Ishra ff_Galti se mistake [updated part 6 on page 52 on 23rd sep]

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Amreen99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Viji di update soon waiting for update

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: keyzest
Superb
Ishu z highly modernized carefree girl
Raman z like sruck by 33000volts
Poor him
Loved da rollercoaster ride
How he was screaming to save him
Ishu cnt cntrol her laughter
Dey went to her dance centre
Rmanz blood boils seeing how mani z moving wth ishu
He agrees to go for da party coz he cnt keav ishu alone wthani
Mmm posssessive haan

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: divz9769
superb update
ishra are totally opposite to each other raman is veterinarian while ishita is non veterinarian ishita is party person but raman is homely person raman didn't liked ishita hugging her friends he was cursing mani and wanted to punch ishra spend whole day together loved ishita's care for raman
pls continue soon
thanks for the PM

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Muskan193
such a long update dear
it was so lovely..
poor raman literally ishita ne raman ki band Baja di
he was so tired
but don't want to leave her alone with abhi..
he was cozy
continue soon dear...
thanks for pm me

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: fSharm
Awesome...
Lovely update...
Raman is sooo possesive about ishita...
He didnt want ishita to b alone with mani..
So even when he was tired he went to party with ishita...
Interesting..

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
cute update dear

raman is shocked completely after he knowing many thing about ishu

raman is too good and be like kid

so much possessiveness towards ishu

ishu is enjoyed her life fully

ishra scene was cute

like mani his friends also annoying

love raman jealous

i feel " its simbu film poda podi " may be i am wrong too sorry for bad guess

continue soon dear

Thank you lakshmi...
Yea it is that movie...

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Divanru
Lovely update .
Ishra went for s day out .
They enjoyed fully .
Raman is vegetarian while ishita is non vegetarian😆
Raman was tired but still ishita too her with him to her dabce studio
Raman was jealous niyuceibg ishita close to Mani.
Ishita is a carefree girl while Raman likes her but not her nature .
They party of whole night .
Update soon

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: DikshaN
waiting for the next update
😊

Vl Update shortly diksha..

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Amreen99
Viji di update soon waiting for update

Ready with the update...
Vl Update shortly dear...

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divani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello friends...
Back with the next part...
Do post your views on it..
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading...
- Love viji...

Part 5:

Ishita reached home and threw her bag carelessly on the floor and threw herself over the couch...

Mihika : kya hua akka... You look so tired aur raat ghar bhi nahi aay ho... You partied without me... She asked with a angry pout...

Ishita : Oh yeah Miku... You know yesterday was a great day... I just enjoyed it to the core...

Mihika : Oh wow akka... With whom mani and friends?..

Ishita : Nahi Miku, raman ke saath...

Mihika : Ohhh... Akka... Kya baat hai... Pehle ladai, aur lift mein milan... Aur ab date and all huh... She asked teasing her..

Ishita : aisa kuch nahi hai... Raman sirf mera dost hai.. She said with a straight face..

Mihika : then tell how many fights did you have with him...

Ishita : how many fights matalab...

Mihika : akka... The ishita iyer ko koi nahi jel sakta hai... That too for a whole long day... Either you would involve in a verbal fight or kisike mooh tod kar aati hai... Har baar ye hi hota haina... She said laughing at her sister for which she earned a glare in return...

Ishita : how mean Miku... Do I look like a ladaku...

Mihika : ofcourse isme doubt kya hai... She said and running from there fearing her sisters reaction... Bye akka, college ke liye late ho raha hai...

Ishita : yeh Miku bhi na... How rude she is... She walked towards her bedroom cursing her sister under breath...

Ishita (St): but Miku is also right .. I have never felt so happy and comfortable with anyone... I would always end up fighting and slapping all stupid men around because they would try to flirt with me...Or try to take advantage of me... Par raman is not that kind... He is a perfect gentlemen... In lift also he never tried to cross his limits though we were alone... And yesterday the whole day... He took such a good care of me... She was Re immersing the beautiful moments spent by them... She remembered the way he shouted in fear in the Rollercoaster ride... Ek dum budhu ho tum raman... I just lov... She stopped in middle thinking of what she was trying to express... Love?... Do I really love him...May be he is the man I was waiting for ... I think I am falling for you Mr.raman Kumar bhalla...She said blushing cutely...

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On the other side raman aman reached home and settled on the couch in living room fully exhausted...

He was surrounded by his friends who were looking at him like a museum piece...

Raman : kya... Aise kya dekh rahe ho tum log...

Bala : kuch nahi... Kal hi tum ne bola tumhe pyaar hua aur going for a date with your love...

Raman : toh..

Romi : aur aap kal raat ko bhi ghar nahi aay ho... And now you look so tired and exhausted... He said In a naughty tone..

Raman : toh kya hai.. He asked irritated

Romi: aisa kal raat ko kya hua that you are sooo tired... He asked winking at him...

Raman : idhar aao, il tell you want happened yesterday he said all frustrated and showing his fist ready to punch...

Bala: kya hai raman... Why are you so irritated... Aisa kya hua...

Raman : arey Bala mat poocho yaar... Woh Ladki na toda sa bhi mere type ki nahi hai... Pubs, casino party, boyfriends what not... I dont think this will work out... He said getting up from the couch and walking to and fro...

Bala : that's ok dude... Forget about her... Chill tumhe zaroor koi achi ladki milegi...

Raman : arey Bala... Aise kaise forget... Ishita toh mera jaan hai... How can I forget... You know Bala woh kitni cute hai.. kabhi dekho kate rahti hai... I just love her cute smile... Jab woh mujhe dekh kar hasti haina tab mere chehre pe bhi muskan Lati hai...

Romi : then she is perfect match for you bhai... You just spend more time with her.. Then it will workout...

Raman : arey romi... Time spend kaise karoon... Tabhi dekho uske friends ke saath chipak the rahti hai... Woh mani Sala uska maut toh mere hi haat se hone wala hai... She is not my type of girl...

Romi and Bala was totally confused by his behavior ...

Bala : abey pagal hogai hai kya... Tumhe woh ladki pasand ya na...

Raman :I like her yaar... She is full of life... She just enjoys her life... He said dreamily...

Par I just hate her friends... Aur ek dance ki hai uss kuthe mani ke saath usse dekh kar toh mera hosh ud gai yaar... She is not my type of girl...

Romi: bhai sach mein aap pagal hogai...

Raman : arey you guys did not understand what am trying to explain?.. Come here let me explain... He took the marker pen and went near the white board that was hanged on the wall..

Bala: ab kya hamara class lene waale ho kya...

Raman : haan... Dekho Yeh Hai Meri ishita... He said writing her name in middle of the board aur yeh iska pros aur yeh cons... He said drawing a line middle and splitting the board in two column...

Aur uski pros hai... Ishita bohot hi cute aur sundar hai.. And she is my jaan I love her... Aur I am happy when she is around me... She is totally a kid...

Ab dekho yeh ishita ka cons hai... Dance,
Choti dresses, late night party, pubs aur uski kamine friends...

Romi: arey bhai what are you trying to tell...

Raman : wait have patience... She has lots of pros over cons... So now what I will do is... I will stop her from dancing with that kamina friends of hers... Then automatically all her cons will vanish...Then she will be My ishita just the way I like her...

Bala : par raman... Will she give up dance for your sake... Uss din party mein bhi she was speaking about some competition... Aur uska dream hai dance something and all... Now if you tell her quit dancing will she do that...

Raman : arey mardalegi woh mujhe... Just wait and watch ab yeh raman Kumar bhalla... Uss ishita iyer ko kaise mrs. Ishita raman Kumar bhalla banoonga...

He immediately dialed ishita's number... His friends were looking at him fully confused without knowing what he was upto...

Raman : hello...

Ishita : hello raman...

Raman : ishita i want to meet you now...

Ishita : raman, just now I reached home... And you were too tired and wanted to rest na...

Raman : yeah, but I wanna meet you now...

Ishita : aisa kya important baat karna hai...

Raman : arey please na yaar... It's about our life... I have to confess something very important to you...

Ishita : our life?.. Confess... Oh god yeh raman kya bolne wala hai... Ufff I love you toh nahi na... She murmured for herself blushing...

Raman : ishita... Are you there...

Ishita : yes... Tell me raman...

Raman : toh tum aarahi ho na...

Ishita : fine... But where?...

Raman : same restaurant... Jo hum kal mile the na...

Ishita : hmmm... Ok see you then... She hung the call...

Raman(St) : ab dekho meri jaan... How I make you mine... He smirked naughtily...

Precap : what will be raman's plan... Will he confess his love to ishita... Will ishita choose raman over dance?...

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