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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harmanjot

Beautiful OS Mayu🤗




You have written this OS with more depth. The pain which Vivi bearing from four years converts into hatred. Today she hates Atharav for ditching her & Sujata chachi too. The two women which he loves unconditionally.

Vivi may hate Atharav but she stills love Atharav only.8
You have very well depicted their emotions too.

I liked this writing style & has more depth.❤️



Jottie🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Yes, the biggest hatred she has for him is that he left her without an explanation. He ditched her, if he would have given her an explanation she would have been a bit bitter but would have not hated him. A part of her says that he will come back, a part still hates him and doesn't believe in her heart.

I shall continue in this style maybe.

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: EternalStars.

Such a beautiful piece..👏 It had a different perspective. Almost as if it was Vividha herself talking.😳


Thankyou so much😳

Yes, her POV is very important as her life has been the most tumultuous. And now she is a mother too!

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Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mayu-


Hinal🤗

Hiii 😃

Blame mujhe nai ViTharv ko jaana chahiye. They bought you here to forums😆 Not me;)

You spoke like a lawyer 😆

I can understand, the story itself has left me damaged. This story was basically written because I have yet not understood her POV which is very much needed. She was ditched by the man she loved at the altar, though I don't support her decision of marrying Ravish on rebound, it was also Sujata making her go ahead with the wedding But I am glad that Sujata and Vividha are together, sharing their pain.

That is true! I do not relate with the story at all anymore. Though you really did a great job making me feel like wanting to look at it from a different perspective! That is an incredible thing you achieved :)

For her Ravish is just her friend and the father her son can look upto. Nothing else. And I am equally troubled by this as everyone is a victim here due to few people's ego.

I don't know what to think about him. I mean he had the option to say no, but he didn't (from what I gather at least). I don't know
But I agree; everyone is a victim in one way or the other

That's the biggest aspect of ViTharv love- they hate and love each other with equal passion. They fight and makeup with equal passion. That's how their love is! Simple and raw!❤️

Yess <3 That is why I keep returning to JNDSD. Just for them two and their love.

Thankyou for appreciating my new style of penning down OS. I was suggested by my friend on birdland, and hence I did use it. 😳

Anytime Mayu 😳🤗


Love,
Mayu

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