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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another one from me!!! I am on a writing high I guess!!!

Daisies, Promises and Dilemma

The daisies in the background reminded her of the unsaid promises.

Though, knowingly or unknowingly, he had done what she had wanted and how she had appeared to want it. She had convinced herself of what is the best for the moment and that, even after everything they are not for each other- but the heart and brain dilemma was still omnipresent and that ate her up.

She checked the phone 100th time- no whatsapp texts since morning. Perhaps, what was there in past few months was just because he had time; not that she was a priority. And she had known it always, didn't she? She had promised herself that she'll always keep everything as a sacred memory for the time they were together was important than anything else. He had filled up the space of a best friend she always longed for.

It was time. She needed to complete the documents for the proposal. It was always a choice: either to let brain win and become emotionless or to let heart win and go through a certain things. She chose heart- brain would make her feel lifeless. Emotions felt normal now. His presence in her life had given her the small hope- that her shankarji would always take care of her- even when there was no one else.

The unsaid promises are always weird. They can be adhered to or not. And she had wanted that freedom didn't she. But life had taught her- how freedom comes at its own cost. She had all the freedom in the world that one can ask for- personally and professionally. Yet, it always put into the dilemma of choice between the heart and brain.

Funny, it is- when you don't have choices, you can easily blame others for your life or luck, as you please. But when you have them, perhaps, it becomes difficult to prioritize.

Her thoughts were interrupted by a phone call and she poured out her anger on him.

"I thought to call you once I am free. Told you about the workshop, right?"

The life suddenly became normal as two hours passed once again discussing the same old things. Perhaps, the unsaid promises still are in place. And she needs to give it time till the destiny plays its role along with her decisions.

Cheers

Appy

Edited by appynehra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
@Sonalika(Escape)
Beautiful write up..!
It was something I could so relate to..!!!
Amazing..!!

@Sanjana
Woah...u wrote an entire Horror story type..!
Though I usually don't read them, I did read yours ...Nice..!

@Appy
Haha...!
Yet another musing straight from the heart..!
The fact that its just and excerpt and not the entire story makes it more enthralling..!!


@All

Wow...!
Brilliant works ..!
This so much fun...
Cycle well I woul d have taken the meaning as The Bicycle... In general, leaves would have been the ones on the trees...!

That's exactly why I love this, same words, different meanings , different emotions.

Wonderful..!!

Waiting For More..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Updated here
Trees, Silence, Hypnotise
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: annikaa

@Sonalika(Escape)

Beautiful write up..!
It was something I could so relate to..!!!
Amazing..!!

@Sanjana
Woah...u wrote an entire Horror story type..!
Though I usually don't read them, I did read yours ...Nice..!

@Appy
Haha...!
Yet another musing straight from the heart..!
The fact that its just and excerpt and not the entire story makes it more enthralling..!!


@All

Wow...!
Brilliant works ..!
This so much fun...
Cycle well I woul d have taken the meaning as The Bicycle... In general, leaves would have been the ones on the trees...!

That's exactly why I love this, same words, different meanings , different emotions.

Wonderful..!!

Waiting For More..!

Hey Annika,
I wanted to upload a pic too but I couldn't as I don't know how to. Trust me the pic would have taken away some people's peaceful sleep. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Sanjan No please..!
I might run away..!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
@Arshi67
Ruchi, you had me speechless, by that write up there..!
Magnificent description of nature..!
Though the end still remains gloomy in my head-(would love if you would explain those last 3 sentences in italics)

Amazing ..!

⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Dear Ruchi,

That was one absolutely splendid writeup:-)

Its been very long to have read a descriptive work of this level.

Brilliant

love
- Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Will love to write but can you wait for a week as now a days my net is slow end of.month and I downloaded dbo and other show... So net is not working and I have to go out of station this week... For a wedding


I will pick 1 stalk book vaala
Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: annikaa

@Arshi67

Ruchi, you had me speechless, by that write up there..!
Magnificent description of nature..!
Though the end still remains gloomy in my head-(would love if you would explain those last 3 sentences in italics)

Amazing ..!

⭐️


Thank you so much! Your selection of words are what inspired :)

"Babies.
My baby.
Why my baby, Devi Maiya"

They are gloomy, Anni :(
The thought of babies brings to the forefront the loss of her own baby. The last line alludes to that loss. A lament almost.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Dear Ruchi,

That was one absolutely splendid writeup:-)

Its been very long to have read a descriptive work of this level.

Brilliant

love
- Harshada


Harshada, thank you so, so much for your warm words <3

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