| Shivika One Shot *OS*| UPLIFTING THE VEIL

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U P L I F T I N G T H E V E I L

A Shivika One Shot (OS)
Genre : Romance



"She was not the most perfect creature living,
but perfect was not what he was seeking"

"To live is to change, and to be perfect is to change often"


Enchanted , as if listening to a fairy tale, she looked into his deep bluish green orbs . His kanji aankhein. Her favourite kanji aankein .Oh, how much she loved that face, those eyes, that perfect jawline, that small but significant mole, those girls-would-kill-for-them eyelashes and that perfectly gelled dark hair which always urged her to mess it up- just a bit to see how chui-mui would he get. And how much she had fantasized those soft yet rugged lips capturing her own into an unyielding passionate yet gentle kiss. A kiss filled with love , just pure love. Her heart skipped a beat as she reminisced those fantasies.Just imagine , remembering them could make her heart skip. Actually kissing him , would what? Probably give her a heart attack. She was so lost in his eyes , so lost in their silence that she didn't feel the time ticking away
Her world has just stopped at his words
And she exactly wanted that, to do nothing but read his beautiful eyes all day long. His eyes were opaque and transparent , as much contradictory it sounded, it was true. He always showed the emotions he wanted to show and the rest as if forgotten by his own self were hidden away by a veil only he was capable of uplifting. But today, something was different, his almost indecipherable eyes were lifting the veil, the mask was slipping away and she fervently hoped that this was the last she saw of the cursed veil.As the veil lifted she instantly took a step back, surprised by what she saw in those eyes.How could it be possible for one person to feel so many emotions at the same time? His eyes had a turmoil of emotions inside him, which was oddly very very familiar. Her eyes widened slightly as she realized that his eyes mirrored her own cocoa ones. She had seen the same emotions that of anger, longing, pain,desire, anguish, lust and most of all love , overpowering all the others in front of the mirror when she had felt all her strength leaving her and all her defences crumbled up lying in a heap , she felt like a statue staring at her own blank face every single day.Today, his eyes reflected the very same.And it left her stunned. Her mind was reeling, how had she not seen this ,known this before? How had she missed so many emotions suppressed inside him ?She had just seen his indifference and anger before which she had classified as hate. After that, she had seen care and concern , maybe even slight desire at times which she had misinterpreted as friendship from his side. Just friendship because she didn't dare to hope. But in her heart she knew their beautiful rishta went beyond friendship. She had just seen the drizzle but completely missed the storm. HOW? And she claimed she loved him? But then realization struck her, oh , he had shown her what he had wanted her to see. After all, it had always been all about him. He really was a good actor- she had to give him that. She suddenly wanted to weep very badly, which was very surprising in itself. She didn't cry like many other girls, as a rule she rarely did. Simply because she couldn't afford tears , she was tough you see.Guess that changed after his entry in her life because at this point, she didn't feel so tough. All those weeks, days, hours, minutes and seconds flashed before.All that desperate longing , pain of separation and that angst of thinking , maybe he had never felt the same about her, as she had felt , had suffocated her and slowly but steadily left her drained. But she had never let herself move on, she still held the moments they shared and cherished them in her heart. She never completely lost hope. Though, the lord knew she had wanted to and at one point needed to. But she simply could not, and one stubborn like the man standing in front of her , part of her body refused to listen. Her heart and her mind were constantly at war, ready to cut throat. But it was her that would have been cut ,after all. And honestly she had always been partial to her heart.Always. She had listened to her heart and ignored her foolish brain.And her heart had told her " Be patient, he loves you too and one fine day, he will come around. Keep your hope alive". Then she had hoped and hoped. Just kept hoping. That one fine day did come at last after so much pain.But as she stared at those rainbow hued orbs she concluded that the pain was worth it.
Fairy tales did come true.They were real for her.

''When patterns are broken , new worlds emerge" </font>

P.S : Pheww ! That was difficult to post , have been trying for the past 3 days. And I didn't even save it before. I swear IF has a major problem with me. BTW people who write on phone I sympathise with you. I agree it's hell.

P.S 2: Sorry for the ranting P.S :1 I was frustrated . I know this is too long so Sorry but the genre should be eyes no? XD I know this is kinda crappy. This is the first time I wrote something romantic ( if this was) Thanks for reading.

P.S 3: Have not proof read. Kindly ignore the mistakes and any types of comments are welcome. Especially criticism. Okay , no more Post scripts after this . Pinky Promise.

Love <3
Lisa

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story.
You beautifully portrayed Anika's thoughts.Shivaay always hide his emotions.He was good in wearing a mask infront of every one.No one can find what is exactly going on in his mind.But his eyes change the colours and Anika know how to read his eyes.

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Thanks a lot :)
Thanks for commenting. Glad you loved it <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome story.

You beautifully portrayed Anika's thoughts.Shivaay always hide his emotions.He was good in wearing a mask infront of every one.No one can find what is exactly going on in his mind.But his eyes change the colours and Anika know how to read his eyes.


Thank you so much ! Really appreciated that you commented ,I read your posts or comments. You also portray Shivika really well. To be honest, I am obsessed with Shivaay's eyes. Man , they are gorgeous but the better thing is that more than his words . He expresses through his eyes especially to Annika. Well , his mask has kind of slipped away but am waiting to get rid of it forever.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bworm

Wow, beautifully written

Thank you. Glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so beautiful!❤️ You have written it so beautifully👏 I'm a big fan of Shivaay Kanji Aankhen more than him😆 as they are really expressive😳 and the way it changes it color according to his moods is phenomenal ⭐️.You have really expressed his eyes here perfectly,the veil which he had kept infront of his eyes so tha noone can see what is going in his heart and let people see what he wanted them to see,but as we say love break all the barriers the same thing happened here,Annika's love made his remove that veil and let her see how much he loved her❤️
Do write more.


Love yaa,
-Anya😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG LISA!!!!!! THAT WAS AS BEAUTIFUL AS SHIVAAY'S 'KANJI AANKIEN' 😳 ❤️

So many emotions from one point of view describing someone else. Not that I am much to judge, but that is very difficult to present such emotions in this manner and you were WONDERFUL. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Actually when I read the title, I thought it was Shivka's 'suhaag raat' and I got super excited 😆 😳 I hadn't realized until I finished the OS that it wasn't what I had initially thought b/c I was literally enchanted by your writing.

Only if I could write like that, my English teacher would've given my 100% 😆

Anyways, waiting to read more of your work in the near future! 😛

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: water9786


Awesome. Loved it dear...

Glad you loved it. Thank you <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you :D 😃
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Thank you so much !

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