Love Turn Into A Nightmar-Part 3 - Page 24, 6/9/2017 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Feeling not sleepy sitting on the ground, Note-down one crushed newspaper what she got from the road. Her every certificate left behind where she come, this time she have nothing in her hands . Her tummy is growling. She saw her clothes ,it's very dirty then look at that rope that was she hanging in her hut , only one churidar is there hanging. She have only two clothes one she already weard . Tomorrow she will again try to search another job as she didn't have any of her certificates so searching for if anyone giving add for house maid


Next Day



She left for one middle class home where they want one maid for their home chores.

Rang the door bell waiting for someone open the door. After sometime someone opened it.

Person (Lady) : Haan ji koun hai ?
With her bitter voice

Girl : Ji I'm Geet
that lady make a confused face

Lady : Haan toh mai kya karu Geet ji
like taunting

She is feeling so ashamed of herself heard her taunting like that.

Geet : Ji dharasal newspaper mein add diya tha .
Slowly

Lady : Kounsa Add ?
Making a face

Geet : Maid chahiye aapko ?
With hope if she got this job

Lady : Oo woh wala job ...acha...acha
she remember and laughed then saw her if she is some dirt.kya kya kaam aata hai tujhe ? Asked with her bitter voice

Geet : Ji sab kuch .
Slowly

Lady : Ok andar aaja .
She let her entered in her home...Geet saw her home , it's nice "chota hai par accha hai"in her mind because she belongs to high class family. But sadly in past.

That lady pas her some of her dirty clothes then instructed her to clean the floor. After that cooking also ...Giving her instructions she left for her room where someone is waiting for her.


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Khurana Construction



Maan : No no I want to see her begging for every meals...do you get that . How could she got a job ...how ?
he bark at someone in his phone Do whatever you want but I want to see her begging for death that will be also fear come close to her his veins prominent the way he is clinching his fist . Cutting the phone thow it mercilessly on the wall that is now broke into pieces.

Pacing restlesly in this cabin losing his tie that is now chocked him . Throwing ot away.

Maan : How could ? Itni asani se nahi Miss.Handa...itni asani se mai tumhe jane nahi dene wala.
Pushing his hair with both of his hands with frustration. His eyes blood shoot red
Taking his landline as he already broke his phone called someone. After cutting the phone he smirk

Maan : Tch tch tch ...Aab mai bhi dekhta hu , kab tak Maan Singh Khurana se bachogi Miss.Handa
smirk like a cruel man.

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Where Geet cleaning floor just then someone behind her grab her waist tightly.

She jerked only to see one fat man with a dirty smirk looking at her lustfully. She backed seeing him coming closer. About to run towards the door but that lady who give her job closed the door already and block her way . Looks fear both of them where they are laughing at her plight.

Geet : Please mujhe jane do...please mujhe chod do
weeping with hiccup shivering seeing them coming closer. Koi hai help me screaming but no one heard her voice...


Part 2
Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Not opening
Pls send pw
And pls gamblers pw also
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What has Geet done that Maan is behaving like this with her. She gets a job has a maid. She is in danger.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Why is maan harnessing geet why he want her to begwhy he is behind her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing updteee geet got a job as a maid bt maan why he hate soo much geet what geet did that he behaving cruelly with geet waiting for d nxt updteee
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh god why maan why !!!!!
this mystery is killing me ...poor geet !!!!! seems like she is paying for someone else sins ...oh hope maan ends this torture soon ...dam now these men n d lady ...wht they want ??? did maan has something to do with d man???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nic pt
poor geet
in past she belong to high class family
but know she is in worst condition
but why maan is behind her
what she did wrong with maan ?
poor girl is know in danger .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg why maan is doing all this. poor geet, feeling bad for her I hope someone comes to save her. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written! Poor Geet! Y is Maan after here?? update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read both update
Loved it
Why maan is behaving like this
Plz cont soon

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