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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Miss. Entertainment Package , They are going to throw you out if you continue doing such stuff. 😆

Call me to illustrate them? Then toh it is going to be a pakka disaster 🤣

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Dipti madam,

Aapko etne jaldi kaha se ideas aa jate hai. Brilliant concept. Reincarnation, shravan as adil and sumo as ahaana. After rebirth Shravan lawyer se DJ ban gaya but sumo still running catering service...ha ..good one

Loved it

Waiting for nxt writing piece

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Nice one.

You're ingenious Dipti di.

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

You Genius!
I love how your brain works seriouslly, such an amazing concept and I liked Adil's thought process, it gave more depth to his character and Ahaana is a beutiful name ;)
Much Love 🤗

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

HOW CAN YOU BE SOOO QUICK TO IMAGINE THINGS???

matlab yahan episode khatam hua, wahan madam ka update*shakes head*

but i completely think that what happened with adil was correct. for god sake imagine adil as a personality and not namik playing the role, you'll find the faults.

Adil was such an ass!! just because shonali loved the other guy, he rejected the song he was so sure about, I mean seriously

however i love this piece to the core

ahaana?? i thought you would name her Suman...typical stereotypes😃

the reincarnation thing was fab!! adil and ahaana ne voh sapna dekha joh hum bhi kabhi dekhte the...shravan ki sumo..Sumo ka shravan😭

thanks for the PM

love

arpi

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: evaviego
Miss. Entertainment Package , They are going to throw you out if you continue doing such stuff. 😆
ha ha 😆 can you guess who else caught me phasing out in the meeting 😳

yeah I will have to probably spend less time here on the forum but gawd its addiction now. I can't stop myself from logging on in every little break I get.

Throwing out.. haan isse to darr ke rehna hi hoga 😲
Call me to illustrate them? Then toh it is going to be a pakka disaster 🤣

disaster to meri writing se aise hi hoga ☢️.. illustrate kar lena tu aur hum dono hi padhenge ek ek copy print kar ke 🤣

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
HOW CAN YOU BE SOOO QUICK TO IMAGINE THINGS???
matlab yahan episode khatam hua, wahan madam ka update*shakes head*

thanks 😳 mujhe Shravan ki fangirling ne maara...

but i completely think that what happened with adil was correct. for god sake imagine adil as a personality and not namik playing the role, you'll find the faults.

ofcourse he has faults. but they tried to mahatmatize shonali who is as fickle !!

he kept bragging about his jig and how talented he is and how he can get shonali into the concert etc - she kept batting her eyelashes at him !! inspite of having a boyfriend/fiance.

he dumped a girl in 5 mins for his ex. - he was upset to know shonali was engaged in the silly game. then she got upset to know he was still with that ekta kapoor. He took it as a signal and dumped the girl.

last episode me to his buariyaan cannot be counted but they looked forced suddenly... he told her she doesn't have good sense in clothes - she retorted well.

he gifted her the musical instrument - she took it and gave him a hug.

Adil was such an ass!! just because shonali loved the other guy, he rejected the song he was so sure about, I mean seriously

he said he liked her music - she was so happy.

he said she should make some changes (timing was bad) but he is a senior na. pehle to sun liya tha na criticism usne when she was drooling over him in epi 4.

however i love this piece to the core
ahaana?? i thought you would name her Suman...typical stereotypes😃

no sumann - ahaana means ray of sunlight so sunshine - ahaana...

the reincarnation thing was fab!! adil and ahaana ne voh sapna dekha joh hum bhi kabhi dekhte the...shravan ki sumo..Sumo ka shravan😭

thanks for the PM
love
arpi

thank you finally aisa OS jo tum padh saki 😆 warna mere disclaimers to...

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Talk to me about addiction. Atleast you have a reason, you log in coz you write . Mera toh scene bada kharaab hai 😆😆😆

Did DH catch you? 😲 I guess you work together. And If thats the case.

Bach ke rehna re baba
Bach ke rehna re

Tujh pe nazar hai unki
Bach ke rehna re 🤣

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

again sorry kan pakadke, firse late aaj lagta hai mera sorry wala day hai 😆

Oyehoye ladki ye kya kar diya pure trip ko hi ek dream bana diya 👏👏

sahi jaha apane hero ko usaki heroin na mile wo dream hi ban jaye to achha hai😆😆

aur ahana haan...good one transformation sumo to ahana...yaar sach bata how you get such a beautiful ideas hats off 😊

lekin ahana ka profession change nahi kiya 😉

loved it sashtang namaskar tumchya kalpanashakti la🤗

haha i really wrote this in marathi 😆😆🤪

chalo till then take care

Luv u dear

Priti

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

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Dipuu Darling.. Yeh tumne kya kiya! Lovely! Reincarnation that too of Shravan, as Adil! Aise thoughts aate kahan se! The whole os was so engaging ke kya bataun! Koi script wale aake pakad k le jane hai tumhe! Thank you for the pm.

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