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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Lara long time no? 😳 But better late than never catched up last few chapters and have to say loved it every single one of them.
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Ahem so Sumo madam successful managed to rescue Adi and as well as got a free gift for herself who turned out as the only son of her favourite chef and idol. Ok dude is crazy but I love him bas🤣 and jealous Shravan was cute something i wanted to see in the show but what got was an jealous, insecure and insensitive jerk. 😡 Khurana was defeated too easily agree with Shravan there. I mean he is a devil and devil's don't go down so easily. It's hard to believe.
Then Pushkar Peda managed to create a complete new dish with Pretty Preeti. Terrific 🤣 oh boy the office scene boss brothers running away with one of bosses wife running behind them with a hammer in her hand buwahaha 🤣 employees must have good fun watching this drama then comes a flying hammer breaking the glass of a window but even after that poor Pushkar didn't managed to come out unscathed he did ended up having a black eye courtesy Shravan much to giants delight 🤣
And then next victim to Sumo's assault poor Vagga well wrong timing buddy to mention about loopholes to the wife cities finest lawyer with whom even lawyer sahab himself wouldn't dare to mess 😆 Kameeni aunty k toh kya kehne full of poison as usual and Shravan boy glad u stopped before you reached to the point of no return but even having those thought left me with mixed feelings about Sumo leaving you on one hand I feel sorry for you and on the other hand glad that finally Sumo had enough of it and left even if for a short while to return back to you. Well you kind of deserve it. Kameeni aunty back to her antics mentioning Carol as wedding planner and all praises she had for her flopped terribly by her own son Ramnath he is such an amazing father in law here were as in show toh he used to behave like an evil saas and last bit Shravan 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago


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This chapter is dedicated to - Niceson 🤗



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Chapter 47



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Because Lambu doesn't know the meaning of subtle. 😎

I apologize for not replying even a single comment yet, but I'll start doing it now. Thanks a lot for your likes and comments, whenever I need encouragement what I do is read your comments. They are like energy drinks for me, so keep them coming. ❤️

If you enjoyed this chapter of rainstorm, and thunders, and the much needed talk - please don't forget to press the like button and post a comment.🤗 Tell me which thing you liked the most from this chap, that will help me so much to write in future and also improve things for the better, it also helps me to focus on what the readers like the most. Means you get more of your desired stuff.

Things in this story is quickly escalating and weaving towards the final climax. Guess, who will return?😈 In flesh!🐷

Till then take care.
Lots of love,
Lara.

P.S. As usual, PMs will be given to those who've liked and commented on the last chapter. Tada!









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Posted: 8 years ago
Me first!
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You never fail to amaze me with the content, a wide variety. From passion to humor, love to angst, this story has it all. But this part tickled my funny bone. No matter how serious it got, I ended up letting out a chuckle. Here are a few of my personal favorite instances -
1. Big boy. Yes, I did let out a giggle there, but I found it endearing at the same time 😳
2. Wasted ox. Like really? Categorical. 😆
3. Husband as pure as a freaking lamb. 🐷 That was epic. I literally imagined Shravan bleating there. 🤣 Apologies.
4. Gender discrimination. Did the freaking lamb forget that Sumo was speaking for him, for a change? Why complain? 😆
5. Blasted shoe. 🤣 Even the shoe was unable to escape Sumo's wrath. RIP the blasted shoe. 😵
6. And the final one of all - bipolar buffoon. Hands down Lara! 👏🤣 Congratulations! For you succeeded in pushing me off the chair, albeit unintentionally. But I'm not complaining 😃

Now, for the intense lines.
1. Dead. Yes, you killed all of us here, with that line. No comment on that 👏
2. The shrill curtains, lightning and thunder. Bravo!
3. A vulnerable Shravan. 😳 How could he love her so?
4. The blasted phone, now. 😲
5. Ah, chivalry. Could you parcel this guy over? 😳

Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Waiting for the next. I think Khurana is back! 🥱

Cheers,
Nuts
Edited by nuttynuts - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
I like the setting of this update a lot, it resembles their life.
My favorite dialogue for this chapter: I love u but I love myself too. I love that suman was, is and will always take herself as number 1 priority in life. I love this.
I think sharavan mother will be back.
Looking forward to read next chapter.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh that was such an honest conversation.

One part of me hopes Suman goes back with Shravan... that she is not able to send him back alone...

The other, more sensible part believes in what she says. Thodi doori zaroori hai

Is it some Khurana going to make a reentry? I always thought that loop is still not closed unconvincing ly.

Lovely update... although quite short after such a long wait

Love
Shveta
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww. ..shravan. ...sumo. ..poor babies. . Hugs to bother they need it.
They talked. .thank god.

Sumo, you are not going to get rid of this big baby, he has finally found you...not letting you go.

Let's see how sumo gets her space.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww Lara u r so sweet😛...TnQ TnQ...A thousand times thank you for dedicating this chapter to me...I was way more than happy ...It was really kind of u to do it... ur writing was awsm as always ..I kinda feel bad for Shravan ..He loves her so much tht he can't even think about living without Suman for a minute😭...Ma heart goes to Shravan..N Suman is also hurting at the same time... plzz take them out of this situation soon...U really know how to add every emotions to ur story👏...I was smiling at the part where u mentioned Pushkar laughing his a** off even though the chapter was sad ...Once again thank you ...N am sorry for being late😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful 👍🏼 The storm thunders resemblestheir tumultuous relation...glad though they had a Heart to heart convo and an assurance that sumo will return... Though i wish her to go back home with shravan...im glad they taking some sPace... 😊
Waiting for ur next update😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
thats so correct lambu really dont know meaning of subtle😆😆

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