Beautiful - Shraman OS -16+

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Hi All EDIKVIANS,
I am back again with my pagalapanti wala OS 😉
Please yaroo sambhal lena not good with romantic stuff but tried out 😳
This is for 16+ so please bachhe log don't spoil your brains 😆😛
I don't think there is any need to mention which episode i have targeted this time 😃
I have used "Tu etani khoobasoorat" song from barkha movie
okay okay chalo ab bakwas band aur update shuru 😃


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Shraman OS - Beautiful...

Shravan's POV

"Why this brat always need to become a tail for everyyone who is gonna visit TK??" i rasped after aditya left to park car in front of Tiwari Killa

His over charming gesture was really getting into my nerves now, i am getting irritated now "but leave it" rolled my eyes and headed toward TK main gate.

When i entered Tk mausaji and mamaji was on their way to go somewhere "Namaste Mausaji mamaji" as usual greeted them by joining my hands with a warm smile

"are shravan beta kaise ho, beta hum ye jara mata ka mandir usaka plan laptop pe dekh rahe hai" mamaji aimed at laptop in his hand "tum aao na" though i dont need anyone's permission to enter in TK as i said its my home too but then too i obeyed him and turned to enter inside

"Ji Ji bas mein apaka yahi pe wait..." i couldn't finish as my legs freezes at place with the sight in front of my eyes
SUMO... my SUMO wearing this beautiful peach and golden lahenga and "What she is coming toward me" of course but she didn't noticed me, i really don't want to feel like an idiot if she catch me red handed while gawking her.

She is looking angelic in this lahenga no no she is looking dazzling, divine, marvelous, ravishing, Gorgeous, breathtaking wait really this word are enough to admire her beauty no definitely they are not.

If i use all adjectives to complement her beauty they wont be enough i know..

"Stop gawking her Shravan" my inner-voice warned me "For god sake shift your gaze you buffoon" again this internal voice oh god
"I will go crazy man" if this will continue then wont be able to hold myself back

"Dekhona kaisa lag raha hai suman di pe ye lahenga" thank got finally preeti knocked sense into me

I sized her up from toe to head, she clasped fingers thumb on top in nervousness credit goes to my heated gaze

When our eyes met i saw something into those two hazelnut eyes but "What is that" was that the reflection of love which i am holding in my orbs

"she is waiting for our response you dullard" again my inner-voice interrupted my thoughts
It seems everything vanished into thin air only me and my sumo yes MY SUMO, she is mine and i need woo her today

"Stop Shravan, don't forget she is avoiding you, she is the one who pushed you every time, she is the one who had a change of heart " again my devil inner-voice interrupted

But it seems my heart is intractable today, "For god sake go to hell you moron inner-voice" my heart exhorted

unwittingly i walked up to her, our closeness was enough to show me that pink in her cheeks I knew something serious is afoot, she is looking everywhere but not at me,
But i want her to look at me so hold her chin making her look at me.

"Beautiful!!! Help me sumo ke mein tumase apani najare hata saku" she smiled at me
"she didn't pushed me away" Oh my mind just slipped! My gaze stopped at her slightly parted luscious lips,
yes her pink glossy lips it seems painter had used the shining pink color on his brush in two smooth strokes, tapering at the start and the end.
My start and my end...

Tu itni khoobsurat hai
Fida deedaar pe tere

"Today don't ask to stop me sumo" i couldn't fight against the thoughts that were going through me and leaned closer and she closed her eyes in the heat of the moment giving me permission.
Her very smell was flooding my senses now...
Finally today after waiting for ages my lips brushed on hers slowly, I want to pull away before I lose myself but I can't seem to nor she did...In this minty moment...

Muqammal ishq ho mera
Zara sa pyaar toh de de

I kissed her and the world fell away. It was slow and soft pouring my heart out, comforting in ways that words would never be. My hand rested below her ear my thumb caressing her cheek as our breaths mingled
Her hands moved in agreement with me and rested on my chest as if she comprehended my fast heartbeats and wanted to slow down them with her touch...

Falak kadamon pe aa jhuke
Haseen lamhaat woh de de
Tere sang bheeg jaaun main
Kabhi barsaat woh de de
Tere bina jeena pade
Woh pal mujhe naa de

"Clanggg" that noise of keys dropped from aditya's hand broke us apart

"Shravan..." she whispers slowly, prolonging each letter as if to savor them. I smiled, my heart fluttered at her voice as I clasp my hands on either side of her face. Never before has my name ever felt so wonderful a one...

I darted my eyes and found two flabbergasted human beings
one poor soul completely scandalized and another soul crestfallen with my over the top escapade

Sumo suddenly became aware of her surroundings "Uhhh...mein change karake ati hu" she excused herself and sprinted to her room but only after depicting me blush crawl up her neck starting from her beet red chicks

I was really enjoying aditya's predicament, how can he think he can win my sumo's heart with his charm?...i smirked to him and he gulp down hardly

Yes she was mine, is mine and will be mine till i am breathing!!!

I scratched back of head tried to hide my flushed face and glanced to preeti... and she deciphered my sentiments...
silently i asked her help and she gestured reassuringly and i obliged...
made my way to sumo's room

Tu hi shaamil raha duaa mein meri
Naam tera rahaa zubaan pe meri
Zikr tera fikr teri har ghadi dil mein mere

"The only girl exists for me in whole world MY SUMO, really i kissed her or its one of my numerous fantasies" i touched my bottom lip and felt her gloss.. my lips curved into pleasant smile

"Is she mad at me?" i thought "no no otherwise she would have pushed you when leaned for kiss" and a small loving Smile started playing on my lips

"But why she went without saying anything" i frowned
"Bewkoof ladki hai wo sabke samane kiss karne ke baad teri tarah besharam hoke nahi khadi rah sakati hai" i slapped myself mentally

when i entered her room she was standing in window looking outside still in the lahenga "i knew it she just made excuse to elope from there" i smirked

"Sumo..." only words more as whisper came out from my mouth
but she didn't budged

"Is she really mad at me...i should say sorry" nothing else came in my mind at that instant and decided to obey my brain first time after entering TK today

"Sumo i am sorry, i mean actually woh means bahar meine jo bhi kiya matlab tumhe kiss kiya sabke samne usake liye" its came more as stammer from my mouth though i have no regret on my deeds but what if she did? and i felt a spasm in my body

i didn't received any response so finally decided to leave and turn around...

"Chashmish..." my heart started dancing after hearing chashmish from her mouth after so long time...it felt like song to me

somehow managed to conceal my elation and turned plastering flat look on my face

but she is still looking outside window
"chashmish andar aa aur darwaja band kar de" she spoke softly and felt my sumo is back yes she is back
At the drop of a hat i closed door...

"Bolo..." she demanded
i cocked my brow "what exactly she want to hear" and line of confusion appeared on my forehead

"Kya sumo..." how can i forgot "yes sorry woh.." my chin dipped down

"Sach...bolo chashmish" she demanded firmly but i felt she is smiling

"Shravan for god sake don't beat around the bush today tell her that you love her" i thought and decided to hit nails on the head

so i started walking toward her with small footsteps may be because of my racing heart... i can't deal with my two racing organs at a time

"sumo kuch kahna hai tumase" she hummed

"Actually woh woh mein yeh.." i felt a tight knot in my stomach so clasped my hands to pacify myself

Closed my eyes and took a deep breath
"Sumo aaj tak kabhi nahi kah paya haan koshish bahot ki lekin nahi kah paya lekin aaj mein tumase kuchh kahna chahta hu" she stared me intensely with those hazelnut eyes

Dekhna munasib nahi farebi si aankho me...
pata nahi aur kya kya haarta chala jau

"sumo aise mat dekho sab kuchh har gaya hu en ankho mein already ab kuchh nahi bacha mere pas" she smiled beatifically and its more of like assurance for me
she looked away trying to hide her rosy pink chicks
"agar tum us din coffee shop me aa jati to aaj aise sabke samane mein..." i said sheepishly while running fingers through my hair

she leaned forward and rested her head on my chest where my heart used stay beneath before ages and wrapped her tiny hands around my torso, i felt her smile against my chest and my hands moved on their own accord to wrap her in a warm swaddle of my chest and big, strong arms and she snuggled in

In her embrace the world stopped still on its axis.
This was the love i'd waited for, prayed for. I inwardly thanked God and hugged all the tighter.
A love like this was to be cherished for life.
Finally, i am home and don't want to leave.

Falak kadamon pe aa jhuke
Haseen lamhaat woh de de
Tere sang bheeg jaaun main
Kabhi barsaat woh de de
Tere bina jeena pade
Woh pal mujhe naa de

"Sumo..." i moaned and rested my chick on her head
"humm..." she nuzzled again i cant do anything other than admire her ardently with smile plastered on face
"I LOVE YOU SUMO" finally i confessed, how easy it is? but being an idiot i have waited those precious 12 years in my rage and after that too behaved like complete jerk

she slightly pulled her head back to look at me and her eyes twinkled
"Kitna wait karwaya chashmish" she turned scarlet

"Sorry sumo bahot late kar diya meine" i felt light twinge of sorrow for wasting so much time when she was actually waiting for my confession

"Sorry mat bolo mere shravan chashmish tumane late nahi kiya bas muze jyada intjar karwaya...10 sal" she smile radiantly perfectly reflecting mine

"Actually sumo muze kuchh dena tha tumhe apane pyar ka izhar karne se pahale" i thought about my first and last love letter without that i felt this confession was incomplete

she smiled coyly "muze pata hai tumhe kya dena tha"

"Kya?" i felt perplexed about what she was talking about because as per me no one read that letter as i was accustomed of hiding it as a treasure...
yes its a treasure for me my first letter

"meien padh liya tha...and answer is yes" i lifted my brow in question
"I Love you too my chashmish, aaj tumane muze sare bandhano, majbooriyon se azad kar diya" her eyes welled up and a lone tear made its way down to her chick
i cant see tears in those eyes in which my life lies, so wiped out them tenderly
with pad of my thumb

"lekin sumo ye galat baat hai tumane mera letter kyu aur kab padha ?" i pouted tried to lighten her mood

"Use din jab tum London jane wale the and i came to help you in packing..." she grinned

"Ohh to eiliye madam muze puch rahi thi ki meine kisise pyar kiya tha kya? apane dil ki baat kah do? blah blah...hai na?" she nodded sheepishly and i tapped her forehead lightly
"bewkoof sidhe sidhe nahi pooch sakati thi ki shravan tum muzase pyar karate ho ki nahi faltoo me etana time waste kiya"

"tum hi to bol rahe the ki i have moved on to kya despo banake tumse puchati" she pouted making her more tempting

The next thing I knew that i slammed my lips to her and nearly knocked all wind from her lungs, i nibbled on her bottom lip
and she gasped
I hardly gave a moment to react her before pressing my tongue to the seam of her lips and, at her grant of access, delved inside her mouth.

Her hands started caressing my hairs and my hands drifted to her hip, It settled there and pulled her closer, our breaths mingled. I felt i am addicted.
I couldn't bare not to be with her.
These kisses are my salvation and my torment. I lived for them and I would die with the memory of them on my lips

Ishq ki dastaan judaa hai meri
Tu hi dono jahaan bakhuda hai meri
Yaar mere sirf teri tishnagi lab pe mere

I pulled back as felt sumo was running out of breath and can clearly see her flushed face on my sudden move

"shravan ye kya tha bata to dete" she chided and whacked on my chest

"Kya tha kya ab esaki adat dal lo samazi jab bhi mera man karega mein to apana kiss le lunga, aur waise tum jab bhi pout karati ho i cant resist from kissing you so jab bhi pout karogi samaz lena you will be getting kissed" i shrugged

"Hww shravan besharam kahike dikhate to sharif ho aur harkate besharmo jaisi" she jested

"hmm sumo madam bahot sharafat dikha di ab to tum sirf besharmi dekhogi meri" i winked and blush burned through her cheeks and her face felt like a hot oven

Falak kadamon pe aa jhuke
Haseen lamhaat woh de de
Tere sang bheeg jaaun main
Kabhi barsaat woh de de
Tere bina jeena pade
Woh pal mujhe naa de

she attempted to hide her flushed face in my chest and i hugged her more tightly gathering my whole world in my arms with the feeling of togetherness

Tu itni khoobsurat hai
Fida deedaar pe tere
Muqammal ishq ho mera
Zara sa pyaar toh de de

"Shravan tum muze kabhi chod ke to nahi jaoge na" she whispered in my chest
"Sumo for that i need to stop breathing" i replied earnestly

"Shravan kuchh bhi ho jaye tum muzase etanahi pyar karoge" i felt some wetness near my chest

"are baba mera pyar din dugana raat chaugana badhega tum tension mat lo" i jested and earned a soft whack

"Lekin shravan gharwale" i felt hesitation in her voice

"Sumo bharosa hai muzape" i know we have bunch of issues to resolve but i know we together can make everything perfect but this is our moment and i don't want any thought made my love sad

"Khudse jyada bharoda hai" i sighed with the feeling of most wealthiest man on earth on her reply

"To muzpe bharosa rakho mein sab thik kar dunga, promise" i tighten my hold reassuringly

"Pakka...promise"

"Tumhara promis and God Promise" and planted a kiss on her head

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Finally done with this...now i can sleep peacefully
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really dont know how it turned up please let me know you views 😊
PS: i will not send PM to all as don't have proof of age 😕
so please help yourselves who all are 16+ 😉

PSS: Dont forget to like and comment if you like it, even criticism is welcomed

Thank you all
Priti

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One word : Beautiful!!!!!
One word ; Love!!!!!


Lubna.
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Finally they confess to each other..
Oh God tk hall mai samne kiss kiya 😉
Beautiful OS
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Kash show mein woh sapna na woh haqqeqat hota toh hum bhi kuch aisa besharam Shravan ko dekh pate.. 😉

But CVs ne humari ummedon pe pani pher diya tha..😭
But it was beautiful OS preeti. 👏

Thank You... This is for you a 🤗 for turning the beautiful moment of Shraman like this... ❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww its soo nice.
actually Shravan's conversations with his mind and heart is very funny.
Aur confession part bhi acchi hai.
i loved it
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Beautiful writeup dear...!!
Sharavan kissed her in hall n Aditya saw them...too good 😳
Loved Shravan-Sumo convo...❤️
ShraMan's confession...❤️
Truly beautiful dear... 👏
Keep writing...would love to read 😊
Loads of Love
Nik🤗
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Kaaash show me b aisa hota. Lekin nhi ego ego and ego... This Os is like dream come true Awesome baby
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Lovely OS... Confession scene is beautiful
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I God bichare mosi and mausaji🤣
Aditya k sath to yehi hona tha 😡
And that kiss oh god i was blushing 😳
And "bohot shrafat dikhali ab tum sirf meri besharmi dekhogi " 🤪 sooo cute
Kaash ye besharmi show me karta
But no prob we have you writing this awesome stuffease write more loved it 😃

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