| Shivika One Shot *OS*| UPLIFTING THE VEIL - Page 2

Originally posted by: itzanya32

This was so beautiful <3You have written it so beautifully</font>👏<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I'm a big fan of Shivaay Kanji Aankhen more than him😆 as they are really expressive</font>😳<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and the way it changes it color according to his moodsis phenomenal </font>⭐️<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">.You have really expressed his eyes here perfectly,the veil which he had kept infront of his eyes so tha noone can see what is going in his heart and let people see what he wanted them to see,but as we say love break all the barriers the same thing happened here,Annika's love made his remove that veil and let her see how much he loved her❤️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Do write more.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Love yaa,</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">-Anya</font>😳

Oh My God ! Thank you so much for the long comment. I really appreciate it and the fact that I love your stories especially the angst one ( where Annika leaves him) I should have commented a long ago but I couldn't or more like didn't due to my blasted phone. I do want to be more active in forum and write stuff on Shivika but my Desktop has crashed since forever and I am left with no option but to be a silent member. And the less I say about Shivaay's eyes , the better because I can write a freaking para on just his eyes (I kinda did it I guess) but are they expressive ! I think I can't marry a person who doesn't have kanji aankhein. Biased am I ? But yes Annika understands him and gets her all for her. Anyways Keep writing awesome stuff. Thanks once again for the comment. BTW is there anyone not obsessed with his eyes? ;)
Love Lis ❤️

Originally posted by: jarir2010

nice

Thank you !

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it well done

Glad that you loved it :) Thank you !

Originally posted by: moon99

OMG LISA!!!!!! THAT WAS AS BEAUTIFUL AS SHIVAAY'S 'KANJI AANKIEN' 😳 ❤️

So many emotions from one point of view describing someone else. Not that I am much to judge, but that is very difficult to present such emotions in this manner and you were WONDERFUL. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Actually when I read the title, I thought it was Shivka's 'suhaag raat' and I got super excited 😆 😳 I hadn't realized until I finished the OS that it wasn't what I had initially thought b/c I was literally enchanted by your writing.

Only if I could write like that, my English teacher would've given my 100% 😆

Anyways, waiting to read more of your work in the near future! 😛

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

Thank you so so so much ! Your comment really made my day , you are too kind 😳 Thanks really ! Any reader has the capability to judge a reader and so do you , but it can be good or bad and I am really glad that you think I am good, means A LOT. And sorry for the wrong title actually when you pointed it out , I realized it does sound like Shivika's "suhaag raat" OS but I can not think of a better title. Do suggest if you can . I will also be thinking for another title. Oh my ! Such a big compliment on my English, I swear this is the best compliment I have ever recieved and to be honest, English is my favourite language. So this AGAIN means a lot. But sadly my English Teacher does not agree. I could do with your teacher XD. I will write more but the real problen is typing especially in a phone. So hope my desktop gets well soon :D Your comment overwhelmed me. Really . THANK YOU
Love
Lis ❤️

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Thank you so so so much ! Your comment really made my day , you are too kind 😳 Thanks really ! Any reader has the capability to judge a reader and so do you , but it can be good or bad and I am really glad that you think I am good, means A LOT. And sorry for the wrong title actually when you pointed it out , I realized it does sound like Shivika's "suhaag raat" OS but I can not think of a better title. Do suggest if you can . I will also be thinking for another title. Oh my ! Such a big compliment on my English, I swear this is the best compliment I have ever recieved and to be honest, English is my favourite language. So this AGAIN means a lot. But sadly my English Teacher does not agree. I could do with your teacher XD. I will write more but the real problen is typing especially in a phone. So hope my desktop gets well soon :D Your comment overwhelmed me. Really . THANK YOU
Love
Lis ❤️

I'm glad you liked my comment this much 😳 , but I just said what I felt to be true.

I like the title, you should leave it b/c it fits so perfectly.

I hope your desktop get well soon!!!! Here I some love from me to your desktop ❤️ 😆

Absolutely brilliant!

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

Absolutely brilliant!

Loved your depiction of what transpires when the veil comes of and Shivaay's feelings are known to her.

Originally posted by: moon99

I'm glad you liked my comment this much 😳 , but I just said what I felt to be true.

I like the title, you should leave it b/c it fits so perfectly.

I hope your desktop get well soon!!!! Here I some love from me to your desktop ❤️ 😆

THANK YOU ! I just realized I haven't replied to your comment yet when I thought I had ! Damn , I am such a lazy person. Anyways , to the good news , due to your love to my desktop , it got well. And it is perfectly healthy now . I have even started a new FF now.All Thanks to you. Well I couldn't think of a better title except ' Your Eyes Speak It All ' which I personally think is Blah ! But if you like it , then maybe we could change it. Love
Lisa ❤️

Aww loved reading this very beautiful writing 😊