Rishbala FF Messed Up In Love completed page23 DT 5/5

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Hi friends I am here back with a new story...It's on supernatural theme ...A vampire...I posted this story on Wattpad . But I am obsessed with rishbala ..So decided to write here.i know pkyek forim have so many vampire stories and may be rishab kundra ..
Won't suit to this role..It's just a try...Please read and drop your views.


Messed Up In Love

PROLOGUE



he took out his fangs from her neck.it was dribbling with fresh blood .He cleaned his lips by licking and he belched.
"That was a nice breakfast"
He sensed someone and turn around
"Oh...You"
"What are you doing rishab?"
"Can't you see ria I was enjoying my breakfast"ridhab Smirked
"Rishab you have to control yourself .What if king came to know about it?"ria
"What will he do my dear sis..He stake me?He won't dare to do it"rishab
"But rish...",ria
"Ria..I said you don't follow me.i am the abandoned prince.you are not supposed to talk with me "rishab
"But rish you are my brother and I love you"ria
"Ria...Hah"he looked at her with concern
"Ria my life ..If I can say it exists ..Is in danger .I don't want my little sister to drag into it"rishab
"Rish..Why can't you come back?"ria
"Ria..I don't want to apologise or not I want to obey his words"rishab
"Rish...But you have to take over the thorne ...Soon or later"ria
"..Don't argue with him..He can't understand.he is such a selfish vampire"Sultan
"Oh..So you were here."rishab
"Yeah... Rish..You couldn't sense m.strange"sultan
Rshab smiled.
"So..sullu...What's up? When will you get married?"rish
"Next week"ria
"Oh.. Congrats "rishab
"don't you think...You Should attend the wedding?"ria
"Ria.."rish
"Father will become furious if you won't come"ria
"Let him be furious enough to kill me ria"rishab
"Y you always run away from your responsibility rishab"Sultan
"Because I hate our community .Thier rules and myself"rishab
"Rish please"ria
"No more arguments "rishab shouted
"Rish"Sultan
"Go away..Before I do anything.take back her to your world Sultan"rishab
He took the girls dead body which he dried up a few minutes back.
"Rish..."ria
He looked back at her angrily.His red eyes said he is really angry and ria know her brother very well.so she decided not to messed up with him.he throw the girls body into the woods and disappeared in a second.ria looked and sighed.sulyan caressed her shoulder
"Let's go..He needs time"sultan
"Yeah...It may not be a vampire year"ria
"Let's hope so"Sultan

Somewhere in India

"Madhu...I told you to stop watching that crap and have your food"trishna
"Trish...Please dear just half an hour .It's going to end"madhu
"Madhs..How much you watch twilight..Don't you get bore?"trish came out of kitchen with some sandwiches for Madhu
"Thank you trish..I won't get bore even if I watch it hundred times"madhu
"You are really crazy madhs"trish
"Yes..I usually dreams about a hot and sexy vampire and fall in love with him .."madhh
"Yeah and you got married with him like Bella and Edward ..Right?"trish
"Yeah..."Madhu Looked at trishna and smiled
"Madhus...There is no vampires exist and it's only a myth dear.why can't you understand it"Trish
"I knowtrishbut at least I can dream about it ."Madhu
"Yes.ofcourse . mom called me to know about your decision"trish
"Why can' t she call me?Moreover I can't take decision without meeting him.My parents choice won't be mine"madhh
"dear.shewants to...But you never give her a chance.you didn't answer her calls.or not want to meet him.then the only way is to call me"trish
"Trish...Why don't you give him a chance?"madhu
"Me..But the alliance is for you .Not me"trish
"You like to get marriedand you like live in USA with a rich husband "madhu
"Yeah..But he is coming for u.now what I have to say ?"trish
"Say mom I am ready for the date"madhu
"Madhs ..Are you sure?"Trish
"Yeah..Ask him to come at Paradise restaurant .We will meet there"madhu
"Yeah..."Trish dialed mom
"Hi Trish... What's up?"mother
"She said yes.. Tomorrow 7 pm "trish
"Really...I.am so happy for her"padmini
"Ok.i will inform him"padmini
"Yeah bye Mom"trish

USA
"Hey rishab... Want to have a drink?"mukund
"No thanks..I had mine on the way"rishab
Mukund sat down near him .
"Hey rish.You looked worried .. What's it?"mukund
"Well...I want a change.i want to shift to somewhere else"riahab
"But y rish...You have a good job and a cozy home .. Moreover a wealthy parents"mukund
"I f**ked up by all these..I just want a change"rishab
"Ok..Then I have a suggestion"mukund
"Where?"riahab
"India"mukund
"India?But y?"rishab
"Well...It's my homeland and the beautiful place .You will love it.i am going to India tomorrow.if u want to join?"mukund
"Yes of course"riahab
"Then come on pack your bags"mukund
"Thanks buddy"rishab
Mukund smiled

India
"Madhu are you wearing this crap ?"trish
"Jeans and shirt...It's the best dress"madhu
"Eww..Wear something girly..Like saree or salwars "trish
"What's the problem with this dress?"Madhu
"Hey..You are going to meet your fiance"trish
"Don't say fiance..I am giving a chance..That's all"madgu
"Ok as you wish"Trish patted on her head and mumbled.."this girl..."
-------;
Flight landed .rk and mukund collected Thier luggage and drives Thier way to home
Rk closely watched the place.
"I think ..I will have lot of fun here..I am getting the sweet scent of blood everywhere .It's driving me crazy"rk thought
He felt his throat dried up
"Want to have a drink?"mukund
"Yeah"rishab
Mukund took out the wine bottle from his bag .riahab tasted it
"No I dnt want this..I want something sweet and hot "his brain yelled out
"What's up rishab"mukund
"Nothing..I was just thinking about...When will we reach your home?"rishab
"Say one hour journey"mukund
"Oh..So I have to wait one hour to quench my thirst"rishab thought
mukundsphone rang.hr took out the phone and said
"Yes..Mom..I am on the way.."mukund
"Yeah he is rishab ..Yeah coming home with me"mukund
He cut the call and placed his phone back in his bag
"Mom always worried about me.he is overprotective"mukund smile
"It's really good to have someone to take care of you"rishab
"Yeah"mukund smiled
"I have never experienced such a warmth from my mother.. it may be because we had no heart and human emotion worth nothing than a mere weaknesses"rishab thought.
After one hour they reached home.
Mukund knelt down for his parents blessings. Rishab looked at them amused
"Human weaknesses"rishab said under his breath .Yet something itched his heart..oops he don't have a heart .Yet he felt something.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
wow chechi..
superb start...
thanks for writing it here..
can i tell you one thing..??
i really wished to read this story in rishbala version..thank you so much..
pls update soon..
thanks for the pm..😊
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Congrats for new story
Superb start
Loved it

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Congratulations for new story.Rishabh is an angry vampire not like his world .He n mukku r coming India .Mukku is the prospective boy for madhu ,the vampire lover she is.
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Rach congrats on the new story.
Awesome start, RK a vampire and Madhu a human, that would be interesting to read.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Originally posted by: aishu007

wow chechi..

superb start...
thanks for writing it here..
can i tell you one thing..??
i really wished to read this story in rishbala version..thank you so much..
pls update soon..
thanks for the pm..😊

Thank you .Will update soon
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Originally posted by: manna43

Congratulations for new story.Rishabh is an angry vampire not like his world .He n mukku r coming India .Mukku is the prospective boy for madhu ,the vampire lover she is.

Thank you manjeet
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Rach congrats on the new story.

Awesome start, RK a vampire and Madhu a human, that would be interesting to read.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya
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Congrats for new story,
Superb start,
Rk is a vampire and Madhu is human,
she loves vampires,
waiting for Rishbala meet
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Hi friends ..I am posting the first part today.. Please read and quote your views
Messed Up In Love

Part 1


"rishab...Please sit"Meeraji
"Thanks aunty"rk
"Well...Did you like India?"Meera
"Mom..He just came here.how.he Know about India"Mukund
"Yeah I forgot it...Well you are Mukunds colleague?"Meera
"Yes and we are room mates too"rk
"Oh...Your Parents?"Meera
"Parents...T..They are at canada"rishab
"Oh...So y are you staying at California?"Meera
Rishab looked at her uncomfortable"oops this human...She is intriguing like a cop..I think she won't leave me without digging my last secret"rk thought
"Ma...We are tired and we want some food.i am starving"mukund
"Oh okay...I am sorry...Take him to his room mukund"Meera
Mukund take rishab to his room.
"Take a shower .I will be back"mukund
"Rk nodded

***********

"Rish ...Don't try that curries..That will be so hot for you..We use lots of spices"mukund
"It's ok..Mukund..I like everything that is hot"rk wincked
Meera looked at them rolling her eyes.
"He meant..Tea,coffee,chilly powder ..Right?"mukund
"Yeah"rk chuckled.
"Mukund..Today by evening ..You have to go and meet that Girl"Meera
"Oh..Today ?"mukund
"Yeah... At 7.presidancy restaurant"Meera
"Yeah...Are you coming with me.. Rish?"mukund
"Me...What's the deal?"rishb
"It's ...Some sort of date...Here we prefer arranged marriage"mukund
"Oh...But it's your date"rishab
"No...I am a little nervous.. Please come with me na"mukund
Meera signalled no
"Okay...I will come with you"rk
Meera staredaat mukund.rk went to wash his hands.
"Mukund..Why did.You want him to come with you.its not good for you beta"Meera
"But y ma?"mukund
"He is really handsome..What if you r would be get interested in him?"Meera
"Ufff... Ma...I want to marry a girl who loves me..If she likes him..Let her go with him"Mukund
"Mukund"Meera
"No more arguments ..Okay"mukund
MRk Smirked"oh...So mother is scared about me .She is afraid of the competition..It's funny..Human and Thier worst thoughts...Thanks to my senses"rk thought
He went back and Smiled mukund.
"Take some rest rish..After that we have to go"Mukund
"Yep"rk went to his room
"I am still hungry.i have to search my favorite food."he licked his lips
He jumped out through the window .
"Thanks for the ring otherwise this sunlight will burn me to death"rk thought.
He saw a girl drooling at him.rk waved his hand and Smiled.he went towards her.
"Wanna hang with me?"rk
Girl Smiled brightly
"You are really beautiful love"rk
"Thanks"the girl blushed
Rk inhaled deeply.."wow... Mouth watering"rk
"What?"girl
He grabbed her by her waist.next minute the girl found herself in a secluded place.
"Wh ..What. ..You ... How you done this?"girl
"Haha. ...Sweet heart...It's not a great deal for me.. Well I want a favour...I am hungry.will u feed me?"rk
"What?"she looked at him petrified..."y...Yes..We will go to some restaurant"Girl
"Restaurant...No I want it from you...Ok..I will take it from you"rk
The girl looked at him with scared eyes.rk got amused by her expression.
"You look beautiful ...When you are scared"he reached her in a blink.she looked at him startled.
"H..How...You do that?"girl
Rk laughed.
"Now please be calm and stay relaxed..I am going to take my meal...Well it hurts but if you stay relaxed it will be like a pin prick ..And if you fidgeted ..I don't know..How to explain you can realize it by your own"rk
He pressed her to a tree and moved her hairs from her neck
"What are you doing?"girl
"Me?...I explained you"rk.she saw his glazy blue eyes turned red and his canines protruding.
"V ... Vampire"girl
"Yes...You recognized me correctly"rk
The girl started to fidget.she try to shove of his hands.
"No...I told you don't... Relax ..I won't drain out you.just a pint ...Okay.. It won't hurt trust me."rk
"I will turn to a vampire?"girl
"No ...I won't inject my venom into you...So relax.."rk
"No... Please ..Leave me.. Please"girl
"Ok...If you are not cooperating. .I will do it by myself"rk pushed her and in a second.. She felt the sharp pain on her neck.she try to cry out..But rk cupped her mouth.she heard him sucking out her blood.soon the pain turned into a nice seducing feeling.the girl moaned.
Rk took his fangs out and looked at her.girl pushed his head back to her wound.. Wanting for more..Rk again Pierce her with his fangs.
"Thanks sweet heart...I am full and thanks for this sweet yummy meal"he licked and cured her wound.
The girl looked at him mesmerized.she hugged him and try to unbutton his shirt.rk caught her hand.
"No...Love...Only food..You humans are only meant for food.so sorry"rk
He cupped her face and looked into her eyes and erased her memory about the whole incident.
"Bye"in a second he reached back in his room.
Rk heard a knock at the door.he Opened the door and saw mukund looking at him terrified.
"Blood"mukund
"What?"rk.he went to the mirror and saw a smear of blood in his chin.
'Oh..I was trimming and I heard the knock and it just bleed'rk
"Ok...Get ready ..We have to reach there by7"mukund
"Yes..."rk
**********
"Madhu... Wait..Why you want me to come with you?"Trish
"I am nervous"Madhu
"Nervous..The madhubala malik is nervous..Don't say that.."Trish
"R u coming or not?"Madhu
"Ok.. Madhs ..I will come."Trish

*****

Presidency

"Rk we reserved seat number five"mukund
"Yeah"rk
They say on the chair.mukund looked at the watch.
"R u nervous?"rk
"Yes..A little bit"mukund
"Calm Down..It's just a date"rk
"Yeah...Rk I feel like to use washroom..I will come back in a minute"mukund left

Madhu looked for seat number five
"Hey madhs..Thats him"Trish
"Yeah...Let's go"Madhu and Trish went to rk
"Hello"Madhu
"Hi.."rk
"Are you from USA?"Madhu
"Yep"rk
"What a man..He didn't ask us to sit"Madhu thought
"Well..You are for a date..?"rk
"Yeah"Madhu
"Ok..Please take your seat.. Mukund went to washroom ..He will come back soon"rk
"Oh...So you are not the one"Trish
"No..."rk Removed his Ray-Ban sunglass and hanged it on his T-shirt.
"Wow...Glazy blue eyes.. Like Sapphire"Madhu thought
"You are not an Indian?"Madhu
"No.."rk
"Oh..."Madhu
"I am madhubala malik"Madhu
"Rishab kundra"rk
"Well..It's more like an Indian name"madhubala
'Oh...My.parents were at India..When I born and so.They adopted this name"rk
"Oh...That's nice"Trish
Mukund came back and seated
"You made friends"mukund
"Yeah..But who is your fiance?"rk
Trishna pointed Madhu. Mukund looked at Madhu ..But Madhu was looking at rk.
Mukund cleared his tongue and everyone looked at him.
"Well...Girls what you like to eat?"mukund
"Anything"Madhu
Mukund placed the order.
"I think we should shift the other table ...Ms.trisna"rk
"Yeah"trishna followed rk to the other table.madhu was still drooling at rk.
Mukund again cleared his throat.madhu looked at him
"Well...I have only one month vacation..I am planning for marriage in a week .So that we get sometime to know each other.i can't take you to US now"mukund
"Whose marriage?"Madhu
"Me and you?"mukund
"What?R u mad..I.just said we can Talk..And I will think about the Marriage later.and you are planning honeymoon?"Madhu
Rk read her lips and smirked.
"Why are you smiling?"Trish
"No just remember some joke from a movie"rk
"Oh..."Trish
"I think this is going to over soon"rk
"What?"Trish
"This madhubala and mukund date"rk
"How you know?"Trish
"I guessed"rk
"Oh..So you guess they will marry ?"Trish
"Definitely no"rk
"Really"Trish asked sarcastically
"Yeah look at your sis face..Can't you see that..She is looking at me more than mukund"rk laughed
"No...She is not such a girl to drool on some random guy"Trish
"Ok.. What ever..But you can hear her praising me tonight"Trish
"No.. She won't.."Trish
"Bet you"rk
"Yeah..10000 RS"Trish
"Yep."rk forwarded his hand and trishna touched on his .She felt coldness in his palm.
"Your hand ...It's so cold"Trish
"Yeah..It's because your palm is so hot"rk snapped back.

**
"Madhu what are you saying...Mother said our alliance is confirmed"mukund
"May be she had confirmed..Not me"Madhu
"Madhu... But y you don't like this alliance?"mukund
"Look mukund..I am not ready to marry you because I have my own dreams".Madhu
"What dreams?"mukund
"Whatever it is ..We won't work..So goodbye and find out someone else"Madhu stood up .She went to trishna and grabbed her hand.
"Madhu ..What's it?"trishna
"Come let's go...This will not work.."Madhu pulled her.rk looked at Trish with a smirk.
Trishna glared back at him.
"Hey Trish don't forget it..."rk
"We won't meet again"Trish
"It's matter of money .So I will find you out"rk
"Okay..Here is my phone number"Trish wrote it on a tissue paper.
"Thanks..But be honest "rk
"Yes"Trish
"Bye Trish...Bye madhs"rk
Madhu pulled trishna to the parking lot.
"Madhu..Leave my hand"Trish
"What was that?"Madhu
"What?"Trish
"You and that blue eyed man?"Madhu
"Oh...Rk..It was just some chatting not and all"trishna looked away
"Trish..Why you gave him your number?"Madhu
Madhu felt a breathe behind her .She startled and looked back.
"You...How you came here...Like appearing from thin air?"Madhu
"No...You were intriguing your sis..When I came here.so you didn't notice"rk
"Oh..Well I was just asking her.."Madhu
"No problem babe .. Continue"rk wincked and waved his hand.madhu forget to take breath for a few seconds

****"**
"Finally back at our apartment"Madhu
"Madhu what I have.to tell ma?"Trish
Madhu switched on the TV and started watching twilight.
"Madhu..."trishna switched off the TV"answer me"Trish
Madhu again switched on
"Trish...Look at Edward...The Man..Rk have same features na..Pale skin..Perfect glazy eyes... Beautiful chiseled jaws ..A perfect body..And everything reminds me a cool ..Hot , handsome , sexy vampire"Madhu
"Madhu...?"Trish
"I think I want some one like him"madhh
Next second Trishnas phone rang.she looked at the unfamiliar number flashing.she took the call
"Yes Ms trishna...I won the bet ..Right?"rk
"Yeah..But how do you Know?"Trish
"I Know girls very well"rk
"Oh really"Trish
"Yeah..now gave me my money"rk
"But..I don't know.you address"Trish
"Open your door"rk
"What?"Trish
"Open your apartment door"rk
Trish opened the door and saw him leaned to the wall and Smirked at her.before Trish could say anything he entered in the house.rk saw Madhu munching popcorn and watching movie.she didn't notice rk.
"Trish...Look Edwards skin.its like rk"Madhu
Rk leaned on the couch she was sitting and leaned to her ear"really?"
Madhu startled and jumped from the couch spilling popcorn all over.rk laughed.
"Y..You...Here?"Madhu
"Yes..I have some deal with your sis"rk
"What deal?'Madhu
"Sorry it's personal"he wincked at her and Madhu blushed.
Madhu looked at Trish .Trish changed her glance.
"Trish..Can you get me some water?"rk
"Yes sure.."Trish went to kitchen.
Rk sat down on the couch ."please sit madhs"rk
Madhu sat down and looked at TV
"Oh..So you are an Edward fan?"rk
"Not only Edward..I am a vampire fan"Madhu
"What?..Oh really..Have you ever seen a vampire?"rk
"No..i"Madhu
"They don't exist girl"rk
"How do you know?"Madhu
"Well..I didn't saw one "rk
"That doesn't means they don't exist"Madhu
Trishna came out with water
"Don't argue with her rk...She is crazy...You know her dream is to fall in love with some vampire and marry him"Trish laughed
"Oh...That's a nice dream.."rk
Madhu glared at trishna.
"Ok..Trish where is my money?"rk
"Money?"Madhu
"I said you personal"rk
"Ok"Madhu
Trishna went to her room
"You smell good"rk
"What?"Madhu
"No..I just ..Which perfume you are using?"rk
"Perfume?"Madhu
"No... Natural?"rk
"Are you insane?"Madhu
Rk laughed.trish came out with money.rk stood up to leave
"Ok...Bye girls.c u soon..Madhu be prepared to become a vampire s wife"rk Left
Madhu and Trish looked at each other awestruck


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