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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: flowers321

Pls update ur first chapter 😭 😭




Awww why cry cry dear????
Will try to update by tom
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlight3094



Yes me too. On a role of this situation!😆
Will wait until u update😉




Will try to update soon dear 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji91

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thanks for sharing dear




Welcome
N thanku for commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

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Ok dear will check n reply
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

dislike kyun karenge

aap likhogi to dislike karne ka sawal hi nahi uthta dii
vaise such bolun to mujhe intro bilkul samajh nahi aya tha
lekin ab prologue padhkar i really can't wait for this story
i just love it whenever devakshi are best friends
lekin yahaan par to koi bada twist aane wala hai inki friendship mein
but no problem we are ready for that also
ab bas jaldi jaldi 1st chapter update kardo




Update aaj shaam ko pakka sammy
Comment jaroor karna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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(banner credit : Binnu aka my darling binnudiii)


Chapter One


There's always a Zen-like serenity to Delhi at dawn...before the heat rises temperatures and tempers, the city is at its most accommodating...from savoring roasted peanuts with a hot cup of tea to warming hands sitting beside a bonfire, Delhi is an absolute delight in winter season as an air of euphoria floats about in the atmosphere!...warm snuggly clothes, riot of colors, migratory birds, steamed momos and lots and lots of sunshine...all these just enhanced the beauty of Delhi.

As opposing to the hustle and bustle around the city, the mornings at Dixit Niwas were much more on the quieter side...every morning you could find the lady of the house, Mrs. Ishwari Dixit, sitting at the temple performing her morning pooja while Jay (Jaywant)Dixit would be busy sipping his morning tea while browsing through the local newspaper...the house helps would be busy preparing the breakfast and other stuff while in a quiet corner of his own you would find a boy who was the calmest of them all and would love to be confined to his own self...there was no situation which could make him loose his calm composure...however bad the situation be.

On one such bright Delhi morning, Dev was getting ready for his office in his room when his phone buzzed...a smile cropped up on his face immediately on checking the caller-id...but his forehead creased on checking the time when this person was calling him...worried he picked up the phone and only managed to say "hello" when an over-anxious voice on the other side grabbed his attention...as he already had anticipated his bestie was in a deep mess and he had to sort this out as always.

"arrey Bunny hello wello chod aur meri baat sun...usse pehle mujhe yeh bata ki tumjhe yaad bhi hai ki nahin ki aaj mera exam hai...gadhe ek baar bhi tune mujhe all the best' wish nahin kiya..."...she could have continued blaming him the whole day when Dev suddenly stopped her mid -way..."ab apna bhashan band kar aur yeh bata ki phone kyun kiya hai...the great Cheeku jii ne mujhe yeh batane keliye to phone nahin kiya hoga ki maine unhe wish nahin kiya...ab bekaar ki baatein chod aur main mudde pe aa...kya hua hai?"

BUNNY...yes that's what she fondly called him...her cute handsome "bunny the rabbit"...CHEEKU...that's what he addressed her fondly...his cute lil princess...he would often treat her like a child and always be there by her side as he felt she was too innocent for this big bad world.

Sona was dumbstruck...he knew her like the back of her hand...he very well knew that she would call him this early morning only when she would be in some sort of mess...and yes today she was in one such.

"ahhh...woh kya hua na Bunny...main na subah na ghar se jaldi jaldi mein nikli to na usi sab mein apna ID-card ghar bhool aayi...ab yeh chirkut mujhe exam hall mein jaane bhi nahin de rahe...Bunny tu mera best friend hai na ...please mera ID-card laa de mujhe"...there is one thing you need to get straight...the ever calm composed Dev Dixit did lose his coolness occasionally ...and all of those occasions would definitely be linked to his Cheeku..."kya?...gadhi tu apna ID-card ghar pe chod kar exam dene gayi hai...kya hoga tera Cheeku...kab sudhregi tu...chod yeh bata kitna time bacha hai exam start hone mein...jaldi bol"...it seemed as if Dev was answering the exam and not Sona..."relax Bunny...abhi bhi aadha ghanta hai baaki"..."sirf aadha ghanta...thik hai ruk main kuch karta hoon...tu revision karle...aur haan class ke bahar hi rumna kahin mat jaana ...samjhi"...before Sona could reply Dev cut the call and rushed out of his room to Sona's place.

On the way Ishwari stopped Dev to serve him breakfast...but Dev was in no mood to pay heed to her...he simply ran out of the house before telling his dad that he would be back in an hour's time...Dev picked up Sona's ID-card from her place and made a dash to her college...he drove like maniacs while overtaking all the vehicles on the way...finally he managed to reach within 25 mins and went looking out for Sona...there she stood waiting for him to arrive...not even the slightest worry on her face...she believed him more than her...she knew he would not let her down...handing over the ID-card to her he hugged her and wished her luck...he left for home only after ensuring that his Cheeku had been let into the exam hall and had started answering her paper.

He was relieved that this would be her last year of management studies and then she would get her degree...he would ask her to join their business and then they would work together...this way she would not have to wander around to find a job for her and he would also keep her with him always as she was too innocent for the outside Delhi life...Sona did lift her head up and see him standing at the door of her exam hall...she gestured him through her eyes and waved signaling him to leave for his work as she was all fine.

Coming back home he finished his breakfast and left for office avoiding the daggers his mother was shooting at him through her eyes...he was very well aware she didn't like him being around Sona but he just cared less...all he knew was he just couldn't end a day without sharing all his happenings with Sona for the day...he wished someday his mother would accept her and treat her like a child of her own.

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LATER THAT WEEKEND

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It was yet another lazy Sunday morning for people at Dixit Niwas...except for Ishwari none of the family members had woken up...Jay Dixit was as usual back form one of his late night meetings with his foreign delegates and hence he was fast asleep in his room...while Dev was as usual not interested in waking up early on a Sunday morning...Ishwari was about to send her househelp Kichu to wake Dev up when Sonakshi walked in just as she came here every Sunday morning to wake up her buddy...Ishwari who had a certain dislike towards Sona for reasons best known to her was certainly not pleased with her arrival.

"arrey auntyji aap Kichu Bhaiyya ko kyun bhej rahi hain?...main aa gayi hoon na, ab main Dev ko utha doongi...aap tension mat lejiye, agle aadhe ghante mein Dev ko ready karke neeche le aaungi, I promise"...she told Ishwari as she walked past her quickly and took the stairs up to Dev's room to wake up her bestie.

"yeh ladki kab peecha chodegi mere Dev ka?...yahaan beti mere bete ke gale padi hui hai jabardasti aur wahan iska baap mere pati ke business ko nigal raha hai...pata nahin kaunsa din tha woh jab yeh manhoos log humare jindagi mein aaye the"...Ishwari as usual cursed Sona and her family for being very much a part of their lives.

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DEV'S ROOM

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Sonakshi quietly tiptoed into the tamely lion's den which belonged to her best friend cum confidant Dev...there he was sleeping soundly...sprawling all over the bed like a king...lying flat on his stomach...wearing just his track pants...the upper half naked as usual...this was an everyday sight for Sona...she would often find him in this very state every Sunday morning when she would come to wake him up...his files spread haphazardly on his study table...the night lamp still on indicating he had been working for long till wee hours and had dozed off just like that...his dumbbells and stuff thrown here and there on the floor...and the angel himself sleeping his heart out without even an ounce of botheration on his face.

"Bunny...utho dekho 9 baj gaye hai...walk pe nahin jaana hai kya aaj?...wake up lazy bones"...Sona called out to him as she shook him holding him by his shoulders, but he was far from hearing her wakeup call, he just stirred a b it and went back to sleep... tired she picked up the pillow on the other side of the bed and whacked him hardly on his bottom ...as always Dev woke up with a scream much to Sona's delight...grabbing her wrist he pulled her on the bed and twisted her arm as Sona shrieked in pain.

"Cheeku...you stupid girl...kitni baar kahan hai kii dhang se utha liya karo...jaroori hai ki har Sunday tum mujhe aise maar ke uthao"...as usual he gave his displeasured look ..."aur kya yeh jaroori hai ki tum mera haath aise marodo...aaa...Bunny chodo...dard ho raha hai...dekho haath chodo warna main na chilla chilla ke sab ko ikhatta kar loongi...phir tumhari mom aake tumhe daantegi ...soch lo"...Dev immediately let her go as she threatened him about calling his mom...he knew his mother would certainly not like to see them in such a state.

"ab apni yeh sadu shakal sudharo aur jaldi se utho...aur please sabse pehle apni shirt pehenlo...mujhe tumahre yeh 6-pack abs dekhne ka koi shauk nahin hai...so please cover yourself...besharam"...Sona ordered him as she threw his shirt onto his face and he stood there glaring at her angrily.

"agar mujhe aise dekhne ka koi shaukh nahin hai to phir har baar mere kamre mein aise bina pooche kyun aa jaati hai?...besharam main nahin tu hai...tujhe sharam nahin aati paraye ladke ko aise dekhte hue?"...Dev chided her as he wore his shirt...Sona immediately climbed up on the bed all set to pull his hair as he too was ready to hit her back.

This was a regular scenario at Dixit Niwas...Sona would come to wake up a sleeping Dev...she would have to whack him literally to wake him up...they would fight and hit each other like kids...and then finally go out on a walk where Dev would be busy hallucinating about Natasha and Sona would be busy discussing business enhancement ideas with him.

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AT THE PARK

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Dev and Sona were strolling around when suddenly Dev took out his phone to dial someone's number...Sona looked onn as to who was so important as to Dev couldn't even wait to get home to make this call...she was irritated knowing that Dev was calling Natasha...now Natasha was Dev's girlfriend...someone whom Sonakshi disliked the most...not just because she was Dev's girlfriend but because she was not the right one for Dev...she was one of her kind girls who would change her boyfriends just like she would change her clothes...Sona just couldn't understand why was she still hanging around with Dev when on an average she would have changed around 3 of her regular boyfriends...her face shrunk as she heard Dev talking all lovey-dovey things to Natasha over the phone..

"hii Nats...kya kar rahi ho...pehle batao ho kahan par?...tumhein meri bilkul yaad nahin aati na...tumhe to yaad bhi nahin hoga ki its been 4 days since we have last met..."...Dev complained as Natasha was searching for her clothes, still lying on the bed with her last night's fling...this was a regular scenario for her...she would just walk into a pub, get heavily drunk and end up in bed with a random guy who would promise to give her some penny's for her luxuries...she tried her best not to revert this secret to Dev as she got dressed..."mandir mein hoon baby...tumhe to pata haina ki subah subah bhagwaan ke darshan karne se mujhe kitna sukoon milta hai...aur tumhe kisne keh diya ki mujhe tumhari yaad nahin aati...ofcourse aati hai...aur main tumhe yahaan se nikalte hi phone karne waali thi...kyun na aaj hum dono bahar lunch par chale?"...Dev who had been blinded by her love was too overjoyed to receive her attention..."of-course chalet hai na ...I'll pick you up at 1 p.m...be ready ...love you ...bye"...Natasha put down the phone as her fling enquired ..."usi Dev Dixit ka phone tha na...kamaal hai yaar ...jo banda ek nazaar mein sacche aur jhoote businessman ko pehchan leta hai woh aaj tak yeh nahi jaan paya ki tum use itna bada dhoka de rahi ho"...Natasha smirked as she replied..."woh kya hai na darling...sab Nats jitney chalaak nahin hote ...aur jo hote hai unhe bewakoof banana Nats ke baye haath ka khel hai...so chill...Dev ko kabhi pata nahin chalega ki main use cheat kar rahi hoon..."...the boy who was quite confused asked her..."par Nats, shaadi ke baad to use pata chal jayega ki... you know...he's not the first guy of your life...phir kya karogi?"...Natasha hit him with a paper-weight as she replied..."to keh doongi ki isse pehle bhi ek baar nashe ki haalat mein usne mera fayda uthaya tha...aur woh mujhpe itna andha vishwaas karta hai ki kabhi bhool kar bhi mujhpar shaq nahin karega...and you jitna matlab hai utna hi kaam karo...bekaar ki cheezein janna band karo...dubara apni shakal bhi mujhe mat dikhana...we are over"...she banged the room door as she walked out.

Here Sona was starring at Dev all worried and Dev just couldn't decipher what was bothering her...waving his hand infront of her face he grabbed her attention..."kya hua Cheeku...kin khayaalo mein khoyi ho?"...Sona although was upset tried to cover it up..."kuch nahin bas soch rahi thi ki tum jaise ladke ko Natasha jaisi ladki mein aisa kya dikh gaya ki tum usse pyaar karne lage..."...Dev who would otherwise be angry with such questions was in a good mood today as he was suppose to lunch-out with his lady love.

"tu nahi samjhegi Cheeku...jab tera koi boyfriend hoga na tab tujhe samajh mein ayega ki dating ka apna ki alag majaa hota hai...abhi tu kuch nahi samjhegi"...Sona didn't wish to dive into deep currents hence diverted the topic to a light -hearted one..."yaar woh sab chod aur ye bata ki aakhir yeh dating hota kya hai?...jise dekho dating mein laga pada hai...aakhir kis chidiya ka naam hai yeh dating...hota kya hai ismein?"...Dev who was in full pranky mode today decided to pull her leg..."tujhe sachmein nahin pata ki dating mein ladka-ladki kya karte hai...arrey yaar phir to sun...dating mein na bahar khana khaane jaate hai...ek dusre ke saath long drives pe jaate hai woh bhi late night...phir der hone par kisi resort mein over-night stay karte hai...phir na soft si romantic music laga ke accha sa dance karte hai...phir kiss-wiss karte hai...aur haan agar mood bana toh yeh bhi karte hai"...Dev pulled down the overcoat Sona was wearing from one side of her shoulder and ran for life laughing hysterically as an angry Sona followed him to whack him for his behavior.

Edited by DevakshiCrazy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note : The next time I will be sending PM's only to those people who bother to revert back
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First comment first like 😉
And first chap is awsm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowers321

First comment first like 😉
And first chap is awsm




Thanku 😳

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