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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow i had no idea such a beautiful writer was hidden in you! This was too wonderful to explain... its stolen my heart. It had everything a kriyam fan needed. And it had such accurate portray of charctaters and exhilarating representation of emotions... thank you for writing! I hope you write more... i may write a kriyam holi oneshot, and if i do i hope you read! X

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divyaak123

@divyaak123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter
Wow i had no idea such a beautiful writer was hidden in you! This was too wonderful to explain... its stolen my heart. It had everything a kriyam fan needed. And it had such accurate portray of charctaters and exhilarating representation of emotions... thank you for writing! I hope you write more... i may write a kriyam holi oneshot, and if i do i hope you read! X

wen will u...?canu pls write it 2day or 2morrow if u can?sorry 4 being greedy...but v r not at all getting any kriyam scenes also...so only...these ffs n os help...

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Faeeqa
This was amazing Pooja!! It had everything, Kriyam holi scenes, romance and even a confession! If they showed an episode like this in the show I would be very satisfied lol.
I loved the romance scenes, they made me blush so much 😆. I could seriously imagine jealous Sayyam 😳 And Krishna was so bold! Loved them both in this. Garlands scene was so cute and original too. Why can't the cvs think of stuff like this?

Beautifully written OS. Hoping you write some more on Kriyam!

Haha yeah even i was blushing when writing it 😆 I had to control myself.

Episode like this is only a dream, faeeqa. We are no where near a confession..

I thought that it was a bit rushed because it's an Os but I'm sure you guys could fill in the gaps with your imagination 😉

I'll see one day if I get bored again..lol

I'm waiting for you to write your next chapter 😛

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .Metaphor.
Omg omg omg...
M getting vibes goosebumps butterflies n why not...☺️

Thnx a looot pooja 4 dis.. M obsessddd.. Jstz luuuvd it.

Especially the kiss scene was 2 much..

I don't know why 2 say more..

Again in the dream world of kriyam

Now my mind is going 2 play its gutter game by thinking of the next scene after ur story ☢️☺️

I'm glad you liked it. I added more romance than I originally planned because of your demand 😆

So I hope you don't have a complain.

Imagination is the key. It will take you everywhere, so don't stop! 😉

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shiney19
This is amazing Pooja!! I loved it! It has everything we would want to see! Romance, jealousy and confession. Seriously it would be amazing if we got something like this on holi.

Ok, I'm going to read it again now! 😳

Thanks Shaz! Yes, personally I think a relationship can't be real unless you have all of these component happening together.

CVs aren't even focusing any one part of their relationship..not even developing their friendship then how can we expect a confession

Haha can't believe you read I again

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: divyaak123
this means a lot...😛...thnku so much...4 this wonderful piece of writing...thnku 4 giving us kriyam holi...which v r not going 2 get on show...

You are welcome Divya. I hope it was up to your expectations. The 18+ stuff is just for you to imagine because I would faint writing it 😆

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vinlora
Beautiful os. ...loved it so much...dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hai yaar...heartbeat raised😉 thank u dear...well krishna knows what coming up next but we don't know na ...so can u plz let us know what coming up next 😉😉 gutter mind😉 plz continue this os...

You are welcome!! And I should thank you for reading.

Haha! Omg all of you here have gutter minds. For now, this is enough. Just thinking about them in the same bed is making me blush

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: inshirah
Awesome 👏
Really loved reading it 😆 keep it up... 👏

Thanks a lot! Good to see a silent reader commenting 😉

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Oh my God!! So perfectly written OS.. After all my sister cum frnd wrote it..Krishna always has to go out of her way for Saiyyam..But..Dis is not d first time?? How?? Plzz don't tell me I missed a Kriyyam KISS!!

Oh Anjali babes, your comments make my day 🤗

Haha I knew you would ask this!! Don't tell me you haven't imagined their kiss in your head so many times before??😉 because I've thought of it and this kriyam is way more forward than in TV 😛

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: parboni
Another beautiful writing on KriYam that I read.Why can't CVs show some KriYam stuff like this? Jealous,possessive Saiyyam and bold Krishna-what a combination! Hope to read more.

Yes this is the ideal/perfect combination but cvs are so kanjoos yaar.

There are much better writers than me so I'm sure we will get all our fantasy fulfilled 😉