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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow...am speechless...

Superb...yeah no one knows u better than u...and no one can run from their self...

Ending was bang on...

LavSriya

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Masterpiece from C se Cas 😉

He was running for 10 long yrs till he found someone true love OMG kya likha hai. 😃

Beautiful 😛 keep writing 😛

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow!

Pretty brilliant...

A different perspective you shared...

I loved it!

He did run, a really long time...

Well articulated...

Keep these coming!

😛

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Yes wow again Cas 😳

He kept running for 10yrs 😕 that's a really loonnnggg time 😕

Different narative :) interesting read

Don't stop Cas 😳

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Wow! !

I really like your style of writing! !

I am glad he crossed the finish mark ...and was finally home !!

A long run indeed.!!

C se Creative Cas! !

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

amazing Casi bae...!!!
S se supper se bohot uppar vala O se OS...!!!

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Castile2

@Castile2

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Thank you so much guys for your comments! 😳
Really means a lot to me... ⭐️

Individual replies will follow a bit late and yes, I didn't send out PMs for this one @Sanjh! 😆

Till next time
Love
Cas 😊

P.S. guys jinhone res kiya hai abtoh unress kardo! I know I'm not one to say so but still... 😕 😆 😛

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Cas! Amazing job

So grounded to reality

We saw a contrast between the two Shravans- the nerd shy younger one and the topnotch sassy lawyer the bigger one, but never did our minds go to the transition state.

Brilliant!

Only this time, he kept running for ten long years.

And he kept running till he found his home, in the arms of his one true love.

Love all your works

Please keep up the good work

Love

Swa se Swarnima

Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago