SHIVIKA SS: FOLLY - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting story. I really really want something like this to happen on show. Anika needs to leave from Shivaays life for him to realise!

Looking forward to update. Please PM me x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Great beginning
All d BST '
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Here it starts
Shivaay's redemption
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Continue soon.
Waiting eagerly for Shivika meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Rudra's Pov

I don't know how bhaiya would react after seeing Anika Bhabhi in such a state; I couldn't even warn O about it.

When I saw her sitting there gazing into oblivion, my first thought was' am I hallucinating?' But when she continued to be there even after few minutes, I was damn sure, it really was her- my Anika Bhabhi, my superman's angel sitting there.

When she left all those months back, my Superman broke to point were O and I had to take things into our hands and force him to get out of his room where he had imprisoned himself. I had never seen my bhaiya in such a vulnerable state, he keeps on blaming himself for it but it was not his fault, He was so busy in trying to protect all of us from the constant attacks and Om from the truth that he was so stressed when he came home to see what is happening. Actually all this was my folly even though being there I couldn't say or do anything for my Bhabhi ,

I was so lost in my own World to see what is happening around me, Sumo was right all along I am a duffer. If I had protected my Bhabhi she would have been with us. Speaking of Sumo, she really is an Angel yaar she was the one who supported me when I broke down seeing my bhaiya suffer, she was silently giving her support whenever I needed it and I don't even know how I am going to repay her.

But entire thing aside, first and foremost is bringing my Bhaiya and Bhabhi together.

Then I would concentrate on proposing my sumo, yaar I already miss her. If she was here, then she would have known how to bring bhaiya and bhabhi together.







Thank you all for your Patience and Your precious comments. They do mean a lot.Thanks to all the silent readers too...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Chapter4:

Om's Pov

Being the artist that I am, people would expect me to give and have an eye for the minute details around me, but NO I had failed her - my friend, my Anika Bhabhi. I was the one she spoke to last before leaving Oberoi mansion and even though I was always able to sense the distress of others, I had failed to do that to one of the most important person of my life. I had failed big time, and because of my one Folly my brothers, Sahil and also the whole family has to go through absolute hell for all these months.

But was it just one folly? I find myself questioning me and always stop my thoughts before they enter into dangerous territory, but sitting here now, going towards a place where we would possibly attain our happiness back. I had no choice but to allow all those destructing thoughts to cloud my mind making me go numb.

I should have seen the truth about Tia

I should have been able to see the lies that was being said around me

I should have been able to see the pain Anika was going through

But no I failed, I made a folly due to which Shivaay had to endure so much, Rudra had to grow up all of a sudden and take care of the business. Sahil had to be separated from his sister.

I should have been more careful, I should have paid more attention. But enough is enough everything would be back to normal, I'd make sure of it.

Would really everything become normal? Would they really go back to how they were before? I still am worried about what rudra had said about Anika's condition I would have asked him if not for Shivaay coming there at that time.

But whatever it might be Shivaay and Anika had done so much for us and sacrificed so much for us. It's my time now to do my duty as a brother and a friend to them and I would do it at any cost. I would always look out for my brother's happiness

That brother who put his goals, life and everything in line for us

Who always was there for us and who always supported us even when our own parents were busy with their lives to care for us?

And this time around Omkara Singh Oberoi would be the iron wall surrounding the cocoon of my brother and his happiness.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Waiting for their meeting.
Could you pm me?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome ff
Finally Shivay realised the true value of Anika
And what happened to Anika??
Eagerly waiting for their meeting
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Great start
Shivay in redemption mode
Waiting for ir next update

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