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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Wow i had no idea such a beautiful writer was hidden in you! This was too wonderful to explain... its stolen my heart. It had everything a kriyam fan needed. And it had such accurate portray of charctaters and exhilarating representation of emotions... thank you for writing! I hope you write more... i may write a kriyam holi oneshot, and if i do i hope you read! X


This is really a lot coming from a writer like you!! I'm glad you liked it.
Of course I would read it!! It would be nice to see your perspective on it. The different the better.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P


Oh Anjali babes, your comments make my day 🤗
Haha I knew you would ask this!! Don't tell me you haven't imagined their kiss in your head so many times before??😉 because I've thought of it and this kriyam is way more forward than in TV 😛

Kiss!! I have imagined many things..Can't be too Frank here😉..I'm also in d gutter mind race only.. We're all birds of d same feather..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Kiss!! I have imagined many things..Can't be too Frank here😉..I'm also in d gutter mind race only.. We're all birds of d same feather..

Wohi toh, ek kiss se Hamara kuch nachi ho Sakta because humari gutter overflow ho Rahi hai 😆 ek Boond paani se kya hoga..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

Wohi toh, ek kiss se Hamara kuch nachi ho Sakta because humari gutter overflow ho Rahi hai 😆 ek Boond paani se kya hoga..

Exactly..But CVS ko kaun samjhaye..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P


I'm glad you liked it. I added more romance than I originally planned because of your demand 😆
So I hope you don't have a complain.
Imagination is the key. It will take you everywhere, so don't stop! 😉


Yeah again thnx 4 the romantic vibes 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was awesome... I loved how jealous Saiyyam was when she started turning to Yuvaan, serves him right after throwing that platter away 😆 Saiyyam couldn't escape his lady love and fell right into her trap. Loved the idea of having this song in the background, enabled me to visualise the scene perfectly especially those lyrics fit just right on those two! ❤️ And the kiss scene was just ☺️ I've realised that this guy can only be treated by having a taste of his own medicine, he felt her plight when she forced a kiss on him


Thank you so much for this OS Pooja, I hope Holi sequence is as fun as this shot, but CVs know just when and how to break our hearts 🥺 Keep writing more, would love to read more of your work on KriYam 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS...
This is sooo good...
This has everything in it...
Confession/Romance/Fight/Love
Superrr...
Loveeeddd it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Amazing OS...
This is sooo good...
This has everything in it...
Confession/Romance/Fight/Love
Superrr...
Loveeeddd it...


Aww! Thank you so much. I was rushing a little bit towards the end so didn't get to describe in too much detail.. IF i write SS, I will surely add more meaningful dialogues. And thank you again for liking😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u so much Pooja for the link...
if u havnt given me the link I would have missed reading such an amaZing n beautiful story kriyam ...
loved it seriously...
it would have been great if we got to see this in the show too...
it was really sweet...
the kiss was 😳
do write more...

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