RoSid FF: You are Crazy Completed FF - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow all are wonderful updates .Today I was to busy .Outing with my friends ,hospital ,work so couldn't comment really awesome .Omg poor roli she didn't get success in her plan for four times.Sid too awesome. Loved it waiting for next .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Oh no did I went Hadke from military officer to a play boy...

Shall i correct the update

Anyway I came to beach with kids

Will do according to feedback once return home


No need to correct it is awesome .There should be naughtiness naa.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Oh no did I went Hadke from military officer to a play boy...

Shall i correct the update

Anyway I came to beach with kids

Will do according to feedback once return home


No..akka..don't change..we want this sid only
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Posted: 8 years ago
No Akka pls pls pls don't change .I love this siddanth pls pls pls
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Oh no did I went Hadke from military officer to a play boy...

Shall i correct the update

Anyway I came to beach with kids

Will do according to feedback once return home

No di don't change .we are loving this Side of sid and update soon di.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry dears to keep you all waiting...

Thanks for the feedback...

actually i went out to beach with kids and in that excitement gave the last update..

After reaching beach i felt i gave Sid more mischief unlike what i actually planned...

Thats why i raised that question...


Anyway as all are ok with it.. the story is going to take a super turn now as Mischief Sid...

Lets see what happens...

Next update in few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg di it's just super duper awesome & we love this mischievous sid thanks for not changing waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 22

Roli POV:


I was shocked when i saw him lifting his hand upward to prick his other hand with the pin...

OMG.. what will happen to his hand if he prick with such force...

I didn't intent to hurt him.. Instead was only wanting to play...

When i expressed that to him.. he tease me whether its the game i selected to play on wedding night...

I was surprised... Am i hearing something like that from Mr. Kadoos...

I can see a new expression of mischief on his face now...

I kept my hand & hold him from pricking his hand...

But he stopped before it touch my hand...

I swiftly took the pin from him and throw it on the floor..

I was unable to handle the tension i got...

I just lean on his shoulder and wrapped my hand around him...

Tears started scrolling from my eyes...

Dont do that... i am sorry.. i am so sorry...' I said with tears...

'Sorry.. just like that... its not acceptance...' he said with a mischief tone...

What does it mean.. i wonder...

'Then wont you forgive me..' i asked... Still hiding me on his shoulder...

He hold my chin & lift my face...

He looked into my eyes.. that killer look.. OMG... i blink a moment...

'You deserve punishment for trying to hurt me all these times... Yes 3 times on engagement day & once today...' he said...

My eyes widened...

'Punishment!!!' i asked him...

'Yes... punishment.. very hard punishment...' he stressed...

'What it is!!!' i asked loaded with tension on my face...

'I want 100 ...' he stopped... then looked into my eyes for my expression...

'You want me to tell 'Sorry' 100 times!!!' i asked...

He nod his head as denial...

'Then...' i puzzled...

He moved towards my cheeks & kissed...

Yes.. the first touch of his lips on my cheeks...

My face turned cherry read..

My body started shivering & heart beat was in its peak...

'I want 100 kisses...' he clarified...

'What???'' my jaws went down & eyes widened...

I was sitting speechless & motionless...





Siddhant POV:

I admired her Cherry red face when i kissed on her cheeks...

Further she was shocked when i said 'i want 100 kisses...'

She was sitting with all shock filled expression without able to understand how to react...

'Look... i dont have time... Just do what i said...' i ordered..

'How can i...' she asked keeping her eyelids down...

'How means??? you want to go for any special course or what.. how to give kisses...This is what punishment decided for what you did.. and you need to honor it... Dont think this military man will leave just like that...' i threaten her...

On my raised tone.. she showed a scared effect on her eyes...

She blink her eyes and looked into my eyes with a requesting expression...

'Please...' she requested...

'I said do it...' i ordered with words as well as the widened eyes making her feel a jerk inside her...

She moved towards my face & placed her first kiss on my cheeks...

And kissed every inch of my face while i counted...

1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8...9...10...




Roli POV:

OMG.. what sort of punishment is this...

And this ordering tone & eyes... i cant even deny...

I slowly moved towards his face & started placing kisses...

While he started counting 1...2...3... and so on...

I stopped after he count 15...

'I didn't tell you to stop.. then you need to start from 1 again...' he expressed...

'I am not used to all these...' i said in a crying tone...

'I am not like that.. i am used to get kisses in hundreds daily...' he said in a teasing tone...

I know he is teasing me...

I continued the kisses when he continued the counting...




Siddhant POV:


I felt like laughing when she said 'she is not used to all these...'

I replied.. 'i am used to get kisses daily...'

She knows i am teasing her and continued her kisses...

Not bad my obedient girl...

I continued my counting...

When she reached 50...

'Stop it...' i said giving relief to her breathe...

'Is 100 counting finished...' she asked innocently...

'Not as such.. only 50 finished...' i clarified...

'Then does this mean.. you reduced the punishment...' she puzzled...

'No.. punishment cant be reduced... but didn't you remember i told you i am your partner in crime.. then when you already completed half of the punishment.. is it not my part to handle balance punishment...' i asked looking into her eyes for expression...

OMG.. is the expression now on her face...

I admired her expression and moved forward towards her face...

She lean backward towards the pillow while i lean towards her...

She reached the pillow and got no way to move further down and i already reached her...

She closed her eyes without able to handle my eyes...

I moved towards her face while...

My phone ring and got up to lift the phone which was on the side table...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice punishment from military man 🤣come on sid carry on your half of punishment 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG... superb... sid...im falling for u... good punishment n poor Roli... partner in crime... but what is this stupid phone ringing.plz Plz...dnt let that stupid thing to come between rosid... plzzz... n update asap
Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago

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