The Last Letter-Shraman OS *Shravan's POV*

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing Girl
You have expressed his view wonderfully and last lines are simply killing
And hope they will meet for sake of their love

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awww so heart-breaking heart-wrenching heart-touching yet sooo beautiful in-depth as usual dear...sooo love it...got me in tears smiling through tears...Feel so bad for both Shravan Sumo SHRAMAN...all I would like to advise is SUMO SHRAVAN of this STORY should speak to each other...Kahi unki khamoshiyan jeet na jaaye unke pyar se...Mil Jaane De Dil Jo Bane Hai EK DUJE KE VAASTE...I really wish this from bottom of my heart hun...Lots of love hugs...Spandana

Edited by sptrno - 8 years ago

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

So very beautiful!!!

Shravan here is so much image concious just like the Sumo in the show...

I am sure that if both of them take the pain of reading the other's letter, their MUs are certain to vanish..

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Utterly beautiful! !

Such low opinion about himself..! 💔
Image consciousness..! The Saga continues..!
Both of them play their part to be in each others vicinity..!🤗

I hope future brings them together...for the sake of love,,their love.! ❤️
The last declaration was! ! Unabashedly yours!!

Thanks for writing Shravan's pov! 😊

Awww Thank You :)

I hope so too that the future is bright for them.

Anytime.

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Pravas007
Wonderfully written 👏

Beautiful OS

Thank You! :)

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Wow! I loved the whole feel of this letter.
It had that rebellious, prohibited sort of love that makes me swoon. The ambiguity and subtlness of it all was wonderfully penned.
A wonderful read!

Glad you liked it.

Thank You! :)

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

AWESOME..!!!! 🤗

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Poulami

@Poulami11

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Wow! Mittu 🤗

I really didn't expect tht you would write Shravan's POV too. Sumo's one was really beautiful, heart touching, but Shravan's !! It much more than her, beyond expections.

The guilt, the pain of his beautifully personified. Poor baby, May be his life had played many cruel games with him such an early age, leaving him as spineless, tht he hadn't stand straight against wrong, even in front of his friends too. He lost all his self confidence. But still he has a soft & beautiful heart, May be he can't fought but deep inside his heart he adores her.

Uff! It's touching. I love it. How do I write Such brilliant pieces?

Keep writing dear. I'm the fan of yours :)

Edited by Poulami11 - 8 years ago

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

beautifully penned...
touching it is...
loved it...

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Mittu... 🤗
another fabulous piece dear.. 👏
shra POV and his.weakness of depending upon his friends and.his.love for sumo .. awesome yr..❤️
shra fear of being left out and his.noticing every move of sumo...beautifully written dear.. 👏
the last.line "Ankhon ko teri aadat hai,tuu dikhe na toh inhe shikayat hai!" love it...❤️
thnx for pm dear... 😃