A Thousand Years~~ShraMan OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people...Pehli baat toh mai ye clear kardu...MAI ZINDA HU😆😆 Life has turned into a mess...12th is so so complicated and hectic🤢I hadn't thought it would be like this🤢OK...So this comes as a celebration for my result today...I scored really well and was granted the permission to go on the IF😆

This is a little different from what I write always...My latest obsession is the song A THOUSAND YEARS which I heard juz yesterday and fell in love with it..😳So thought it would be best for this situation...This OS is based on a big IF..If Suman would have married Aditya then..how her feelings would be...I have tried to portray them in 20 mins...Please please do let me know how it has turned up..


She sat in front of the mirror...Completely dressed in her bridal look...her face reflected happiness..but her heart was in deep agony...she was dressed for her wedding...her brain did allow her to do it..but heart??she broke all her promises with it...her promise to her heart to be with HIM...

Heart beats fast

Colours and promises

How to be brave?

How can I love when I'm afraid to fall?

But watching you stand alone,
All of my doubt suddenly goes away somehow.

The door was knocked...

"Jaldi karo beta...muhurat ka samay nikla jaa raha hai..."

"Ji Mamiji...abhi aayi..."

She got up from the table and saw the frame on the desk...Her photo with HIM...She broke down once again...

I have died every day waiting for you
Darling, don't be afraid.
I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

She came out of the room and the guests glanced at her...The time froze as HE saw HER...she looked beautiful...just as he had imagined her to be HIS...but that wasn't possible now...his heart told him to take her away from there...Far far away..where she would be only his...but his brain didn't permit him to do so...Their eyes locked and their deep down botteled up feeling threatened to come out...


Time stands still
Beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything take away
What's standing in front of me
Every breath
Every hour has come to this


She sat in the mandap with Aditya...ans Shravan stood behind...helpless..his love, his life,was being given away..yet he was helpless...she saw him with some hope in her tired eyes...but he was afraid...once again...

I have died every day waiting for you

Darling, don't be afraid.

I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

They touched the feet of the elders...Shravan stood beside Nanaji...The couple stood in front of him...Aditya smiled at him and hugged him...Shravan responded with equal favor but his eyes were locked in hers...They were red in the colour of love...they screamed for his love...She saw it...but now...FATE was changed...She knew he loved her...If he would have taken a step closer then...this day would be more special for her...

And all along I believed I would find you
Time has brought your heart to me
I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

One step closer
One step closer


She sat in the car with her eyes overflowing...they thought it was for she was leaving her family...But HE knew why it was...If he had been a little brave ...she would be smiling with tears now...She saw him looking at her and smiled at him..She loved him for a thousand years...And she would do the same for the next...

I have died every day waiting for you
Darling, don't be afraid.
I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

How was it?????
Let me know guys...this is the first time a wrote on an English song...Will be waiting for y'all's honest comments😊
Plus I am very very sorry for not replying to the comments on the another OS..I'll try my best to to them asap..those who liked and commented there Thanks a ton guys...!!!🤗
A link to the song for those who haven't heard


[YOUTUBE]Christina Perri - A Thousand Years [Official Music Video][/YOUTUBE]
Do let me know how this turned up😕
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shona!🤗

Just wokeup!will read it soon 😉
abhi k lea..


Reswa!😆
***
Unres!


Shona!🤗
Tum bhi zinda hai!😃😆...Bata ab tab kitni gakiyan parein coz mjhy fb par tu BUHAT parein infact ab tak par hi rahein hai😕🤪😆
Congratulations for ur result Shona!🥳🤗

Coming to the song!
Oh my! Oh my! Oh my!...I,myself m sooo obssessed with this song!
The day i heard it for the first time i fell for it!...the lyrics are...Tremendously beautiful!❤️...Uff i soo love this song!n know what i had this song in mind for 👏 also n will use it too😃😉...These hugs for using this song!...🤗🤗🤗

Now coming to the upii...

Awweiii...What an update!👏👏
Haah!..imagining Suman being of Adi was blood boiling but the way you narrated Shraman's predicament their fight with their feelings and regretting it till the end...was all Stupendously penned!⭐️👏
The song apt one..beautified it more n more!❤️

there is a saying n i quote "you may have to fight a battle more than once to win in"...and to win something all you have to do is muster up some courage and stand for it but in his case he choose to be a coward and all he left with was empty hands and regret to mourn on!...and you penned this fact hell Brilliantly!⭐️

Hats off Shona!👏
I loved it a lot!😃
Love you too🤗



Take Care!
Naina❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good to know that you're alive 😆
But I didn't get a pm 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a lovely portrayal of the scene!
How would that have been if she had actually gotten married to Aditya! No matter what she would have loved Shravan for a thousand years and would do so for a thousand more.
I've always loved this song.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reserved!
Unres
So what drew me to this was the title, the song, i love the song! ❤️
This was really cute Frooti!😳 Keep it up!

Love
Ramya di
Edited by --Elara-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunain

Shona!🤗
Jaanu🤗
Just wokeup!will read it soon 😉
abhi k lea..


Reswa!😆


U better UNRES soon😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Good to know that you're alive 😆

But I didn't get a pm 😭


So so sorry Madhu...Mai bhul gayi thi ke PM karna hai😛Abhi kar diya😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

What a lovely portrayal of the scene!

How would that have been if she had actually gotten married to Aditya! No matter what she would have loved Shravan for a thousand years and would do so for a thousand more.
I've always loved this song.


Thanks a looottt Swara🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Elara--

Reserved!
Unres
So what drew me to this was the title, the song, i love the song! ❤️
This was really cute Frooti!😳 Keep it up!

Love
Ramya di


Ramya Di...!!!🤗🤗
I am so so happy that you liked it...!!!I was hell upset how it would turn out...Thanks a ton...This means a lot for me😃😳
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Thanks😃

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