Zindagi- Parvorni FF chapter 7

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Summary: a story about three individual, whose life intertwine, All because of surogecy, and how they learn and grow from their mistakes while creating a family of their own.


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Prologue: PAGE 1

Chapter1:page2

Chapter 2; page 2

Chapter 3; page 2

Chapter 4; page 3

Chapter 5; page 3

Chapter 6; page 4

Chapter 7; page 4
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Prologue


Life is a game of chance, you take what you can get. You may try to change it, but at the end of the day. Its not up to us, but God.

Hospital

" ahh!!! This bloody hurt so bad " a women nearly in her twenties said.

" doctor, will she be alright? She wasn't due until next week"

" she must have went through something. Was she stressed about something? "

The women dressed luxury turn to her husband in question. Her husband recalled talking to teni, but she was busy reading a letter. He remember telling her to sit down, but he knew how hard headed she could be. The man sigh " she looked tense while reading a letter sent to her"

The doctor says " do you know what was written in the letter?"

The men shook his head. They turn to the door when they heard another screech. The doctor said it was time, he says she will need someone near her. He asks who was her husband. The women looks down.

She sigh before looking at her husband " Parth?!" " go, I will wait"

The man now known as Parth tense " I can't not without you"

The women shook her head " she needs you right now"

" are you sir?"

She nods. Parth stared at her a little longer, before making his mind. " you know I love you right"

" I know"

He hugs her before going with the doctor. Shovori sadly says " I also know you love her too, you just don't see it yet"

Few hours later...

A baby voice was all they heard. Shovori was crying with happyness, while Parth was holding his son. Teni smile, before she could hold him. Parth quickly rush with the baby and gives it to Shovori. " look.. isn't he handsome. Our baby, our joy, his finally here"

Teni watching from the door, frown. She felt something, like she was intruded. She laugh at the irony. " what did I expect. I'm not his mother" she cried.

Parth turn just in time to see teni covering herself to sleep. He walk back in with Shovori saying " teni has bought us so much happiness, she has the right to name our child."

Shovori nod. The baby starts to cry, Parth tries to sooth him, but he failed miserably. Shovori asks him to give her son to her. She rocks the baby an starts to sing. The baby slowly goes back to sleep. Parth was impressed " your more experience than I am"

" what do you expect, I read the books"

" I did too" he defends

Shovori smile " I went to the classes "

Parth laughs " I participated"

" so did I"

" OK this is getting no where"

" your right, let's call it a truce for now" she says

" deal"

Their little banter was cut short, when the doctor cleared his throat. " I will need the baby name, while the nurses make sure his alright"

Parth looking at the doctor says they we're hoping teni would name the child. .the doctor agreed, before taking their son. Shovori tense, she pull Parth to the side " but you know how traditional your family is. They will want to do a naming ceremony. "

" as long as teni gives us the name, their won't be a problem"

" I guess" she says a little sadden

Parth seeing the look asks her what's wrong. Shovori bite her lower lip " it's nothing "

"Come on tell me" he says holding her chin.

" I was kinda hoping to give him his name. I mean, I never got to experience him inside of me, and I just want to give him something that will live a mark."

Parth smile " you will..that is your love and care"

" your right, but I feel like it's my right to give him his name "

" shovori " he says tense

To be continued...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG, this is awesome 👏 Absolutely loved it. It made me realize how much potential this story has!
Welcome to the forum and thanks for this story. Looking forward to read 😊
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Originally posted by: _goofyCat_

OMG, this is awesome 👏 Absolutely loved it. It made me realize how much potential this story has!

Welcome to the forum and thanks for this story. Looking forward to read 😊




Thanks I'm a fan of this show. I post comments on telly update all the time lol, I thought hard on how to write this without doing any ships. , I prefer to give each of them Parth attention. Basically staying mutual. While keeping the characters personality the same. I also hope, this forum becomes active a lot like other forums😊😊
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Excellent start. Liked the positive treatment. With your creative genius you have tried to balance the characters by draping them in a favourable manner.
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Chapter 1


For these two lovers life gave them a new opportunity, while for teni, she learned that theirs something greater then money, and that came in the forum of a child.

Flashback


Here she was getting ready to sleep with a man to make his dream come true. Putting her lip stick on, she wonder if this was the right course of action. The doctor said, the insemination didnt work, but she was sure she was pregnant. I mean for crying out loud, she ate sour food. Which she rarely did.

She look at herself in the mirror, " I look hot, like a million box" she says, but why does she feel unworthy. Is she doing the right thing? She questioned.

Otherside

Parth was pacing back an forth. He was more guilty then ever. He remember his argument with Shovori, saying he can do any thing but this, he can not. He promised to only be hers, but she's litterly telling him to go for it. He knew she was hurting, just as much as he was. So then how can she tell him to sleep with another women.

He remember questioning her if their vow means nothing to her. She had cried breaking down. Saying what choice do they have. " our time is running out, sooner or later dadaji will find out. "

Parth bold his fist " it's better to tell him than doing this. Lets go an inform him everything "

Shovori quickly wipes her tears " please Parth, don't do this. This is our last chance to bring the family together. This child will be our light that unites us. "

" I don't care about that child, we can always adopt. But this please don't ask me to do this"

"Parth" she says

When he didn't look at her, she frown. She grab his hand and puts it on her head " I am hurting just thinking about you sleeping with another. Its wrong to even ask of you to do it. We made a vow on our wedding day. You said you will always make me happy. Having this baby will make me happy"

" shovori "

She shook her head " no Parth, will you back down from the vow you made"

" this is not fair Shovori"

" I know"

" will you be happy knowing it won't be a part of you?"

She hesitate, " of course not, but he will be part of you. Thats all that matters""

Parth sigh " is this what you really want "

" yes" she softly said

" then I will do it"

When he said this her heart broke. Deep down, she was hoping he said no, tuck her out of it. But he didn't, she knew she caused this. And now she will have to bare the pain. She watch as Parth leaves. When she was sure he was gone, she fell down crying.

Parth snap out of it when teni came out. He could hear the thunder booming, while the light starts to flick. Teni swung her pony tail hair, while singing. Suddenly the lights turned off. She wonder if he turned it off " he moves fast" she mumbles

She walk to Parth, now face to face " how do we do this?" She says

Parth tense, he didn't really know how to approach her. Teni seeing the look says " you and your wife led me to this point. And now your backing out"

Parth snap out of it " I just need a moment "

Teni sigh, she wonder what could be so difficult. Once they consume, he can go. She smirk, maybe his shy seeing her beauty. I will just have to do things myself, she thought

She took the first approach, grabbing Parth hand, before dragging him to her room. Once their, she pushes him on the bed. Causing him to sit down. She played some music, to motivate him, but Parth still didn't move. Teni frown, this guy is getting on my nerve.

Angry , she stood in front of him, glaring at him " what is your deal, why can't you understand the faster we do this, the faster we can forget this"

Parth look at her, teni says " you we're all confidence about this surogecy, but now your chicken out. Could it be you lost your touch" when she said that, Parth grab her hand, Teni was surprise to feel his strong grip. He pulls her and reverse their position.

He look down upon her " do you not feel, guilty or nervous. Your a women too, you should understand my wife situation. "

When she didn't respond he says " this is a big deal for a women, but the way your behaving it makes it seem like it's not. Maybe your not what I thought you we're"

Teni eyes widen, understanding his words. Parth still holding her hand, could feel her hand shaking. He stare a little at her eyes " Teni is this your first tim-"

Before he could respond, she pushes him of her. " your right, maybe I'm not what you expected. You and your wife are always quick to judge my character. Its becoming a habit for you rich people"

Parth got up " Teni I didn't mean it like th-"

" Yes you did, your not wrong either" " I love money, I would do anything for money. Even sleep with a married men, I have no regret as long as I get my money. Because I don't care about others but myself. Your right, I guess I am what you thought I am." She says full of emotion.

Parth was about to touch her shoulder, but she starts to walk away . Before she was out the room, she fell on the floor. " Teni!!" He screams .

Few hours later...

Parth was watching her, while jalpa checks Her. " what's wrong with her?" He asks

Jalpa looks at him " it sees like I had it wrong"

" what do you mean?"

She sigh before smiling " Teni is pregnant "

That night so much emotions we're running through Parth. Relief, shock, happyness and more. While another was crying out of guit.

End of flashback

Parth was soon snap out of it, when his phone rang. He told Shovori it was his mom. Shovori told him to answer. When he did, his mom asks if she gave birth. Parth nod, she inform the rest of the family and they smile. Indu says they are on their way to see her an the baby. Dadaji says Shovori must be tierd. The two tense. When the phone disconnect, Shovori starts to panick. " what are we gonna do?" She says


To be continued...

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Lovely. The chapters have been really good in way we'd expect the story to move. Good job 👍🏼
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Interesting chapter. Nicely written. Keep it up.!!
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fabulous chapters expect the same from the show
keep writing
waiting for further updates
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Chapter 2




Parth says if they find her walking around, they will get suspicious. " then what should we do?"

Parth thought about it. He step out with shovori before talking with the doctor. The doctor wasn't to keen on the idea, but he did it anyway. They drag shovori to a new room, where they told her to dress up. Shovori after getting dress, lay on the bed. Jalap walks in with some equipment. Parth asks what it was for.

" this will get her tierd. Its believable enough until they leave"

Parth wasn't really sure about this. Shovori reassure him that she will be fine. " OK"

Few minutes later...

Parth family arrives, dadaJi happy walks to shovori asking if she was fine. Indu says she's so happy, she asks to see the baby. Parth says the baby is sleeping in the nursing room. Indu frown. She was hoping to see the baby. Mohini says, " how can they take him from you already"

" it's fine i was tierd anyway"

" no its not, you probably beg them to let him stay"

" mohini, we will see him tomorrow. Shovori needs rest , after giving birth to a boy"

Dada eyes widen " a boy?"

They both nod. Indu became so happy " i cant believe this, i bet he looks just like parth"

Shovori couphs " its not just parth, he has a part of me too"

Parth laughs " yes he does"

While the family talk with shovori, parth excuse himself.

Elsewhere

Teni woke up to see her room empty. She remebered she gave birth not to long ago. In pain, she got up, just then parth walks in. " teni your up"

" yeah, how long was i asleep"

" its really late"

He looks at her getting up, she almost slip, but he held her " you cant leave teni, your not well. "

Teni smile " whats this, parth sir worried about me"

Parth removes his hand " yes i am"

" why?" " i mean the baby is gone, theirs no need to worry about me."


Parth stays silent for a second " teni, would you like to see him?"

" what?"

" the baby , would you like to see him?"

Teni was conteplating for a second. Parth didnt give her a chance to speak. He pulls her gently towards the door leading to the nursing room. Teni complain saying she wants to go home, she doesnt want too. By the time they made it, she stops talking. Parth smile " look his over there."

" shovori and i wanted you to name him. you have every right" teni surprise looks at him.

" his your son. I dont have any relation with him" she says in denial.

The truth is, durring these month. Teni has come to love the baby. Even more then money, a part of her dont want to loose him, but she made a promise to the too. Shes not that type that will break a deal.

Parth says in head. You dont know how right you are, but shovori wants to nane him herself. I dont want to get inbetween you too, but you have every right to name him, since you bought him to this world.

The nurse stepping out, was about to lock the door. But parth stops her, he asks her if he can see his baby for a few minute. The nurse tense. " fine, just make it fast"

" thank you"

He pulls teni to the room before going to the baby dressed in blue. " look at him" he says smiling

Teni turn her head away. Afraid, she was afraid that if she look, she will give in. She won't leave him.

Signing he picks the baby and gives it to Teni. Teni surprise, didn't know how to hold it. She was scared to drop him. "D-dont let him fall" she says

" I won't, just hold him"

" I can't"

" Teni, it's fine. You went to the class" " you can do this"

" OK, OK"

She held the baby far away from her chest. Parth gently push the baby near. " see, nothing happen"

Teni smile while looking down. " your right, I'm holding him"

Parth look at her one last time before stepping out. Teni watch as the baby open his eye. He stares at her, trying to figure out who she was.

Teni emotional says " don't look at me with those eyes"

The baby starts to smile, when he recognize her " don't think I will hold you like this again "

When the baby moves to yawn, Teni thought he was about to cry. She panicked, but stop when he smile again " Teni, doesn't have a family, she's been alone for a long time. She doesn't need one" she says recalling the letter.

Soon tears starts to come out, falling on the baby forehead. " I'm sorry" she says wiping it.

" Parth wants me to name you, but it's not fair to shovori. She has claim on you. But if I was to name you, I would name you parkash. "

The baby made a coo sound. " you like that name, then it will be our secret"

Suddenly the baby starts to get hungry, he starts to wail. The nurse came in, saying he needs to eat. Teni says then get him baby food. The nurse couphin " he will need to be breast feed"

"Huh?!" Teni says

Parth hearing the whole conversation sigh. I guess Teni wasn't paying attention durring the class.

To be continued...

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