Beautiful - Shraman OS -16+ - Page 3

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Kaaash show me b aisa hota. Lekin nhi ego ego and ego... This Os is like dream come true Awesome baby

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

I God bichare mosi and mausaji🤣

Aditya k sath to yehi hona tha 😡

And that kiss oh god i was blushing 😳

And "bohot shrafat dikhali ab tum sirf meri besharmi dekhogi " 🤪 sooo cute

Kaash ye besharmi show me karta

But no prob we have you writing this awesome stuffease write more loved it 😃

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Haaye Pretty Priti mai kaise isko padhe bina so gayi kal... But subah fresh ho gayi ekdum. I wish... Sooo wish ki ye hua hota.. ya atleast aisa kuch to hua hota. 😭

Par tumne dil ki muraad puri kar di. Shravan manned up!! And Sumo did not back out.😳

You song selections 👏

Perfect.

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Very well writen os preeti
All emotions are like wwh wah
Suman and shravan kissed in real 😳
Their dialogue is too goood !!maza aa gaya
Plz give more such piece of writing
Mch love
Tina
😊

Originally posted by: evaviego

WOW. i always wanted someone to write on that track. Kaafi potential wala track tha. waste kar diya CVs ne.

Thanks Preets.

Good one. 👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Wow! It was such a good scene! But of course cvs ruined it! You penned it beautifully! Loved it to the core! Keep writing this little some things!

Originally posted by: Sunain

Prrriittiii!!!!🤗

😆😆

Mein yahan bhi agae...😳

haha tu to hamesha welcome hai ji mera devil 🤗

wht a Beeeautifulll OS dear!⭐️

I soo loved it!❤️

thank you my lil cute devil 😊

"Why this brat always need to become a tail for everyyone who is gonna visit TK??"...i can imagine how pissed he wud be tht moment😆😆..and looking heel adorable😳...wel mein bhi sath mein hi curse karti Aditya ko😡

he is such a jerk na i know 😡

Owwii Maa...Shravan all admiring her...fighting with his inner force which attracting him towrds her to shut up...😆

haha nahi rok paya na kya kare 😳

Shravan and his inner voice chit chat..tht was Aeosum!⭐️

"Beautiful!!! Help me sumo ke mein tumase apani najare hata saku"...haay mein maar jawan😳...😆

yeh to EDKV ka hai 😉

"Today don't ask to stop me sumo"...arey bdhu rokna chahta kon hai..hum tu khud tumhein mokay dena chahtay hain😆...oh..tht kiss was ❤️...beautifully penned!⭐️

haha i was blushing so hard while writing this ☺️

"Clanggg"...Bingo..bang on!!!..party time🥳🥳..Adiya ka bachay ko akal agae ho gi😈😆

jyada smart banata hai na to lo

one poor soul completely scandalized and another soul crestfallen with my over the top escapade...🤣🤣...ohh i so loved this part😆😆..yes i was also enjoying Aditay's predicament😆..he shud knw...as Shravan said"

Yes she was mine, is mine and will be mine till i am breathing!!!"😳

yes she belongs to him and him only 😆

Ohh..their room convo was outstanding..the way Suman demanded a confession was👏

I really loved tht part😳

"sumo aise mat dekho sab kuchh har gaya hu en ankho mein already ab kuchh nahi bacha mere pas"...❤️

haan to bichari sabke samne kiss kar diya aur dil ki bat bolne me kya hota hai 😲

Awwwh tht hugg...lovely❤️

The love confession was an adorable one..the whole scene was narrated hell brilliantly!⭐️

thank you my devil😃

oye meri...you are hell terrific at writting kissing scenes...this one was...Engaging one..really beautifully penned!👏

aww thank you ☺️

"hmm sumo madam bahot sharafat dikha di ab to tum sirf besharmi dekhogi meri"...🤣...❤️...humein bhi dekhao na😳😆

mere sare shravan besharam hi hai lagta hai next time thoda sharmila lekar aana padega 😉

"are baba mera pyar din dugana raat chaugana badhega tum tension mat lo"...❤️

"Tumhara promis and God Promise" ...is line nay tu dil hi jeet lea❤️

woah priti..you are soo amazing at writing such romantic stuffs...hats off dear!👏

I must say u shud rite more often!😉

hmm likhane waqt pata chalta hai kitna mein khud blush karati hu puri red ho jati hu mere sehat ke liya khatarnak hai ☺️

It was reallly stupendously penned!👏 and was a hell enchanting one!⭐️

I so loved it!❤️

awaiein kah rhi thii ki bekar hai..pagal larki..itna zabardast tu likha hai..khabardar jo issy bikar kaha😡

thank you devil but shant no ghussa 😊

Lots of love for u dear🤗

lot of luv to you my devil 🤗

Take Care!

Sunain❤️

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Beautiful!!!

Kaash asal mein bhi aisa hota, Sumo ke saath saath humare bhi sapne sach ho jaate..

Keep bringing more.