my frst evr FF : Deewangi..!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys..well..m nyu 2 all dis..i mean though hv bin a membr of IF since a quite time now..bt still..hvnt mde ne FFs till nw..sso..here i go..wid my frst ff on AR:
Dis is on Sapna's wedding day...as v all saw in SBS..every1z dressed d sme..n atu's d frst 1 2 arrive 4 d ceremony whereas armaan picks up muskaan n cums on d second nmbr...angie n ridz r busy gttn ready..n angie is totally confused wt 2 wear...n so is ridz..sso..at their house..d scene goes lyk dis :
Anjali - "ridzii..plzz...jaldi batao na main kya pehnoo..m soo bloody confused...ye sab main kaha regularly pehenti hoo...cum on ridzii...tell na"
Ridhima - "di..plzz..mujhe bhi samajh nhi aa rha hai ki main kya pehnoo 😕...mujhe bhi toh sochne do..." (now she speaks 2 herself) "uhmm..kaunsa rang pehnoo..armaan ko kya pasand aayega...oh gaawd...help me"..."haan..laal..yess..red...😃"
Anjali - "kya..kya kaha"
Ridhima - "huh..nhi..kuch bhi toh nhi...aap jaldi karo na di"
Now at Sapna's place...armaan's desprately w8in 4 ridhima..he keeps on chekin d entrance..keeps his eys at d door...w8in 4 his love..😳😳
jus den ridhima n angie enter...n atul n armaan both luk at d door togdr...both r swayed by their respective grl's beauty,charm n innocence...
Ridhima's busy wid d mithaai work..shagun ka kaam...n all odr preparations..whyl armaan cums 2 her n whispers in her ears..
Armaan - "hi beautiful..😛..kaafi der lagadi aane mein".."koi khaas baat ? "
Ridhima - (shylyy..) "huh...uhh..hii..wohh..nhi..koi khaas baat nhi"
Armaan - "ohh..i c...sso..koi khaas baat nhi hai ryt ?"..(luks deeply in2 her eyes..wid a sheepish smile😳)(ishq leta is playin d bckground😉)
Jus den ridhima shys away..givs a sweet smile...n as usual..tries 2 run away...cz armaan ws reelly vrry close to her 😉..nd as usual..armaan holds her bak..n pulls her in2 d near by room..
All lights r dim of dt particular room....ders too much luv in d air...bt..still..despite of d sweet silence mixd spread all over..d music of their emotions is loud enough 2 overshadow d silence..
He holds her..n pins her 2 d wall...
Armaan - "tum aaj bohot khoobsurat lag rhi ho..itni ki shayad mai iss pal ke baad..zinda na reh paaoo"
Ridhima - (keeps her hand on his mouth)"aaj kehdiya hai...dobara mat kehna..tum nhi jaante..mai khudko tumhaare bina soch bhi nahi sakti"..
Armaan - "itna pyaar karti ho mujhse ? "
Ridhima - "sabse zyaada..khudse bhi zyaada"
Armaan - (softly)..i luv u ridhima..i luv u"
N den dey both hug...n get totally lost in each odr...n everythng is vrry intimate..
sso dis is wt i hv thot till nw..tmme hws it??

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgg continueeee
that sounds awesomeeeee
great dialogues hun
cont. ritin dis plzzz
xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
owesome..keep on writing.. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was really sweet ..
jia.. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome yaar cant wait 4 u to continue
123abc123 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
ooooo vry romantic
continue soon
really gd 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
hey plz continue jaldi.tht was 2 cute but short........
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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