FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 75

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Posted: 8 years ago


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS CHAPTER TO ME...</font>
Feeling so overjoyed. Hopefully I will try to give my review in best possible manner..

Now coming to the story..
From the name of the chapter I guess Shravan ne kuch panga to kiya hoga 😉
After living with Shravan sumo's feelings about Tiwari killa changed and now she can't feel Tiwari killa as her home now any more and it's due to Shravan that she can't feel the vibe..
For every relationship, distance is as necessary as intimacy sometimes.
Beautiful line 👏 So true.. Some time you need that space to realise the importance of that person in your life. .
Here sumo wants that space so that she can make up her mind to forget what Shravan did and give their relationship a chance again and on other side Shravan should realise that he can't make mistakes like that otherwise sumo can live him Forever..
Negativities must be ripped off from the depth of their roots and in the soonest possible time. So true 👏
How all of sudden our dumb preeti started knowing that there might be some problem between Shravan and suman 😃
Preeti and pushkar are very fast, pehle hi engagement kar liya 😉
The secret path of Shravan and sumo is now being used by pushki and preeti 😃
Anger really blinded Shravan so much that just to teach sumo a lesson and to destroy her Self Respect he went on to sleep with another girl but good that he didn't cross his line..
Irritating vivek getting in to my nerves 😡
Kamini praising carol but good that pushkar shut her mouth up 😉
Carol might be anything but not sumo whom Shravan loves.. Sumo should not compare herself with that girl because what she has carlo didn't have that...
Ramnath stand for suman 👏 yes carlo might have everything but she got it from her father unlike sumo who got everything through her hardwork..
Bewada Shravan, sumo tumne Shravan ka kya haal bana diya 😃
Continue soon and thanks for pm

Love
Shrujani
Edited by Sumodreamer05 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres
First of all, Am truly Sorry Lara for unressing this late...You have even updated next one too n here I am ... 😕
Showwiii 🤢

Coming to upiii...!!
A tight 🤗 to you ya.
Brilliant one bro.. 👏

So Sumo had left for TK.
My heart goes out for Sumo...Isnt it the worst feeling for a woman?
A husband whom you loves like no other does something like this , even though in a fit of rage or hatred!!
But am glad that your Sumo is much more sensible here...Not taking a haste decision...She does need some space , for herself..for him n for them!!

Negativities must be ripped off from the depth of their roots and in the soonest possible time ..❤️
So true.!!

Preeti...Lil sensible here 😆
The bun in her lil sister's metamorphical oven was the proof of it ... 🤣

Must have been burglar blood running through their veins.. 🤣 🤣
Oh My My..!!
Lara this is incredible... 😆

Sumo's insecurities, her fear is justified here.It is natural to feel this way.

This Vivek...Job at PTC 😆
This Vivek...Something is weird...Or just my imagination??

Sumo in blood red saari...
Her mixed emotions..Her anticipation...Her worry, anxiety,...Beautifully penned down dear...❤️❤️

Shravan didnt came... 😕
Pushkie Pie... 😳
He knows his Bhaiya-bhabhi too well to miss anything.
You did hit the right spot bro... 😊
Shravan is indeed like a volcano...A blasting one!!
His isolation...😕

Kamini n her oh so perfect, sophisticated Carol... 😡
Oh My.!!...Sumo's insecurities... 🤢
Comparison with that cheepster...But it was her insecurity!
It was not a road covered with cheese n stars after all...Loved it!!

Ramnath Malhotra...Oh Man!!
He is soo sweet.I couldnt hate him in the show too...A very caring father he was.😊

Pushkar ...I sooo love him ❤️
Generous Woman... 🤣

I sooo damn loved how Sumo's thoughts wavered here by you buddy...Amazingly Penned down
What had Shravan ever seen in me?
What had Shtavan ever seen in that woman?
...Soo Loved it bro 👏
Kamini ... 😆

That bone-chilling scream...I can imagine Shravan here sending shivers down my spine.
The Ghost of she-who-must-not-be-named...LMAO 🤣 🤣
Oh God Lara...How you do it girl...you write love, pain, suffering, fun n much more fun in just one upii!!
Just Love you ya .. 🤗
You are damn talanted... ⭐️

That SUMAN...Oh 😳
Shravan came...But Drunk...OMG!! 😆
In a family function...Brother's engagement... 😆

I was a virgin until you...Shit!!! 🤣 🤣
That was quite Bold though 😆
Sooo Loved the reactions... 😆
Ramnath Malhotra... 🤣
Kamini n Pushkar... 🤣 🤣

What a Blasting one Lara...Loved it to the core ❤️
Hell exited to read next chappi... 😳

Thanks for the pm dear 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mind blowing update lara
Sumo left shravan. But soon she start missing him. Distance really need to realise the feeling.
Poor shravan, he start destroy himself. He can't bear the distance from sumo. He drunks. Sumo try to hide their personal matter from family but shravan's outburst...ohhh It really embarrassing for her...
You penned each things beautifully.
Sumo's fear, sumo herself compare with Carol, her thoughs, "what had shravan ever seen in me"
ramnath praising Suman, kamini cheapo, poor shravans condition very well
Really loved the update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
"The concept of home had changed for her since a while now, probably because it's a person instead of a place now"❤️
Sumo hired Vikas Khanna's only son Vivek Khanna😆... Excited to see shravan's reaction on this
Kamini Chachi wanted Carol as preekar's wedding planner and was praising her just to make Sumo feel worse😡😡..But unknowingly ramnath and pushkar handled it well
Shravan must have screamed when he couldn't find Sumo and isolated himself😔
"The ghost of she-who-must-not-be-named"🤣
Drunk Shravan's honest confession shocked everyone😆
Kamini and ramnath's reaction was epic
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lara...every time I read ur story u make me remember why I like ur story n wait for ur update ...I know many people have complimented on ur writing skill so its not new for you but i would like to say it again YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER ...even though this chap was serious on its own way the last part was quite hilarious the part where shravan confessed to sumo that he was a virgin before he met her and also ramnath's reaction ...every great thing has to come to an end eventually but i am sure you will end this story in the most absolute fitting way this story deserves ...dont stop writing on shraman after you finish this FF plzzz...wow first time i ve written this much of a big post 😆
Edited by Niceson - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the update thanks for the pm.
it was good loved how worried suman was for shravan
i cringed and laughed when shravan made that statement infront of everyone.
poor shravan and suman they are going to be picked on
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Plz update d next chapter soon...dying to read what will Suman do now...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read the last 5 parts in a go...
Absolutely brilliant writing. ... just loved it...I'm just hooked to this story... very interesting...
Happy that shravan has not actually cheated on suman... hope sumo soon return back to shravan...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Don't want to be too pushy or demanding...
Par kya Karen Dil hai ke Manta nahi...
Pls pls pls update soon...
You must be getting bored of listening to yr praises...
But truly speaking...What a fabulous writer u r...
Love the way u hv knitted this story...
Making me fall in love with yr writing as the story slowly unfolds...
Ws a lil heartbroken when u mentioned abt da story advancing towards its end... Bt am sure u'll b ready with another one...
Happy writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unressed on pg 98...
Sorry kuch zyaada lamba hogaya!
I got carried away 😕

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