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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

@Anni: ur writing is another level dude!!!! So awesome!! 👏👏

But m confused- what the "chocolate is?"

Can i be hardwork- I mean to bend your destiny and to fulfill your dreams? Could be something else to!! Tell us soon!!

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

fantasy, inspiration ,ambition 😊😊

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

ani and appy such a beautiful os about summer,feeling,chocolate and dream 👏..you people just nailed it..write more guys ... i suggest some words above ..please check them..i hope you guys can write a os with these words ...loveee you 🤗❤️

Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Trish,

Its Beautiful..!!

Paradise, Whisper and Avoidance..!!

A Romantic Treat, in the least words possible..! Wow...!

P.S

Plz mention the words like Appy and I have at the start of our write ups..!

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: annikaa
Trish,
Its Beautiful..!!
Paradise, Whisper and Avoidance..!!
A Romantic Treat, in the least words possible..! Wow...!

P.S
Plz mention the words like Appy and I have at the start of our write ups..!

thanx anni ...pleasures all mine 😊

Edited by Tellywoodaddict - 8 years ago

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Arti

@Blueheaven1999

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

U all r amazing guys..

Wrote so well.

Piyali.. I want to ask that can we write sm stories on rikara here ..

Or only discussion is allowed here?

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Blueheaven1999
U all r amazing guys..
Wrote so well.
Piyali.. I want to ask that can we write sm stories on rikara here ..
Or only discussion is allowed here?

Hello Dear,

We will stick to off serial writing here..!

We already write in the serial forums..so...!

Of course you can write on RiKara if u want to but make sure its not connected to a serial track as many wouldn't be watching the serial...!! So it would be better using pronouns or Names of your own, I would say...but if u still feel comfortable using character names go ahead.

Also , feel free to comment constructively on the write up of other writers..!

You can choose the words from the list on page 1 or pm me for another set of words, you can put up ur write up here and I will add it to the index on page 1..!

Also there is no time limit as such feel free to post when ever you want..!

I hope I cleared everything..!

Also, you can refer to my write up on page 3 for the format. Title is optional, but plz do mention the words you are writing on at the start ..!!

😊

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Piyali

@.Piyali..

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Blueheaven1999
U all r amazing guys..
Wrote so well.
Piyali.. I want to ask that can we write sm stories on rikara here ..
Or only discussion is allowed here?

Actually this is Annika dii's idea...and she has replied , do check out...

@All : I am gonna read the One shots soon and will comment , they all sound so interesting...

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Purple Feather

@Purple.feather

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hello everyone,🤗

Wanted to post this much earlier but the Internet wasn't working so I'm a bit late..

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|| Cycle rain whisper ||

~ || My Escape || ~

The rain is light and I am walking on a rough mud path, surrounded with so many trees. I don't know how I ended up here because last I remember I went to sleep.

It's beautiful here, I can hear every chirp of the birds and sounds of crickets, every whisper of leaves as the winds picked up. It's peaceful.

As the rain washes away every speck of dirt, I realise that it's so green and then Its bright as the sunlight filters through the trees to the floor. The sun has just come out from behind the dark clouds; the leaves cradled tiny water droplets as they shined like diamonds, I could still. In a distance I could hear a waterfall. I've never seen a place like this.

As children we dreamed of cheesy moons and chocolaty clouds filled with treats and ice-creams, but that is not real. What's real is this, the nature and its beauty and I close my eyes and breathe the fragrance of wet mud, it's so fresh.

And when I open my eyes, I am in my bed and it's time for school. This is a cycle that repeats itself everyday as I go to sleep each night and come across this bewitching place because reality is rough and this is my escape, this is my heaven.

By: Sonalika (-Escape-)

I hope it's nice😳

Waiting for feedbacks.😃

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Sanjana

@Sanjana2412

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

The words I got are, Scream, leaves, meeting. So here is my one shot.

"Screams, leaves, meetings. I am fed up of all this. How can she do this to me. To her own mother, who does so?? To be honest I am more worried about her seeing how she behaves these days. Its been a week from where all this started but why does she do so, she talks to me normally then all of a sudden leaves from here and from what I hear from her friends is that she and her cousin meet a guy. What are all these meetings about, I am sure this has got something to do with her weird behavior. Are you even listening." Said Sujata to her husband who was busy working on his laptop. Her husband shuts the laptop and says, "you must have irritated her, why doesn't she behaves so with me, why only with you." Sujata is hurt to hear this from her husband as her daughter was never like this. She wants to know what's wrong with her daughter. She was sure that there is some serious issue.

Same time in a coffee shop.

Aparna (Sujata's daughter) sat with her childhood friend Kartikey and her cousin Pragati. Aparna cries and says, "I saw her, I saw her today. She told me I will have to pay for what I have done to her. My mom is possessed and she doesn't know it." Kartikey and Pragati try to calm her down. Aparna says, "why is she doing this to me. You two were there too, you guys can see her but she is only after me. Why is it so." Kartikey says, "that's because you were the one driving the car. You are solely responsible for the accident." Pragati says, "Kartikey, of you cannot help us so better go from here don't trouble us more." Kartikey says, "its her fault why did she drive the car when she didn't know how to and for your kind information we two were not inside the car, we waiting for her to return and there just before the lane to my house, she hit her with the car." Aparna says, "but I wanted to go to police to confess my crime but you two were the ones who suggested me to drop the idea and you two burrried her in the graveyard so that nobody would know."

Kartikey says, "really so then woman, listen to me, it was all for your well being else you would have been in jail. You get that." Pragati says, "Aparna please tell is what happened today. What did she tell you. What exactly happened." Aparna nods and says, "I went to the dining table, my mother was cooking breakfast for me. I wished her good morning. She was making pancakes. She turned to me to serve me the pancakes. All was going well, I kept the plate in the sink. I put on the tap and that's where all started." Kartikey says, "ohh please one more of your stories." Aparna says, "no its not a story, its truth. As soon as I put on the tap, no water came for few seconds then the tap burst, I turned around to tell my mother that its not my fault that's when I saw her. She was not my mom, it was someone else, I saw her today. So scary was her face. Grey body, Grey face, hair all messed up, she was so scary, then she strangulated me and said, FIRST YOU AND THEN YOUR FRIENDS. I WILL PUNISH YOU ALL ONE BY ONE. And then she let go me. I turned to the door to open it but the door's knob melted and my hand got stuck half into it. I screamed, that's when my mom turned normal and asked me what's wrong dear and I just left from there hurriedly, she asked me where I was going, I didn't dare to turn back I just said meeting and ran away." Aparna cries vigorously.

Realization strikes the other two from what the ghost told to her. They were anyway safe till some time as Aparna was the first target. They both were now equally tensed as Aparna as they were going to face the same events now. They suggested her to see a tantrik, that's when Aparna said, I tried one and the ghost tortured him, the tantrik was fake he ran away. It was of no use fighting from her she shall seek her revenge from all of us. No matter whoever we meet or whatever I do I don't think that there's any way to escape." Kartikey says, "so what shall we do then." Pragati says, "I think we should perform her last rights so that her soul gets peace." All three agree and left in Kartikey's car. They found the body and performed its last rights, they thought that there problem ends here but it was not so.

All three reach Aparna's house with mental satisfaction that they have got rid of the ghost. The three reach Aparna's room and close the door, that's when the power goes, they think it to be a normal power cut and ask Aparna for the candles she tells them they are downstairs in the fridge. Kartikey says, you guys wait I shall bring them here." He tries to open the door but its locked. He asks Aparna and says, "its jammed" he turns his head and sees their heads burning. (He is hallucinating) slowly their whole body catches fire and he screams. The ghost comes and says, "you tried to burn me, its time I burn you three alive. But I guess you are scared to see the conditio. of your accomplices so i have a less painful option for you." Saying so the ghost holds both his arms and scratches her nails on his arms from top to bottom. Thus making him wither in pain.

Someone throws holy water at the ghost and it disappears, the tro is hell scared and has scars. They turn to the person who threw the holy water and turn to find Aparna's dad standing there. He tells them, "I followed you people to the cafe and I heard everything, everything. First you shouldn't have drove like that Aparna and second wear this, this is a holy pendant that I have brought for you three just wear it and about your mother, we shall take her to Balaji temple tomorrow and the excorcism shall be done." The next morning all of them drive to Balaji Temple and the same is done. They come back home, Aparna, Kartikey and Pragati realize what grave mistake they did, they go to a temple apologize for their mistakes, the crime they did in the past, swear never to do such things again and pray for the peace of the soul.

The end

Well this because it is an os so I decided to keep it short. Anyways hope you like it.