se daant khana zyada hurt nahi karta lekin meri situation alag hai samajha kar yaar! Please!

Ni- Acha theek hai 15 nahi toh 5 minutes to late karoongi.

Ka- please Nisha! I am sorry! Please!

Nisha opened the gate and wiping her hair. She was looking like an angel. But right now Kabir was already late. Nisha came and encircled her arms around Kabir.

Ni- (huskily) Mr. Kumar thodi toh saza milni hi chahiye.

Kabir encircled his arms around her waist.

Ka- Nisha don't provoke me warna aaj toh main sabke saamne bata hi dunga late hone ka kaaran and iss baar pinching won't help.

Nisha blushed while Kabir smirked. They got lost in each other's eyes when suddenly someone knocked on the door. He realized that Nisha was successful now. She made him almost half an hour late because she was in the bathroom for like 20 minutes and after coming out also she stopped him for like 5 minutes and now Kabir would need to the least 5 minutes to get ready.

She giggled and smirked. Kabir understood.

Ka- Nisha!

Ni- (almost running to the door) Jaldi kariye hubby late hojayenge. Itna kaun time lagata hai uthne mein! (giggling)

Kabir went inside not in the mood to get a good lecture from his mother.

*FB ENDS*

When you said your last goodbye
I died a little bit inside
I lay in tears in bed all night
Alone without you by my side

*FB*

Ka- (Casually) Nisha neeche jaa rahi hai kya?

Ni- Kahi jahan se main wapas nahi aaungi!

Kabir ran to her and kept his hand on her mouth.

Ka- Aaj bol diya wapas mat bolna. Yeh koi mazaak nahi hota hai Nisha!

Nisha just hugged him and cried. Kabir couldn't understand that she was hiding something. He hugged her back and patted her back.

Ka- (concerned tone) Nisha, kya hua?

Ni- (wiping her tears) Kuch nahi. I love you Kabir!

This was the last night he saw her.

*FB ENDS*

He wiped the lone tear that fell down.

But If you loved me
Why did you leave me

Take my body
Take my body
All I want is
All I need is
To find somebody
I'll find somebody

*FB*

Next day, he woke but couldn't find Nisha. He saw a letter though.

Kabir,

I am leaving. Don't ask me where or why. I have to just remember this. And haan I have kept a list of medicines which can taken in different sitatuations. Koi bhi utha kar mat le lena. Main wapas nahi aaungi. Marr nahi rahi hoon but I can't stay here anymore. You won't be able to contact me because my phone is right beside the vase. I am sorry. Bye!

P.S. Please Devdas mat ban na because everyone here needs you.

Kabir was shocked. He thought it was some kind of joke. He went downstairs and kept on calling for her but couldn't get any answer back. His father came out and asked him the matter. He showed him the letter. Arjun was shocked and he looked at Vasu. Vasu gave a confused look. They searched her along with Kabir. After a few hours they realized that Nisha had actually left.

Everyone sat on the sofa. Kabir went beside his father.

Ka- (almost crying) Why are you crying papa? She hasn't gone! She is just playing a prank. Don't worry. Mujhe maaloom hai she will cal up by night.

Arjun was about to speak something when they heard Kartik calling him. He looked on the stairs. Kartik was having some papers in his hands and was holding Kirti with his other hand.

Ar- (scolding) what are doing Kartik?

He made him release Kirti.

Kar- Dad, you don't know has she has done. (angrily glaring Kirti)

Ka- Bhai please don't talk to bhabhi like that.

Kar- Kabir jiss bhabhi ko tu itna protect kara hai na she is the one who made Nisha out.

Everyone was shocked.

Va- What rubbish are you talking Kartik? Why would she do such a thing even after knowing they love each other?

Kar- (angrily) That is the thing mom! She did after after knowing everything. Look what I saw in her hand.

He showed some papers. Kabir took the papers and was shocked to read them. Kabir sat on the sofa with a thud.

Ar- What are they Kabir?

Kar- They are divorce papers dad. (everyone shocked) They are divorce papers of Nisha and Kabir and Nisha's signatures are already there.

Everyone was shocked. They took the papers from Kabir and saw it. Everyone was angry on Kirti.

Ar- What is this Kirti? Tell us the whole truth.

Kirti looked at Vasu and Arjun and then spoke up.

Ki- Dad, I knew Nisha was going to leave but she had reasons and she asked me to keep mum and not to let anyone know about it. She couldn't have faced Kabir and so left without meeting. Dad she took promise from me to not tell anyone, (started crying) I couldn't have hurt her for any reason. Dad she was having some problem she couldn't tell. Trust me dad, I haven't supported her in any wrong decision.

Kabir was still shocked. He went inside his room and cried. He didn't let anyone in. that not the day when he closed the room doors, it was the day when he closed the doors to his heart.

He became a soul who was living happily in front of everyone not letting anyone know the condition inside.

*FB ENDS*

Ooh oh
Ooh oh
Ooh oh
Ooh oh

'Cause you brought out the best of me
A part of me I'd never seen
You took my soul wiped it clean
Our love was made for movie screens

Kabir was remembering the worst day of life but got remembered of the best ones with Nisha.

But If you loved me
Why did you leave me
Take my body
Take my body
All I want is
All I need is
To find somebody
I'll find somebody

Ooh oh
Ooh oh
Ooh oh
Ooh oh
Ooh ah

He was remembering their best of times even before marriage. How they spent time together. How they met in the rasams for the wedding. How they had enjoyed every moment together.

Ka- Kyun Nisha? (crying )Kyun kiya tune aisa? Bina kuch bataye. Bhabhi toh majboor thi but teri kya majboori thi Nisha. Kyun kiya tune aisa? I loved you deeply then why me Nisha? Why me? Nisha teri wajah se bhai bhabhi se naaraz rehte hain. Aanchal hasn't seen the love of her parents since her birth. You have spoilt various lives Nisha, (determined look) But now I need an answer. The person who has never thought of hurting a single person even though she can get hurt herself.

He broke down on his knees. After some time he slept in balcony only.

NEXT MORNING

Kabir and Nisha went to the restaurant to have their breakfast. It was their habit now to have breakfast, lunch and dinner together.

While having breakfast,

Ka- So Nisha, how long have you two been friends?

Ni- Who me and Gaurav?

Ka- (sarcastically) No me and you!

Ni- I don't really remember wait...

Nisha was just messing with Kabir and Kabir understood it.

Ka- (drama queen type) Haan naye doston ke puraane doston ko kaun yaad rakhta hai!

Ni- (smacked his hand) Chup kar drama queen! Pure time nautanki kara lo!

Ka- (giggled) Tu bata na!

Ni- Since childhood!

Ka- (shocked) What?!

Ni- Haan!

Ka- Aur tune mujhe kabhi bataya bhi nahi!

Ni- Tune pucha hi nahi!

They chuckled.

Ka- So you like him?

Ni- Who Gaurav?

Ka- Nisha!

Ni- Okay, sorry! About Gaurav, I have always been his friend but more like a sister.

Ka- Nobody proposes a sister.

Ni- Even he didn't!

Ka- What do you mean? Yesterday he said... (confused)

Ni- Gaurav ko pasand nahi hai me having many boys as friends.

Ka- But why so overprotective towards a friend. Are you sure he doesn't like you? Moreover tu bhi usse saari baatein karti hai!

Ni- Kabir! He is my Bhaa.

Ka- (confused) Bhaa?

Ni- I heard somewhere that it means brother. I call him Bhaa but rarely even though he is my cousin.

Ka- Nisha you are making me confused. (utterly confused)

Ni- Okay, let me explain. Gaurav mere cousin mama ka bete hai and is an year older to me. So in this way he is my cousin but he is more like my best friend. He came to London some 5-6 years ago for job and settled here. Isiliye hamara milna bahut kam ho gaya. But when I came here he helped me a lot. He helped me for a getting a house, payed the rent for a few months along with Viraj and helped me set up an academy. He is the one who made me stand upto this level. He is himself a great shooter. He is like Viraj to me. And about proposal he cannot because he is married. Now you get it?

Ka- (confused) Nisha tere kitne bhai behen hain?

Ni- Itne ki ek choota toh doosra taiyyar!

Just then she got remembered of Sukku. She looked down. Kabir understood what she might be feeling.

Ka- Do you wanna call him?

Ni- Who?

Ka- Sukku!

Ni- How do you know?

Ka- Tujhe tujhse bhi zyada acchi tarah jaanta hoon. Yeh le! (gives his phone)

Ni- Kabir I don't want to.

Ka- Pehli baar dekha koi bol raha hai nahi karna chahti mostly after some years the girl says I can't.

Ni- (attitude) I have always been different.

Ka- I know. Chal khaa!

PRECAP- KNOWING ABOUT NISHA VERSION 2.0

Chapter-12

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved all the parts ... It is awesome ...
Their English hindi fight...😆
The coming close ... Kiss on the cheek ... 😳
The jealousy track ...
And the last part ... the mystery ... It was well written ... I doubts kabir's parents ... They know something ...
Hope jladi sab clear ho jaye ... 😒
And godji tussi great ho ..." Hogaya h tujhko jo pyaar sajna ..."
🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Super wala awesome read all four parts they are sooo soo good loved it a lot seriously itne time bad padhke I am feeling more excited to know what's happening next please ab wait mat karvana post soon they were truly awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome dr..
Jealousy and mystery part both r superb..
Wtng for next one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Loved it very much.waiting for the next part.
update soon😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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just so good...especially a huge thanku for the uldates in one go...
hope to see nibir 2gethr soon...pls pls update the soonish 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
You really cheered up my mood today⭐️
Thanks a lot for the mind blowing updates together👏👏

My exams are going on so I'm settling in for a short comment here😊

The foremost point that I would bring up would be the one liners of the precap. I've always loved them! And this time too the 'version 2.0' thing has its own delightful charm😳

Besides this, the probability topic covered here was pure applied mathematics fun👍🏼 Like none thought about 'both win' or 'both lost' situations 😆 Boolean alegbra🤣

Don't term me mad (even though I'm😆) because it's just the exam fever🤣 Relating everything to my exam😆 Relativity theory🤣 My God! I need to get back to the point.😆
So, yeah, their Hindi-English fight challenge was crazy😆 thanks for the dialogues in brackets btw😉

And arey cheek kiss can't go without mention😳
It would be injustice if I l didn't tell you that the most touching part I felt was when Kabir's mind plays the past. It was so emotional reading along with the song lyrics😭😭. I haven't heard the song but the lyrics did apply to the entire situation aptly that the reader is sincerely moved.

The mystery still lingers fairly well. "Aadha pardafaash"😆
You know my mind is working out here for the possible reasons why she fled away. I would like to test my guessing power once again😎

Oh and yeah garba wala thing was so cute. I recently had watched their old IV to refresh my mind and this thing here too was a cute little surprise
Jealousy hmm... badhiya tha vo bhi😆 turned out to be bhaa🤣
Plus the sleeping scene was awww

The real hero is God obviously😎 Great convos and sing alongs!👏

Impressive masterstrokes you play yaar!!! 👏👏 Reading all the updates in a go was sure shot enjoyment😃

Continue soon plzzz

Okay don't laugh at me🤣 (even though I'm laughing at myself) that short comment ka keh kar kathaa sunaai hai, but it happens everytime with me I don't know why🤣 may be some kismet related thing😆 whatever😆
Chalo bye... would stalk the forum 😉

Thanks again for lightening my mood 🤗




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