New FF...*~Doh kahaniya~*.(.jan 20 pg 2)

Hi guys....I am new in this forum...I really love Amber Dhara it's one of my favourite shows....So i decided to type a FF on it because sometimes i am not really satisfyed with the story(No offense)But i still love it...If u want me to continue then plz do tell me...

MAIN CHARACTERS!!!!!

Amber:Sweet,beautiful,and the best singer...She is good in both ways singing and studies...She is conjoined with her twin sister Dhara...Even though they don't look alike..

Dhara:loving,Cute,and the smartest....She is also good in 2 ways...Playing a guitar and in studies even better then her conjoined sister Amber...

Akshat:Handsome,cool,and lovable...He is in love with Amber but he doesn't realize it yet so soon...He is Amber Dhara's bestfriend....

Soniya: Preety,and mean....She cares only about herself...She is a selfish person and Akshats girlfriend...

Lata:Amber Dhara's mom....She loves her children more then anyone else...She can fight with everyone for her children...She also owns a bakery...

Nanu:Lata's father and Amber Dhara's Nanu...He is very nice guy...And always supports Amber Dhara...Owns a trailor shop...

beeji:Akshat's Beeji...She is very sweet and loving...She really likes Amber Dhara...

There will be some characters but they are not that important...But 2 main characters will be added later on...

It was a nice morning Amber was listening to songs on her ipod...While she and Dhara sat in the balcony on 2 attached chairs...Dhara looked around the surronding...

D-Kitni cooli cooli duniya hai...Per hum woh dhek bhi nahi sukthay...Yaha Masuri mai he rahay jahain gay...Per muchje koi problem nahi...

Amber could hear Dhara she took of her head phones...

A-Com'n Dhara how could u say kay koi problem nahi hai...Jub mai Singer banu gi na tub toh humhay yaha say bhar nikal puray ga na....

Dhara smiles but suddenly they hear there mom calling them downstairs...

Lata-AMBER!!!!!!DHARA!!!!!JULDI NEECHAY AHO AKSHAT AYA HAI TUMSAY MILLNAY!!!!

both:Akshat...

They quickly ran downstairs...They see Akshat sitting on a couch in the leaving room...

Both:Hi Akshat...

They go and took their seats apposite of Akshat...AD's mom went to the kitchen...

Akshat-Hi guys...Mai yaha tum dono ko congratulate kurnay aya hoon...Kay Tum dono pass hogahay...Or wasay bhi yeah tum dono ka last year tha so ub hum maza kuray gay...

AD smiles...Akshat gets up so does Amber Dhara...He Hugs Dhara and then Amber but he gives Amber a kiss on her cheek...Amber pushes him back..

A-Akshat what was that all about?

Akshat gets worried..

Akshat:I donno...Per agar tumnay mind kiya toh i am really sorry...

Amber smiles...A-No problem...

Akshat smiles back...Then he gives Dhara a beautifully wrapped gift and same with Amber..

D-Akshat yeah kiss liyeah?

Akshat-Yeah tum dono kay liyeah meri turuff say chota sa gift...I want u to wear it ajj shum ko meri party pay...

Amber-Kiss khushi kay liyeah..

Akshat-Surprise party...Or koi presents lanay ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Suddenly AD'S mom comes out of the kitchen along with a tray holding a glass of juice and some snacks...She places the tray on the table...

Lata-Akshat beta yeah tumharay liyeah...

Akshat-No thanks aunty ub mai chultha hoon...Namste Aunty...Bye Amber Dhara...

AD-Bye Akshat...

Amber Dhara goes back to their rooms and unwraps the presents...Dhara got a watch and Amber got clothes...Salwaar kameez...Both are surprised..

D-Amber muchje lugtha hai kay tera gift mere liyeah hai...

A-Nahi D dhek isspay mera naam lika wah hai...For Amber sweet heart...And tere wallay pay lika wah hai For Dhara ...Wasay jo bhi ho may yeah kupray Akshat ki party pay zaroor phenoon gi...

D-Wah yaar Akshat toucpay bura maherbaan ho raha hai..

A-Shut up D...woh bachpan say he assa hai...He likes me better..

Dhara smiles...

D in her head-Ur right he likes u better...But stupid doesn't even know the reason why...

Precap:Akhsat and Amber are dancing...

Hope u liked it plz do comment...

Ayesha😊

nice story and plz read my fan fiction too is called
JOURNEY To The New World.Don't worry my fan fiction story start is same but you can read and see what happened.Also do comments on it.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=794235&TPN=1

Originally posted by: mehvishrainbow2

nice story and plz read my fan fiction too is called
JOURNEY To The New World.Don't worry my fan fiction story start is same but you can read and see what happened.Also do comments on it.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=794235&T PN=1

Thank u...I will read ur's...😊

Hey u also started one! Anyways gr8 job for the starting. Can't wait to read more and as of my fanfic Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat well I'll be updating in a 2 days so i'll give you notice when I'm updating. Will try n keep up on this FF!!!
From:
Chevarra

Originally posted by: Chevi

Hey u also started one! Anyways gr8 job for the starting. Can't wait to read more and as of my fanfic Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat well I'll be updating in a 2 days so i'll give you notice when I'm updating. Will try n keep up on this FF!!!
From:
Chevarra

Thanx alot yaar...I am glad u liked it..

But i like ur da best...I was waiting for it...😭...

I am getting bored right now so why not update...



Precap:Akshat invites them to his party...



That evening Dhara wore her own Pink and sky blue salwaar kameez with dangly silver earrings...She looks great...Amber wore the salwaar kameez Akshat gave her..Which was orange with golden work on it...So she wore Golden and orange long earrings...She looks stunning...Amber Dhara geos downstairs....They inform their mom and nanu that they're going to Akshats party..
Scene switches to Akshats party...There are many ppl and folks..Soniya arrives...
Akshat is talking to one of his friends and suddenly from the back Soniya covers his eyes...
Soniya-Guess who it is???
Akshat smiles....He remembers Amber's Face in front of his eyes...
Akshat-Amber...
Soniya on the back takes her hands of and is burning like coal...Akshat turns around and is horrified to see Soniya...
Akshat-Tum!!!!Tum yaha kya kur rahi ho?
Soniya-What do u mean mai yaha kya kur rahi hoon..I am ur girlfriend so i have the right to come here...Or tumsay kya awaz nahi phechani jati....I am not that damn Amber...
Akshat gets a bit angry...
Akshat-Soniya plz Amber kay baray main istra ki bakwaas na kara karo...
Then Akshat walks away from there leaving Soniya confused...
Soniya(Thought)-What is wrong with him?...Yeah mera boyfriend hai ya Amber ka..Humasha uski side laytha hai...Grrrrrrrrr i hate Amber and i don't care about Dhara...
Akshat at the door of his mansion is greeting his friends inside...Now finally Amber Dhara arrives...
Akshat-Thank god tum loog ah gahay...
A-Per Akshat humari itni kya zaroorat hai...
without answering Amber's question Akshat started to stare at Amber head to toe...
Akshat-Wow!!!
A-Kya kaha...
Akshat-ah ah ah um mera mutlub tum dono bohut achay lug rahay ho..
Both-Thanx...
Akshat-So come in now...
so they enter Akshat leads them to the stage set in there...They follow Akshat..Akshat grabs the microphone..
Akshat-Hello everybody can i have ur attention plz..
Everyone looks at them....
Akshat-Thank u....app sub ko billkul yeah nahi pata kay yeah party kis liyeah hai right...So i am gonna tell u now...
Everyone cheers...
Amber Dhara looks at each other in surprise...
D whispers-I think yeah party tere liyeah hai...
A whispers--What the hell...Mere liyeah per why...No ur wrong...
Suddenly Akshat points at Amber Dhara...
AKshat-Mere in dono bestfriends kay pass honay ki khushi mai...
AD are totally surprised...Akshat walks upto them...While everyone applaused...
A-Akshat tumhay kya Zaroorat pari thi humharay liyeah yeah sub kurnay ki...
D-I know Akshat...why?
Akshat-Jub last year mai pass hova tha toh tum dono nai millkay mere liyeah ek choti si party ruki thi...Right..
AD nodds...
Akshat-Toh phir mai kiyou nahi ruk suktha hoon..
A-Per Aks...
Akshat covers Ambers mouth..
Akshat-Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....Bus chup...
Dhara is smiling while Amber and Akshat had an eye lock session...
Soniya noticed and is getting really jealous...She leaves from there throwing a vase....Everyone at once notice then get back to their own business.
The Dj plays on some music...
Dj-This is for Amber Dhara...Come on lets move it...Everybody lets move it..
AD smiles...
Akshat-Kya tumaysay koi mere saat dance kurna chahay ga...
D-No no no...Plz not me...
A-Ok i love to dance to music...Thats my pession...
AD walks to the floor...It's the dance where the girl has to Tie her arms around a guys neck and the guy puts it on their waist....A,A (Amber,Akshat)Does that...
They feel somethin...Ajjab si song plays on...
(Gotta go)...
Precap:Dhara's hero arrives...
Hope u liked it....Plz do comment... 😃

wow, please continue im starting to like this story better then the original. 😉 good job cant wait to read more

Originally posted by: ilvAA

wow, please continue im starting to like this story better then the original. 😉 good job cant wait to read more

Thank u sooo much..I'll try to continue soon...😃

Originally posted by: eijaz_the_best

good story 👏

Thanx a ton...😃

Hi again...



Precap:Akshat and Amber starts to dance on the song ajjab si..



While dancing both had an eye lock session..Akshat went into his dreamland...He wondered sitting around a mandap beside only Amber who was dressed like a bride and he was dressed like a groom...They took pheres,he filled sindoor on her forehead,and tied a mangesutra around her neck...Then he pictures the shaag raat..Then that scene switches to the kitchen...Amber was like standing in front of a stove cooking something wearing a sari...He comes from the back and hugs...Then he pictures the hosiptal where theres a baby in Ambers hand and takes it in his arms and kisses it...Suddenly he snaps out of it becuz Amber was shaking him...
A-Akshat!!!Leave me gana katum ho gaya hai...
He lets go...
Akshat-Opps sorry...
D-Akshat tum toh Amber ki annkoh mai kohay way thay...Hoo hoo...
Amber hits Dhara on her shoulder...
Akshat-a um a um ahh ....he had no words so he left from there....
A-What the hell D?Akshat ko tunay embarrass kur diya or saat saat mucjhay mai...
D-Yaar mainay woh kaha hai jo such hai...Akshat touchsay pyar kurtha hai saaf diktha hai...
A-What nonsense?Mainay kabhie nahi notice kiya...
D-Kiyou kay toh kurna nahi chathi hai...
A-D woh Sirf Soniya say pyar kurtha hai or agar karoon bhi na asa ho he nahi sukthi kiyou kon doh jori whi ladkiyo say pyar kuray ga...
D-Per Dhara..
Amber interrupts..
A-mucjhay ub kuch nahi sona hai...
Suddenly Akshat calls then to where he was standing...
Akshat-Amber Dhara!!!!!Come here mai tumhay kisi say millana chathi hoon...
They walk upto him see some cool handsome guy standing beside Akshat...(it's the old Akshat)....He and Dhara just kept on staring at each other...Dhara snaps out of it but he kept staring at her...
A-Akshat yeah kon hai...
Akshat-Yeah hai Akshay mera cousin....Tum loog millay thay bachpan mai...Akshay Dhara ka bohut acha friend hota tha...
He lifts his hand to shake it With Dhara,they both feel something and then with Amber...
A-I am sorry muchjay tum yaad nahi ho...
D-Lekin muchay yaad hain...
Akshay-Haan i also don't remember Amber i remember Dhara...
Amber makes a mad face while Akshat just laughs looking at her...
D-Oh how sweet of u...Toh tum kaha chulay gahay thay itnay saal tuk...
Akshay-Oh bus America mom dad kay saat...
Akshay and Dhara start chatting for like an hour...Amber and Akshat got bored so they also started a conversation...
Precap:Akshay jumps into Amber Dhara's room window...
Hope u liked it plz do comment... 😊