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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#ff6633">will b updating 2day???

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no already updated other story so not today
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Awesome update

Maan is not ready to expect he see geet as his wife n started to feel for her

thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: svani

Loved the update...make geet ignore maan so that he will get pinched...make her strong too...awesome

thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapriya

How did I miss this story of yours. Pls pm me abt further updates.

Maan is tied in an unwanted relationship and is feeling bad abt Geet. Poor girl on the receiving end with hopes getting crushed.

will do ...thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Angeline124

Nice update
Geet get tired of him and now not expecting any positive things in their relationship
Maan need to realise his feelings soon before he lost her complete
Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .hayaat.

wow geet good going
maan deserves thia for thinking he is most imp..
now he deserves this

yes maan deserve it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rice

Please update ASAP


will do soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#6666ff">hoping 4 an update!!! </font>


😊 will do
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Posted: 8 years ago

sorry ..will soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 8-



" here take it..."


" what is it ? " ...Geet asked frowning at the glass of Maan's hand...


" Can't you see it's milk..." ...Geet made a yuck face ..she hates milk to the core

" mujhe nehi chahiye yeh
sab ..."

" Geet don't behave childish.. its hot milk ... you already catch cold have it ...it will help you to keep your body warm and you won't catch fever "


...Maan noticed how she is sneezing from evening but instead of taking medicine or something else she is behaving childish...' yeh ladki kabhi aapna khayal nehi rakhta...bas dusro ki pari hai..' but Geet is Geet still stubborn..

" yuck I don't want this "


" for God sake its milk not some poison that you behaving lik..."


" main kaise manu ki isme zehar nehi hai..waise bhi you hate me toh..."


" Geet "


she stop her blabbing hearing his angry voice ...she looked at his hurt and angry face she didn't mean what she said ...she was only trying to go out from this situation.. but did this blunder ...she tried to say something but Maan stop her


" I brought this for you so that you won't catch fever or something...aur ha agar itna hi shak hai mujhpe toh yeh lo..."


he took a sip from glass and keep it by her side " now you must be satisfied right ...I'm keeping it here maan kare toh pi lena yeh phir phek dena " ..saying this he went to go but stop at door ...


" one more thing Geet I don't hate you " he told without turning and went out from there...


Geet cursed herself for her blabbing ...she looked at the glass which Maan brought for her " jhali kahi ki ...he was only thinking about your health thats why brought this for you... aur tune kuch bhi karti hai..." she recalled his last word and unknowingly feel peace


" he doesn't hate me now ...toh kya abb unhe meri parba hai...nehi nehi kuch bhi soch ti hai tu ..." she brushed the thought of him caring for her but deep down she is very happy that Maan cared for her health even personally brought milk for her ...

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" you shouldn't have do this for that idiot girl ...how can she thinks that I can kill her "


Maan is hurt ...even more confused why her small words effecting him that much ...she always avoids him like he is some disease ...after last day honeymoon fight she became more quiet ...he missed her talking like she did when she was in orphanage not married to him they were not best friend but they did share a good bonding now this bitterness is killing him...


" its your fault only ...but why the hell I got worried for her...no I'm not worried for her I was only trying to help because of Dadima ...she loves her ladli and will be worried to see her sick that's why I did this "


finally he see the solution of his inner emotions and try to do some work but again Geet's words came in his mind " stop it Maan don't think about her ...she won't understand you ever "


he know he was judging her wrongly but he was angry then... now he wants them to be normal atleast civil again but her words always forced him to take step back ..in all this he forget that how much he hurts her earlier by his rejection... and never tried so say sorry for his rude behaviour...

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" Geet bete aap thik toh hai na " Dadima asked Geet worriedly looking at her slightly red eyes


" nehi Dadima main thik hoon bas thora sa bukhar hai ...aur aap pareshan maat hoiye maine medicine leliya hai ...

" par bete achnak se ye bukhar ..." before Geet could say Maan finally open his mouth...

" yeh toh honahi tha Dadima agar ghanto se Friends se sath barish main bheegegi toh asa hi hoga na " ...

Geet glared Maan but he know ignored it completely " you know Dadima she was out for almost 2 hours in that heavy rain with Them ...and its not good but who can stop her she always do what she wants ..."

" nehi Dadima woh toh mai..."


" hadd hai bete ..itni der tak bahar beegh ki kya jaruraat thi ..."

" Dadima you know na I love rain...aur kal toh mausam ki pheli baarish thi toh ..."


" ha ha pata hai ...but that doesn't mean you would become careless ...aane dijiye aapki dosto ko achi khabar lenge hum..." saying she got up to make kaara for her ...


There Geet glared Maan " kya jarurat thi mere friends ko bech main lane ki..." ...


Maan simply ignored her
and went out feeling sadist pleasure to ruin her mood and also happy that Dadima will take class of her over lovely friends whom she gave so importance than him...

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At evening her friends came as Geet not well ...as expected all get their share of scolding from Dadima ...Maan was also present there sitting a little far but enjoyed every bit ...

after sometime Dadima left to her room saying them to stay for dinner which Maan didn't like a bit but couldnt do anything other than sulking ...

her friends settled on sofa and then start playing truth and dare ...he noticed how Geet is enjoying everything her smile is so real reaching her eyes not act nothing which she does with him in front of Dadima...he felt disappoint in him what actually he lacking he doesn't know...but he understood one thing she really cares for her friend and her friends equally care for her...

Geet was playing forgetting around her world ...after sometime it was her turn to chose between truth and dare...

" so Truth or Dare " pinky asked...

" Geet please not truth... whenever we play you always chose this...darpok maat ban kabhi toh dare karke dekh ..." ...Yash her college friend try to provoke her ...and Geet had no choice but to agree ...

" OK OK fine dare ..."

Yash smile naughtily..." you have to kiss a man in this room..."

" what !!!..." Geet shocked cursing for taking dare " no I can't do it ...no its not fair guys "


" Why not its fair ..? its a dare you have to do it ...or else punishment remember..."

" Yash tu..."


" Yash is right ...you chose dare so have to do this ...that's it " ...Meera support Yash giving a wink ...leaving Geet helpless... in this hall her there only two man one her friend Yash other her husband Maan ...

Yash no she can't kiss Yash it wont look good and Maan ...she looked at him saw him busy with his work ...' woh toh mujhe maar hi dalega ...nehi nehi ..abb kya karu ' ...

Maan observed everything quietly ...hearing Yash's dare he was also shocked but thrilled he knows Geet won't kiss his friend so..only he left ..unknown to him he liking the idea of Geet kissing him...


" uffo Geet itna kya soch rahi hai ...jiju toh yehi hai ...don't be so shy before us go " ...Pinky said smirking pushing her ...


Geet got up slowly giving a nervous smile to them and try to escape from there but her friends very admant not to let her go...without seeing any option she slowly went toward Maan ...closed her eyes praying hardly " Allah please bacha lena " ...


Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago

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