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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 43

True she was fearless and strong, her inner anger took over I suppose. Huh married, when did this happen or did I miss a chapter lol, don't tell me I'm jumble reading again or are you jumble posting lol

Ahh makes sense, married on paper like duh me. Oh no no no I think he's moving a little ahead of himself, what suhag raat they're not married through rituals which I suppose has more meaning to Geet than the papers. Really could he? Lets see the super negotiator in action then lol. How can he think of only one thing even in such a situation, he's such a guy or in Geets words BBC sorry souble checked BCC lol, besharam was one of the words right, it must have been lol

Aww Adi and Pinky bits were cute and I loved like loved Adi's honest confession about how his responsibilities come first but that don't mean Pinky comes second either, ok he didn't say that but his actions did. I liked it a lot.

In enters doctor Arman, he's timing is perfect lol, serves Maan and his one trcat mind right hahaha I love it. BTW do I sound mean cuase I have every intention of being mean lol. Ahem sorry so Arman like someone else who probably has the hots for Maan, ok this is complicated lol

So Maan got his way, his home now but his hopes are shot into smithereens anyway hahahaha so forget Maan it'll never happen lol, gosh I like this. Sorry Avi but you know I'm not much into this romance business lol. But this guys the limit, too weak to shower huh. Gosh if I was her I'll throw a bucket of water and then turn on my heels saying showers done' hahahaha. Finger weak is it, hmmm shove his face into a jug or bowl lol ok maybe not but they make funny images lol

Damn it got his way, this Geet is the actual one that weak lol but great stuff as usual

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Part 44

Ahaan a new edit, an indication of the part I believe, maybe would have to miss most parts, sorry.

O he blames her, I have a similar expression to Geet like what lol, she likes her cartoon then. Tweedy is absolute favourite lol, that was my Watsapp pic for the longest lol

Sorry really short comment I know but I think you should get them married soon, Maan's turned into hyper mode lol

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Part 45

Another edit, what's happening all this time I thought you were Wonderwoman but Lakshmi turns out to be superwoman, a new edit per part lol, but that's really cool in my nephews words, his learning to speak much more. Can be a earful at times lol and his why's and how's, man it's hard. He's turning 3 soon, so you can imagine a questioning machine, once he starts school, it'll be whens and whats lol

He asked me the other day what's a topic, and I'm like it's a subject baby then he's like whats a subject and he put me to shock lol after a bit of thinking I was like a lesson, we continued this game until I came back to rest on topic lol, the things he comes up with lol.

Maan and Geet not any better lol their games is what actually connects them to me. Salman thing got him jealous lol, and your caveman returns I was thinking you haven't really showed him much here. Maan must have the strongest biceps in your stories since he's forever pulling that stunt lol.

That was a noble thing, Maan has so many faces, one which you showed in the last three parts and now the one who very carefully filled Geet in on her family life, he's definitely considerate and caring. Lovely part finally nanima got her Rano in Geet and Maan his mother, how awesome

Thank you and Avi, nope didn't change to hide although I love the idea. Maybe I can escape lol, I had wanted to change the username for a while, had even thought of mainly alternative but in the end settled for this, came to me the minute I clicked onto my profile. Suits me I believe, im Silly (daft) and a nerd kinda I love immunologically, oncology etc so I think that's makes me one lol (girk is a slang for nerd of all nerds, i.e. boss nerd, used for girls only though). So it's an oxymoron, much like myself really even my pic is more than what meets the eye😉.

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Part 46

Desperate Maan! Why aren't I even shocked? Lol. Maayka ofcourse she'll be there right, theyre not even married. Wait correction not technically married although on paper they are which I suppose Maan takes abit too far lol. Quintessentially Maan is a lover so his feelings are just although borderline desperate lol. Gosh he'll hate me in reality.

Ofcourse he was extremely jealous, when you were like he's not jealous I was like then what do you call his raising resentment but thankfully you cleared that pretty soon lol.

Possessive genes, you got that right. He's such a man, nah Maaannn lol. The new family seem dead sweet, pakoras love them. I don't mind dropping by to Poonam's house lol. I like the familiar faces sorry names lol

Oh I hate Zain, I know totally irrelevant but right now Youtube went to the wrong territory (will murder it later lol). Hate that shitster, no don't like little mix either but what he did to Perrie was absolutely horribly wrong, dumping an fianc over text is a big NO-NO but karma will hit him back. He'll probably get dumped without knowledge lol. I know that's mean but I'm a girl, I feel emotions lol

Sorry back to the story, Adi's got a love life yippe and Maan well hahahaha, gosh he's hating Adi isn't he? Besharam at his best, but you cant hate him. His adorable kinda lol shoots kill me for saying that lol

And the return of the blue shirt, you defo love it don't you? Maan at his persuasive best, I reckon Tara's gonna agree.

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Part 47

I am aware of that song and every time it's used it tends to be dodgy. Should I be scared, but I do like Zara Zara. Ok return of the Nehru jacket, why aren't I even amazed. Another thing you love?

Ok I don't know if I'll make sense since I'm listening to a song which makes no sense, contrary quite confusing lyrics (Thumps by Sabrina Carpenter). The first bit is dead weird, urgh.

Ok so well behaved Maan but Geet don't like it, it's the norm again I blame Maan lol. Its not only Geet then Maan also wants to return to normalcy but promise, phew I like promises lol, I'm evil yep I like evil lol if it keeps them away. Rain, dance and hugs are a Maaneet thing, liked the edited holi sequences.

Return of BCC, shocked he held it together for that long anyway lol, Maans b'day awww

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Part 48

There's a lot happiness around, aww. Yeah Maans up to no good as always lol.

I love the line of my wealth has no effect, true money can't buy happiness. Both these characters truly blossomed and exceptionally made for each other.

They missed each other, blimey its been a few days and in the next couple of days they'll be married then whats there to miss. I feel like darji now, incapable of understanding their dilemma lol.


Precap seems dangerous, shoot Maans gonna get a whooping lol

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Part 49

So it wasn't Maan, Adi will so get it hahaha. Poor Maan is innocent, feel guilty for thinking he'll ever do this. I should have known better he's completely in love with Geet so that no chance in hell he'll want a bachelor party lol.

Heh Adi is chalu, wasn't it him that suggested the party in the first place. Chalu Adi lol, ok Maan giving advice on relationships, should i expect something will go wrong lol. Something tells me he'll be in a fix too, im sure Geet's planned something for him too lol.

OOO what is this Maan doing, definitely gaya. I like the honesty between them though. There's this line of understanding, no matter how much they tease one another or joke around still she knows he only loves her and vice versa.

Geet hit bullseyes hahahaha no more zara zara touch me for Maan lol, he needs to wait it out, then again its only 2 days, anyone can magae that with the blink of his eyes but this is chalu Maan lol, I doubt he'll survive a day without seeing his Geet.

Possessive Maan lol, I love that guy. No fuse no switch he just appears out of nowhere, all commanding and irrational but it has a certain fun factor lol

They are finally getting married, at last

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Last part

OOO I made it to the final line, blimey you'll be like good riddance lol. I know im sorry for being like the slowest reader on earth, tortoise Soph lol now im in the same league as TMJ hahahaha

The edits beautiful as usual, a new editor I see but it sets the scene for the final chapter.

I love that candid shot of them laughing at the wedding, suits your story. The wedding was so beautifull written, Armaan finally found courage to ask his girl out or dance lol. Everyone's really happy aww. I like this relationship brewing between meghna and Maan.

Maan though is a BCC is its truest form lol, bechari geet. He never stops kidding, does he? The fight of Mumbai and dehli remains, I see lol.

And they live happily ever after.


Thank you for a beautiful story yet again Avi.

You never fail to disappoint Wonderwoman.

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If you get out on the ocean
If you sail out on the sea
If you get up in the mountains
If you go climbing on trees
Oh or through every emotion
When you know that they don't care
Darling, that's when I'm with you
Oh, I'll go with you anywhere


Passenger - Anywhere
(love this song, not everyone's cup of tea, i get it. my sisters don't like them but weirdly enough they are my go to people when im down😃)


Thats your Maan or Maans for me, he is the most noblest and in love Maan's i have ever read whether its in here or Locket or the several other stories i've read of yours. i love how in love your Maan's tend to be. This song fits him like a glove, he'll absolutely will go anywhere with Geet. But Geet's no different, i suppose.

Thank you once again for a beautifully told story.
Avi do write something new, so i can go everywhere with you 😳😆
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i never asked but is there an epi for this ?😕
if so waiting😃

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